رایتینگ 1 کمبریج 13 آکادمیک

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

 

رایتینگ بعدی (کمبریج 13 تست 2)

 

سمپل رایتینگ تست 1 کمبریج 13 آکادمیک - نوشته شده توسط تیم رایتینگ آیلتس بیان برتر

It is often argued that eliminating the language barrier for expatriates is a demanding task, resulting in major difficulties in social interactions and everyday situations. Having said that, however, I completely disagree with the given assertion on the basis of some compelling reasons.

 

Expatriate

فرد خارجی

Demanding task

وظیفه سخت و انرژی گیر

Result in

نتیجه دادن

Social Interactions

تعاملات اجتماعی

Having said that,

با این فرض،

Assertion

باور

On the basis of

براساس ...

Compelling Reasons

دلایل متقاعدکننده

 

Firstly, it is beyond doubt that recent pedagogical approaches have revolutionized the way learners are taught a foreign language, thereby facilitating communication. That is, linguists and language experts nowadays place a great emphasis on fluency rather than accuracy which enables non-native speakers to convey their intended message more effortlessly. A good illustration of this paradigm shift in linguistics is the emergence of communicative language teaching methods which as the name suggests focus on getting across the meaning successfully. With this end in view, communication in a second language or a lingua franca is no longer seen as an insurmountable barrier for the people living abroad.

 

To be beyond doubt

بدون شک

Pedagogical approaches

راهکارهای کلاسی

Thereby  + ing

از این رو

That is,

این بدان معناست که

Place a great emphasis on

تاکید کردن بر

Convey message

(پیامی را) منتقل کردن

Paradigm shift

تغییر انقلابی

The emergence of

ظهور...

Get across

منتقل کردن (مترادف convey)

With this end in view,

با در نظر گرفتن این مسئله

Lingua franca

زبان بین المللی

Insurmountable barrier

سد و مشکل حل نشدنی

 

Secondly, modern lifestyle has minimized and even obviated the need to speak with others when carrying out daily and necessary tasks. To put it differently, it is no longer required to have face to face contact with the people in charge to get what we want. Take self-service stores which are common throughout the world for example; regardless of the language they speak, customers have the possibility to purchase their groceries and other basics without even having to talk with anyone. Therefore, even foreigners can live overseas without feeling obliged to use their linguistic abilities.

 

Obviate the need

نیاز را برطرف کردن

Carry out

اجرا کردن

To put it differently

به عبارت دیگر

People in charge

افراد مسئول

Regardless of

بدون درنظر گرفتن

Feel obliged to

احساس نیاز کردن به ...

 

To conclude, it is my firm conviction that speaking another language apart from one’s mother tongue in a foreign country is highly unlikely to create severe problems. This is mainly because teaching techniques have improved significantly and people are no longer forced to communicate with others when receiving a service or making a purchase.

 

It is my firm conviction that

من قویا براین باورم که

Apart from

جدا از

is highly unlikely to

احتمالش خیلی ضعیف است که

Severe problems

مشکلات جدی

 

کاربرانی که در این گفتگو شرکت کرده اند

نظرات (89)

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Today a great number of people tend to move another country seeking a better job or study position. Forcing to speak a language other than mother tongue might lead to difficulties in social and practical areas. I completely agree with this issue...

Today a great number of people tend to move another country seeking a better job or study position. Forcing to speak a language other than mother tongue might lead to difficulties in social and practical areas. I completely agree with this issue and I will discuss what problems might be dealt with.
On the one hand, speaking another language fluently could be one of the most vital parts of living abroad, and can significantly affect the social life of people. If individuals fail to speak well, they will not able to make friends. Furthermore, because of being away from their family there is a high probability to experience dreadful emotional feelings like loneliness and depression.
Besides, there might be other kinds of difficulties to speak a foreign language. People may have to cope with practical problems in their workplace or universities. In professional situations, having effective communication could be a critical factor. If people became able to make conversation with others, they would have opportunities to show their abilities correctly, and strong social networks could be established by them. Having a wide range of social relationships might result in fare more success in the coming future. Moreover, due to the accommodation of daily needs, people have to go to shopping centers and other malls. If they fail to say what they want, they will deal with a great amount of trouble.

