آموزش رایگان رایتینگ آیلتس - تسک ۲ - قسمت دوم

ساختاری برجسته برای رایتینگ‌های نوع Opinion Essays

 دانلود فایل فیلم با کیفیت 720p (124 مگابایت)

دانلود فایل فیلم با کیفیت 1080p (310 مگابایت)

دانلود نسخه pdf درس دوم با قابلیت پرینت

 

امروز به بررسی اولین و پرتکرارترین نوع از سوالات آزمون آیلتس، یعنی سوالات Opinion Type می پردازیم. دو نمونه از این سوالات را در قسمت زیر خواهید دید:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

 Writing Plus

 

آیا برای این رایتینگ ها فقط به یک طرف بپردازیم و یا به دو طرف بحث باید پرداخته شود؟

آیا می توان یکطرفه نوشت و نظر کاملا موافق یا مخالف داد؟

وقتی ساختار سوال از شما می پرسد To What Extent Do You Agree or Disagree یعنی می توانید کاملا موافق یا مخالف باشید:

    I completely agree…

    I wholeheartedly agree…

    I disagree entirely…

اما نوشتن دو طرف موضوع نیز می تواند درست باشد. یعنی می توانید بگویید تا حدودی موافق و مخالف هستید:

    I agree somewhat…

    I partly disagree…

    I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement because…

بنابراین نوشتن هر دو مدل مورد قبول است. اما به دلیل اینکه داشتن یک موضع گیری پایدار برای مدل کاملا موافق/مخالف ساده تر است، پیشنهاد می شود از مدل اول استفاده کنید.

در ادامه سه سمپل برای این موضوعات مشاهده میکنید:

سمپل شماره یک:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion asserting that a lot can be inferred from the way people choose to dress. These interpretations can provide us with insights into others’ personality and cultural background. I, however, disagree with the given statement on the basis of financial constraints and mandatory social conventions.

To begin with, the main reason is that financial circumstances are a determining factor when fashion is concerned. To put it another way, regardless of one’s taste in fashion, they are compelled to keep within their budget when purchasing a garment. This in turn excludes many options from someone’s shopping list simply because they may not be able to afford it even if the item is appealing. Take designer clothes which are astronomically expensive for example; they are normally affordable for only the privileged few and not others.

Having said that, however, budget constraints are not the only causative factor in this respect. Another compelling argument against basing our judgment on one’s choice of attire as a clear indicator of their identity is that in many regions people have to conform to some established conventions. That is to say, these social norms have been around for so long that flouting them is considered the same as defying the law. A good illustration of this is clearly delineated by Islamic countries where Hijab is compulsory and not a matter of personal choice or freewill. Therefore, judging someone based on what they are wearing seems illogical and unfair.

To conclude, I personally take the view that it is ethically unacceptable to interpret one’s character or culture based on how they appear. This is mainly because our choices are usually restricted by deciding factors such as our financial status and the norm or law which may or may not be approved by all. (298 words)

 

سمپل شماره دو:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that eliminating the language barrier for expatriates is a demanding task, resulting in major difficulties in social interactions and everyday situations. Having said that, however, I completely disagree with the given assertion on the basis of some compelling reasons.

Firstly, it is beyond doubt that recent pedagogical approaches have revolutionized the way learners are taught a foreign language, thereby facilitating communication. That is, linguists and language experts nowadays place a great emphasis on fluency rather than accuracy which enables non-native speakers to convey their intended message more effortlessly. A good illustration of this paradigm shift in linguistics is the emergence of communicative language teaching methods which as the name suggests focus on getting across the meaning successfully. With this end in view, communication in a second language or a lingua franca is no longer seen as an insurmountable barrier for the people living abroad.

Secondly, modern lifestyle has minimized and even obviated the need to speak with others when carrying out daily and necessary tasks. To put it differently, it is no longer required to have face to face contact with the people in charge to get what we want. Take self-service stores which are common throughout the world for example; regardless of the language they speak, customers have the possibility to purchase their groceries and other basics without even having to talk with anyone. Therefore, even foreigners can live overseas without feeling obliged to use their linguistic abilities.

To conclude, it is my firm conviction that speaking another language apart from one’s mother tongue in a foreign country is highly unlikely to create severe problems. This is mainly because teaching techniques have improved significantly and people are no longer forced to communicate with others when receiving a service or making a purchase.

