استفاده از ساختار the the comparitive در رایتینگ آیلتس

از ساختار گرامری

the + comparative adjective + clause + the + comparative adjective + clause

و یا

the + comparative adjective + the + comparative adjective

برای مقایسه از نوع افزایش یا کاهش متناسب به کار میرود. یعنی دو چیز به هم بستگی دارند. چند مثال:

The more expensive the hotel, the better the srvice.    

هرچی هتل گرونتر باشه، خدماتش هم بهتر است.

The sooner we leave, the earlier we will arrive.

هرچه زودتر بریم، زودتر میرسیم.

The higher you climb, the colder it gets.

هرچی بیشتر صعود کنی، هوا سردتر میشود.

 

برای کوتاهتر کردن این ساختارها، می توان کلازها (clause) را نیز حذف کرد. به عنوان مثال:

The sooner, the better.

هرچه زودتر بهتر

The less luggage you have, the better.

هرچه وسایل سفر کمتر همراه داشته باشی، بهتر

 

در این ساختار مقایسه تفضیلی the...the لغت "the" به معنی "by that much"  یا "هر چقدر" میباشد. به چند مثال دیگر دقت کنید:

 

The more I learn, the more I realize how much I don’t know.’ (Albert Einstein)

هرچه بیشتر من می آموزم، بیشتر می فهمم که چه چیزهایی را بلد نیستم.

The more books the library can make available, the more visitors it can attract.

هرچه کتابهای بیشتری را کتابخانه بتواند فراهم کند، بازدیدکنندگان بیشتری را نیز می تواند جذب کند.

According to popular belief, the more educated you are, the more you will discover about your prospects and potentials.

براساس یک نظر عمومی، هرچه سطح تحصیلاتت بالاتر باشد، درک بهتری از آینده و نقاط قوتت خواهی داشت. 

The more waste people produce, the more waste they have to cope with.

مردم هرچه زباله بیشتری تولید کنند، زباله بیشتری نیز وجود خواهد داشت که باید برایش فکری کنند.

 

 و اما جایگاه پیشنهادی این ساختار در رایتینگ های آیلتس

پیشنهاد من برای استفاده از این ساختار، در بیان دلیل یا توضیح جمله قبل است. به مثال زیر دقت کنید.

در پاراگراف زیر، من می خواستم در ارتباط با مزایای سفر به مناطق سخت پاراگرافی را بنویسیم. ابتدا با یک Topic Sentence منظور اصلی پاراگراف را که بیان مزایاست، ذکر میکنیم. بعد در جمله بعد، یکی از این مزایا را بیان کرده، توضیح می دهیم و بعد یک مثل و در ادامه، از این ساختار برای توضیح مثال ذکر شده، استفاده کرده ام. پاراگراف نیز با یک مزیت دیگر ادامه پیدا میکند.

On the plus side, the advantages for the people flocking to these spots are manifold. To begin with, learning to deal with a hostile climate or difficult circumstances enables these people to be prepared for facing demanding situations in real life. Simply put, they lay the groundwork for the emergence of many valuable attributes that can help individuals rise to a challenge.  Take patience which is an uncommon quality as an example; the more one travels to these challenging attractions, the more patient and calm they might appear in face of crises such as financial problems. People, furthermore, can gain invaluable experience and expand their horizons by leaving their comfort zone and taking new risks.

 

تمرین: فرض کنید می خواهیم در ارتباط با مزایای مطالعه تاریخ (Studying History) یک پاراگراف بنویسم. این پارگراف را که شامل دو مزیت است بنویسید و خوب ساپورت کنید. در توضیحات یا دلایل خود، سعی کنید از ساختار the the استفاده نمایید. پاراگراف های خود را در زیر این آرتیکل کامنت بگذارید تا تصحیح شود. 

 

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On the plus side, the advantages for the people studying history are manifold. To begin with, perusing past events enables these people to realize how people and societies functioned in the face of demanding situations. Simply put, reviewing past...

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?On the merit side,studying history not only is not simply matter for idle curiosity but also teaches valuable lessons based on true story. The study of history is the study of humanity, it reveals truths about the humanity condition. Bedide...

?On the merit side,studying history not only is not simply matter for idle curiosity but also teaches valuable lessons based on true story. The study of history is the study of humanity, it reveals truths about the humanity condition. Bedide this, It can put modern worlds’ problems, which seem terrifing and unsolveable,into perspective by looking back on all problems that ancient civilization faced before. So the more delveing in history,the more discovering reality and advantages of studying history.

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On the right side of studying history, the advantage for the people keen on this subject are manifold. To begin with, learning to deal with broadening somebody’s horizons enables these people to be prepared for coping with difficult circumstances...

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Manifold rewardings have been admittedly following the archelogy. Firstly, superfluous positive points can be learned by studying the history. simply put, the deeper we, if prudentially and not superficially, read the history, the more valuable...

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It is incontestable that studying history can bring about numerous advantages to individuals. First of all, one can gain invaluable knowledge of his or her own ancestors through reading historical context. That is to say, the more time is put to...

It is incontestable that studying history can bring about numerous advantages to individuals. First of all, one can gain invaluable knowledge of his or her own ancestors through reading historical context. That is to say, the more time is put to studying history related sources, the more insights can be grasped and this would lead to raising these people's awareness of what their ancestors have gone through. Furthermore, those who are willing to dedicate a significant amount of their time to obtain higher understanding of historical events, would have the possibility to be educated about the errors and wrong doings of their ancestors, thereby taking lesson from their potentially grave repercussions of their actions. In other words, the more knowledgeable these persons become, the less likely they are to take a step in the wrong direction in the face of dilemmas in their lives

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On the other hand, the advantages of studying history are manifold. To begin with, it enables
readers to be acquainted with former civilizations and their lifestyles. Simply put, they can exercise invaluable experiences inherited from their...

On the other hand, the advantages of studying history are manifold. To begin with, it enables
readers to be acquainted with former civilizations and their lifestyles. Simply put, they can exercise invaluable experiences inherited from their ancestors, avoiding their mistakes. Take the power of a united community as an example, the more a society is aware of its power, the sooner it rebels against harsh authority, opposing abuse of power.

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