To conclusion, through living in another country, there is a need to speak a new language. People are facing some difficulties in their social, career and studying life. I strongly recommend that people should be mastered in the intended language before moving.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

عالی هست رایتیتیگ هاتون .بسیار متشکرم .فقط اگر محبت کنید نامه هم بگذارید .سپاس فراوان ???

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

خوشحالم که پسرم ، معلمان خوشتیپ و مهربان و باسوادی عین شما داره ،خدا حفظتون کنه

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

با عرض سلام و تشكر بابت كارارزشمندي كه انجام مي دهيد، ما همچنان منتظر نمونه رايتينگ هفته گذشته هستيم و همچنين موضوع رايتينگ هفته اينده، با تشكر

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

نمونه پاسخ ارسالی تیم را از کجا می توانم بهش دسترسی داشته باشم

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

While people used to communicate with through their own mother languages, recently due to increment of immigration to abroad because of different reasons they are required to be familiar more with foreign language. Contingent upon their...

While people used to communicate with through their own mother languages, recently due to increment of immigration to abroad because of different reasons they are required to be familiar more with foreign language. Contingent upon their dominance in new language they may encounter different setbacks either sonically or practically.
Undoubtedly so as to attaining desirable conditions, immigrants seeking better conditions in life, education and job are expected to be fluent enough to the language of their destination country in order to obviate myriad of problems they would face. Culture shock often is considered the first and foremost issue most of this group experience. Although the more they equip themselves with the beneficial ways to expedite their process of adapting to new culture the less they feel the same hardships., it is inevitable to eliminate all problems relating to difference in language as well as culture. Achieving desires in education, profession and communication this people try to overcome cultural or social problems which are inextricably linked to their lack of admission of new citizens belief and customs. As they attach to their previous routine socialism instead of following and adapting to new social system. Rather than mingling with new foreign community they would rather contact with people in their own social habits. Even though some show their affinities to struggle how to work out these problems throughout stronger bonding in communications it may last year’s to cope with the host country cultures which are ritually different.
When it comes to practical obstacles often afflicting immigrants ,being isolated has turned into a big challenge threaten this group. Since people especially who are less aware of enough knowledge of languages, culture and others prerequisites seldom can satisfy themselves to find appropriate job, stablish strong rapport or even purchase their basic requirements. So they suffice to short circle of friends, colleagues and ranges of neighbours. Besides, they suffer to enjoy their time to travel and follow their ambitions as they are not capable to make efficient interaction due to their lack of awareness in language. However, after a while if they make effort to benefit from extensive prevalent helpful options they can enlighten their ability to handle their such difficult problems. In fact in comparison to the past, currently these kind problems no longer seem concerning. Most of them are going to be faded as far as internet is ubiquitous. As different on line apps and software enable immigrants to solve their pitfalls if originated from their incapability in foreign languages.
To conclude, it cannot be ignored that people who choose to live in host countries may face different types of problems regarding their level of knowledge in language and culture. As it has mentioned they can overcome to discussed issues through their effective efforts to be adapted to host countries culture and languages well. The crux of the matter is that while they become aware of their weakness they are expected to apply sooner .

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

keep the number of words around 260. some sentences stray from the central topic. grammatical errors can be found

score:5.5.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

I do not copy
It has been claimed that foreign residences who have to communicate with new language can be faced with social and practical problems. I completely agree with this view for some reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
Foreign...