 

سمپل شماره سه:

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

These days, the government spends a large part of its budget not only on public services, but also the arts. Although I agree that it is important to spend money on public services, I do not think spending on the arts is a waste of money.

There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of the government budget on public services. First and foremost, public services are the things such as hospitals, roads and schools, and these things determine the quality of life that most of us will have. For example, if the government does not spend enough money on hospitals, the health of our society may decline. Similarly, if not enough money is spent on schools, our children may not be properly educated. Also, it will be the poor in our society that will be affected more if we do not spend enough on these things because they are the ones more dependent on such services.

However, this does not mean that the arts should be completely neglected. To begin, it is difficult for many arts institutions to generate much profit, so without some help from the government, many theatres and other such places may have to close. Moreover, the arts also have an important impact on our quality of life. Many people get great pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances so it is important that the government assists such institutions so that they can continue to provide entertainment to the public.

To sum up, there are clear benefits of ensuring a large amount of investment goes into public services as this influences the quality of life for nearly all of us. However, I do not believe spending money on the arts is a waste of money as this too provides important benefits.

 

بنابراین دو ساختار زیر برای این رایتینگ های Opinion Type پیشنهاد می شود:

Completely Agree/Disagree

    Introduction – Paraphrase Question and State Your Opinion

    Body Paragraph 1 – 1st reason why I Agree/Disagree

    Body Paragraph 2 – 2nd reason why I Agree/Disagree

    Conclusion – Restate Your Opinion and Reasons

Somewhat Agree/Disagree

    Introduction –  Paraphrase Question and State Your Opinion

    Body Paragraph 1 – State why You somewhat Agree

    Body Paragraph 2 – State why You somewhat Disagree

    Conclusion – Restate Opinion and Reasons

 

این تمرین تنها مربوط به دانشجویان دوره پلاس می باشد

 تمرین شماره ۳: برای موضوع زیر یک رایتینگ 250 کلمه ای بنویسید.

Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree or Disagree? (250 Words) 

 

حالا نوبت شماست: این تمرین را میتوانید پایین این آرتیکل کامنت بگذارید تا تصحیح شود

تمرین شماره ۴: پنج لغت زیر را بخوانید و با استفاده از یک دیکشنری سعی کنید کالوکیشن های آن را پیدا کنید. سپس جملات داده شده را طوری بنویسید که از این لغات به درستی در آنها استفاده شده باشد.

6. Detrimental (to): causing harm or damage synonym damaging

مضر (برای)

۶. درحالیکه میزان درستی از فشار اغلب مفید است، استرس تجربه شده بوسیله بیشتر افراد نه تنها از لحاظ فیزیکی بلکه ذهنی مضر است.   

 

7. Facilitate: to make it easier for a process or activity to happen

تسهیل کردن

۷. فن آوری کامپیوتری تبادل ایده ها و اطلاعات را به دلیل ارتباطی که بین افراد بوجود می آورد، تسهیل می کند.  

 

8. Serve a purpose: achieve a particular aim

به درد چیزی خوردن، فایده ای داشتن

۸. چون ورزش هیچ فایده عملی جز سرگرمی ندارد، کمتر از بسیاری از حرفه های دیگر اهمیت دارد.  

 

9. Undergo: if you undergo a change, an unpleasant experience etc, it happens to you/is done to you.

Undergo tests/surgery/treatment/a change

متحمل یا دستخوش چیزی شدن (توجه داشته باشید که این کلمه معنی منفی دارد)

۹. اگر ورزشکاری بخواهد موفق شود، او باید سالها آموزش سیستماتیک تحت قرار گیرد، چون رقابت بین افراد حرفه ای بسیار شدید است.

 

10. Employ: to use a particular object, method, skill etc in order to achieve something

بکار گرفتن (از این کلمه میتوانید به جای use استفاده کنید)

۱۰. جدای از وسایل معمول ارتباطی مانند ایمیل ها و چت روم ها، از کنفرانس راه دور نیز به صورت روزانه استفاده می شود تا ارتباطات ما را بهتر کند.

کاربرانی که در این گفتگو شرکت کرده اند

نظرات (45)

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

1. While an optimum level of stress is often helpful, experienced stress by most of the people is not only detrimental physically but also mentally
2. Computer technologies facilitate sharing ideas and information for the connection it creates...

1. While an optimum level of stress is often helpful, experienced stress by most of the people is not only detrimental physically but also mentally
2. Computer technologies facilitate sharing ideas and information for the connection it creates between people individuals.
3. since sport does not serve any practical purpose but fun, it is less important than many other professions.
4. If an athlete wants to succeed, he must undergo systematic education for years as the competition among professionals is very keen
5. Apart from common communication means such as emails and chatrooms, remote conference is also employed daily to improve our communication
5.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام. جمله سازی ها اگر اینجا کامنت بشن تصحیح میشن؟ یا این امکان فقط برای کسانی هست که پلاس ثبت نام کردن؟

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام ،خیلیییی عالیی ،ممنووون ازتون

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

While the right amount of pressure is often beneficial, experienced stress in most individuals is not only physically, but also mentally detrimental.

Computer technology is facilitating the transfer of ideas and information because of the...

While the right amount of pressure is often beneficial, experienced stress in most individuals is not only physically, but also mentally detrimental.

Computer technology is facilitating the transfer of ideas and information because of the connection it creates between people.

Since exercise does not serve any practical purpose other than entertainment, it is less important than many other professions.

If an athlete wants to become successful, he or she needs to undergo years of systematic training, because competition among professionals is extremely severe.

Other than typical communication devices like emails and chat rooms, long distance conference is also employed daily to enhance our communication.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام استاد روزتون بخیر، تموم شد این برنامه؟؟ استاپ شد؟

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6. Although some pressure is often beneficial, stress experienced by most people is detrimental not only physically but also mentally.
7. computer technologies facilitate exchange of ideas and data through making relationship between people.
8....

6. Although some pressure is often beneficial, stress experienced by most people is detrimental not only physically but also mentally.
7. computer technologies facilitate exchange of ideas and data through making relationship between people.
8. Sport have less importance compared with other professions because it does not serve a purpose except entertainment.
9. Should a sportsman want to succeed, they will undergo systematic training for years, due to severe competition between sports professionals.
10. apart from usual communication methods, emails and chat roomsfor instance, teleconference is employed to improve our communications.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

توی اسلایدای آخر بالای تمرینی که میدین به اشتباه نوشته شده writing task 1

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام
کسی می تونه تو تصحیح این جمله به من کمک کنه؟
through making communication between people, computer technology facilitates exchanging of ideas and information.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام
کسی می تونه تو تصحیح این جمله به من کمک کنه؟
through making communication between people, computer technology facilitates exchanging of ideas and information.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

با سلام و تشکر فراوان بابت آموزش های سخاوتمندانه تون
میخواستم خواهش کنم که جملات احتمالی که برای لغات داده شده در این قسمت در نظر گرفتین رو اگه امکانش هست در اختیارمون بذارین تا بتونیم با جواب های خودمون مقایسه کنیم
با تشکر

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6. Although the right amount of pressure seems to be useful , the stress experienced by most is detrimental not only physically but also mentally.
7.Computers facilitate the idea exchange through the relationship they make between people.
8.As...

6. Although the right amount of pressure seems to be useful , the stress experienced by most is detrimental not only physically but also mentally.
7.Computers facilitate the idea exchange through the relationship they make between people.
8.As sport serve no practical purpose except entertainment , it matters less than other carriers.
9.If an athlete seeks to succeed ,he / she must undergo years of systematic training , due to the severe competitions between the professionals.
10.
Apart from the usual means of communication such as emails and chatrooms , telecommunications is now being employed daily to improve connections.
ساقیا لطف نمودی قدحت پر می باد.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6.Although a right amount of pressure is often beneficial, the stress experienced by most people is detrimental, not just physically but also mentally.
7.Thanks to connection it brings to people, computer technology facilitates information and...

6.Although a right amount of pressure is often beneficial, the stress experienced by most people is detrimental, not just physically but also mentally.
7.Thanks to connection it brings to people, computer technology facilitates information and ideas exchange.
8.Since sport serves no practical purpose except entertaining, it is less important than any other professions.
9.Because of the intense competition between professionals, if an athlete wants to succeed, he has to undergo systemic training for years.
10.Other than conventional communicational methods like emails and chat-rooms, teleconferencing is employed daily to improve our communication.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6. While the right amount of pressure is mostly useful, but the experienced stress by most of the people is detrimental not only to physical, but also to mentally.
7. Computer technology facilitates the exchange of information and ideas through...

6. While the right amount of pressure is mostly useful, but the experienced stress by most of the people is detrimental not only to physical, but also to mentally.
7. Computer technology facilitates the exchange of information and ideas through the connection between people.
8. Since sports does not serve a practical purpose except entertainment, it matters less than other professions.
9. if an athlete wants to succeed, he must undergo systematic training, because the competition between athletes is very tight.
10. apart from the common communication means, such as emails and chat rooms, teleconference is employing daily to improve our communications.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

اگه ممکنه ظرفیت دوره پلاس را باز کنید ممنونم

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

while an appropriate amount of pressure is usually beneficial, stress experienced by
people is not only physically but also mentally detrimental.
computer technology facilitate the transmission of concepts and data through
communication...

while an appropriate amount of pressure is usually beneficial, stress experienced by
people is not only physically but also mentally detrimental.
computer technology facilitate the transmission of concepts and data through
communication providing among people
sport serve a purpose only for entertainment so it matters less than other activities.
if an athlete wants to succeed , he should undergo systematic training for years through the highly severe competition exists among professional people.
regardless of usual conventional means such as email and chatroom virtual conferences is daily been employed to improve our communication

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

واقعا ممنون که اینقدر به ما لطف دارید، ازوقتی شمارو شناختم، معجزه ای درزندگی و کارم اتفاق افتاده، و پله های ترقی رو خیلی سریع طی کردم، هیچوقت فکر نمیکردم در دانشگاه بتونم تدریس کنم، و به افرادی که ازلحاظ اجتماعی وتحصیلی، شغلی و فرهنگی در مرتبه...

واقعا ممنون که اینقدر به ما لطف دارید، ازوقتی شمارو شناختم، معجزه ای درزندگی و کارم اتفاق افتاده، و پله های ترقی رو خیلی سریع طی کردم، هیچوقت فکر نمیکردم در دانشگاه بتونم تدریس کنم، و به افرادی که ازلحاظ اجتماعی وتحصیلی، شغلی و فرهنگی در مرتبه بالایی قرار دارند بتونم آموزش بدم، شما واقعا معجزه میکنید،،واقعا شما از الفبا تا پادشاهی زبان همراه همه هستید،،، خدا، خود شمایید

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام. استاد گفتند رایتینگ رو از نمونه نوشته های استادی استرالیایی به نام Rey برداشتند. لطفا لینک نوشته ها یا مشخصات کاملتری از ایشون بدید تا این منبع رو بتونم پیدا کنم. تشکر

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام واقعا ممنون از مطالب بسیار مفید و سودمند بیان برتر و روش فوق العاده شما استاد عزیز برای این تسک سخت
ممنون میشم ترجمه انگلیسی جملات آخر هر جلسه هم بزارید خیلی کمک کننده هستند فقط جلسه اول پاسخ داشت که فکر میکنم اخیرا اضافه شده

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Detrimental
Mostly, stress accessibility is beneficial while experienced by most of people not only physically but also mentally is detrimental.
Facilitate
Computer technology facilitate the exchanging of idea and information as a result of...

Detrimental
Mostly, stress accessibility is beneficial while experienced by most of people not only physically but also mentally is detrimental.
Facilitate
Computer technology facilitate the exchanging of idea and information as a result of created communication among people.
Serve a purpose
Sport possess fewer importance than other career because it does not serve a purpose except entertainment.
Undergo
If an athlete decided to be successful, he or her should undergo systematic training during the years because of intense competition among professionals.
Employ
Apart from conventional communication ware like Emails and chatrooms, daily remote conference would be employed to improving the connection.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6.While the right amount of pressure is often helpful, the stress experienced by most people is not only physically but also mentally detrimental.

7.Computer technology facilitates the exchange of ideas and information through the communication...

6.While the right amount of pressure is often helpful, the stress experienced by most people is not only physically but also mentally detrimental.

7.Computer technology facilitates the exchange of ideas and information through the communication it creates between people.

8.Because sport serve no practical purpose other than entertainment, it matters less than many other professions.

9.If an athlete wants to succeed, he must undergo years of systematic training, as competition between professionals is fierce.

10.Apart from the usual means of communication such as emails and chat rooms, teleconferencing is also employed on a daily basis to improve our communication.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

while accurate amount of pressure is often useful, stress is experienced by means of
most people not only is detrimental but also damages mind

computer technology will facilitate idea and information transfer because of
connection,arising...

while accurate amount of pressure is often useful, stress is experienced by means of
most people not only is detrimental but also damages mind

computer technology will facilitate idea and information transfer because of
connection,arising among people

beacause exercising serves us only entertainment,we place a premium on other activities

should an athlete undergoes systematic education,will be successful beacause of existing keen competition between professional ones

apart from well-liked social devices namely chatrooms and emails,teleconfrences are also employ improving our daily communications

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6. Although the right amount of pressure is often useful, the most people experienced stress, not just physically but also mentally is detrimental.
7. Computer technology facilitate exchange of ideas and information, because of the connection...

6. Although the right amount of pressure is often useful, the most people experienced stress, not just physically but also mentally is detrimental.
7. Computer technology facilitate exchange of ideas and information, because of the connection that it makes between people.
8. The sport is important lower than other professions, because it no practical serve a purpose except for entertainment.
9. If an athlete wants to succeed, he/she should undergo systematic training, because professional competition is very serious among the people.
10. Apart from the communication equipment such as e-mail and chat rooms, we employ teleconference is also daily to improve our communication.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

6) Although a right amount of pressure is frequently beneficial, most people's experienced stress is not only physically but also mentally detrimental.
7) The computer technology facilitate exchange of ideas and information because of providing...

6) Although a right amount of pressure is frequently beneficial, most people's experienced stress is not only physically but also mentally detrimental.
7) The computer technology facilitate exchange of ideas and information because of providing the communication among people.
The sport importance is lower than many other occupations since it does not serve any practical purpose but fun.
9) If an athlete wants to succeed, he/she should undergo the extreme systematic training since the vital among experts is so extensive.
10) Regardless of the social media such as E-mails and chat rooms, we also daily employ video conference to improve our communications
با سپاس فراوان از توجه و تلاش شما

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام به همه بیان برتری های عزیز، شما فوق العاده این، خدا خیرتون بده بدون هیچ چشم داشتی به همه کمک میکنین.
جواب تست های هر روز رو لطفا بعدش بگین که متوجه بشیم درست زدیم یا نه

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

با سلام و کلی خسته نباشید و کلی مرسی از این کار شگفت انگیزتون
میخواستم بدونم پاسخ هارو تا چه زمانی مهلت داریم ارسال کنیم؟

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

با سلام خدمت استاد محمد حسینی عزیز. ضمن تشکر از زحمات شما. سوالی داشتم درباره نوشتن پاراگراف concession در رایتینگهای نوع opinion
در کتاب Grammar secret از مجموعه IELTS Band9 (که از منابع تایید شده و معرفی شده توسط بیان برتر می باشد) تاکید شده...

با سلام خدمت استاد محمد حسینی عزیز. ضمن تشکر از زحمات شما. سوالی داشتم درباره نوشتن پاراگراف concession در رایتینگهای نوع opinion
در کتاب Grammar secret از مجموعه IELTS Band9 (که از منابع تایید شده و معرفی شده توسط بیان برتر می باشد) تاکید شده است که حتما در موقع نوشتن همچین رایتینگهایی، اعم از اینکه درباره موضوع سوال agree هستیم یا disagree ، حتما پاراگراف concession را بنویسیم چون در غیر این صورت باعث می شود که رایتینگ ما زیادی یکطرفه شود! این در حالی است که در سمپل های ارائه شده در این درس اصلا پارارگراف concession نوشته نشده است! ممنون می شوم اگر نظر خودتان را در این مورد بفرمایید.
با تشکر از حسن توجه شما

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

باسلام خدمت استاد عزیزو مجموعه فوق العاده بیان برتر ،
میخولستم ازتون خواهش کنم جای خالی برای چند نفری که متقاضی پلاس هستن باز کنید . برای من دو ماهه دیگه خیلی دیره .
ممنونتون میشیم

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام صبحبخیر ،چقدر دیر ای کاش میگفتید فرصت و ظرفیتش محدوده... حالا چی کارکنیم؟

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام و وقت بخیر
با تشکر از سخاوت و همراهیتان با کاندیداهای ایلتس
فقط خواهش داشتم بعضا باید حدود یک ماه دیگه امتحان رو شرکت کنیم اگه امکان داشته باشه طول دوره رو کاهش بدید و یا اینکه تمام جلسات رو در اختیار بگذارید چونواقعا دوره مناسبهو خیلی...

سلام و وقت بخیر
با تشکر از سخاوت و همراهیتان با کاندیداهای ایلتس
فقط خواهش داشتم بعضا باید حدود یک ماه دیگه امتحان رو شرکت کنیم اگه امکان داشته باشه طول دوره رو کاهش بدید و یا اینکه تمام جلسات رو در اختیار بگذارید چونواقعا دوره مناسبهو خیلی کاربردیاست بخصوص با صوت و لحن ارامش بخش اقای محمدحسینی که تاثیر گذاری مبحث رودو چندان میکنه ........با تشکر
فراوان

ادامه مطلب
آخرین بار در تاریخ حدود 1 سال قبل توسط Super User Admin ویرایش شد Super User
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

حجم کار زیاده و ویدیوها به ترتیب آماده میشه. طول دوره تقریبا دو ماه خواهد بود. حتما با استاد محمدحسینی در این ارتباط صحبت میکنیم

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

عذرمیخوام چه زمانی دوباره میتوانیم واسه این دوره ثبتنام کنیم؟؟ ظرفیت پرشد زود

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام احتمالا دو ماه دیگه

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

خیلی ممنون از این همه امکانات

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام، ببخشید میشه نمونه برگه رایتینگ (مشابه آزمون) رو هم برای دانلود بزارین. ممنون

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام خسته نباشید
در قسمت conclusion در خط اول در یک سری روش گفته شده که ابتدا summering the main idea انجام شود بعد نظر و اعلام کنیم ولی در روش شما گفته شد که از ابتدا قسمت conclusion نظر خود را اعلام کنیم
آیا روش اول درست نیست؟و اگر درست هست...

سلام خسته نباشید
در قسمت conclusion در خط اول در یک سری روش گفته شده که ابتدا summering the main idea انجام شود بعد نظر و اعلام کنیم ولی در روش شما گفته شد که از ابتدا قسمت conclusion نظر خود را اعلام کنیم
آیا روش اول درست نیست؟و اگر درست هست کدام یک بهتر است؟

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

فرقی نمیکنه اما به نظر منطقی تر میرسه که نظر ابتدا گفته بشه و بعد خلاصه ای از دلایل

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

جسارات بنده رو ببخشید
به نظرم تصحیح این تعداد فایل کار دشواریه و از عهده یک نفر خارج هست. کما اینکه تمرین های جلسه 2 هم به قبلی ها اضافه میشه. لطفا برای این کار از افراد شایسته دیگه هم استفاده کنید.
با تشکر

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سپاس از کامنتتون...
نگران نباشید. حتما تمرینات ارسالی به بهترین کیفیت تصحیح شده و بهتون برگردونده میشه. استادتون کیفیت تحصیح براشون بسیار اهمیت داره.

آخرین بار در تاریخ حدود 1 سال قبل توسط Super User Admin ویرایش شد Super User
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام
من هم همین مشکل دوستان رو دارم. استاد هنوز فایل هایی که براشون ارسال کردم رو مشاهده نکردن
معمولا این کار چقدر زمان می بره؟

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام وقت بخیر... به دلیل تعدد شرکت کنندگان دوره پلاس، بررسی ها رو استاد محمدحسینی به ترتیب ارسال پاسخ میدهند و تا یک حداکثر یک هفته پس از ارسال بهتون پاسخ خواهند داد

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام وقتتون بخیر و ممنون از دوره بسیار خوب و مطالب خوبی که در سایتتون برای تمام مهارت ها دارین.
من دوره پلاس ثبت نام کردم و تمارین جلسه اول به آیدی تلگرام استاد فرستادم، ولی هنوز بررسی نشده. میخواستم ببینم باید به همون جا بفرستیم یا باید با موسسه...

سلام وقتتون بخیر و ممنون از دوره بسیار خوب و مطالب خوبی که در سایتتون برای تمام مهارت ها دارین.
من دوره پلاس ثبت نام کردم و تمارین جلسه اول به آیدی تلگرام استاد فرستادم، ولی هنوز بررسی نشده. میخواستم ببینم باید به همون جا بفرستیم یا باید با موسسه تماس بگیریم؟

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام درست ارسال کردید. تعداد شرکت کنندگان زیاد است. اما تمام تمرینات ارسال شده تا حداکثر یک هفته بهتون برگردونده میشه

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام من دوره پلاس ثبت نام کردم.کجا تمارینمو بفرستم

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

آی دی تلگرام استاد محمدحسینی زیر تمام پست های کانال مشاهده میشه. به ایشون بفرستید

هیچ نظری در اینجا وجود ندارد

نظر خود را اضافه کنید.

  1. لطفا قبل از کامنت گذاشتن به پروفایل خود لاگین کنید