I do not copy
It has been claimed that foreign residences who have to communicate with new language can be faced with social and practical problems. I completely agree with this view for some reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
Foreign language would cause problematic problems for new dwellers. The main reason why new language appear such a considerable barrier is that such foreigners for almost whole shape of their communications are forced to face with their own language-problem as language is a powerful means to transfer their ideas. As a result, it would cause misunderstanding mutual contacts, if these individuals cannot speak and perceive local language leading to these people would be felt some negative senses range from embarrasses to loneliness and depression in short time.
Another reason would be practical issues which cause they cannot adapt with new situations .take finding job as an example, it is often claimed that the aim of most immigrants is economic issues, these new individuals who have problem with speaking would have to choose careers with disappointing job prospect ; it is appeared that they have to do general works which do not any professional knowledge such as a simple factory’worker in spite of their high knowledge in more cases resulting to low income and dissatisfaction of their situation in this new land.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above I believe that living in a country with new language can cause considerable problems for the newcomers.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

inaccuracies can be found. statements require further development. some sentences serve no purpose

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It is certainly true that living in overseas without any plan to research language of the host country cause serious repercussions in his or her life. I partially agree with this statement due to the fact that there are some positive and negative...

It is certainly true that living in overseas without any plan to research language of the host country cause serious repercussions in his or her life. I partially agree with this statement due to the fact that there are some positive and negative aspects about this issue.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that those people can not communicate with other people correctly. That is, having some problems, they can not accommodate their needs. A good illustration of this is if they work at the office, they will be out of their work. Some people, furthermore, are susceptible to health problems. Simply put, they may suffer from loneliness owing to lack of communication. Take a teacher as an example; the more educators can not express to students accurately, the more students deviate from conception of them.
However, the downside can not be ignored. Although not speaking a foreign language correctly, they learn very soon. To put it differently, needing to speak each other to afford their requirements, they can communicate with others quickly. For example, I saw some persons who learnt new language for two or three weeks in spite of the lack of knowledge of languages.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that living in country where I can not speak a foreign language cause some social problems and opportunity to learn it.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

the answer is under-length. weak cohesion. grammatical errors persist

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Some people move to another country in search of a better life. In my opinion if a person program to migrate to a special country then it is almost certain that he or she will prepare to learn host language in advance, otherwise, they will...

Some people move to another country in search of a better life. In my opinion if a person program to migrate to a special country then it is almost certain that he or she will prepare to learn host language in advance, otherwise, they will encounter several predicaments.

To begin with, there are many disasters caused by living abroad, especially when a person forced to learn a new language. Yet, the clearest one is cultural shocking for migrant, if it is a danger it is because of the fact that it is hard to accept and tolerate other opinions, particularly when people previously possess a root culture. For example, in many traditional societies, people care much about proper communications with their families, while, nowadays, in many modern countries this interaction get a week and it is normal to live lonely and visit your relatives just once or twice a year. So, when a person immigrates to these countries they will suffer from this issue.

Moreover, a second problem related to living in foreign countries and necessitate of mastering a second language is that people in the host country may face practical issues. for distance, when several refugees went to European countries they were not aware of some important roles like driving in pavement which every citizen must obey and these breaking roles caused a confliction atmosphere between all dwellers, every language, furthermore, has a culture attached to it, so it is really necessary to teach those people to respect the host custom in order to achieve a peaceful lifestyle.

In conclusion, I would argue that cultural shocking for migrants and observing some breaking rules for host societies can be some practical and social problems related to immigration which people should learn another language. Unless appropriate action is taken they will see their dire consequences.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

some parts are written with low precision. you need to be more specific when presenting your reasons. grammatical errors

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Of those elements that bear considerable influence on people’s lives, especially these days in which lodging in faraway places has received more currency than used to do, one of the most influential is language. Although immigration into a...

Of those elements that bear considerable influence on people’s lives, especially these days in which lodging in faraway places has received more currency than used to do, one of the most influential is language. Although immigration into a country, where a new and strange language spoken, be deemed to carry disturbing social and practical implications, I am not in complete accord with the given statement. The following reasons can justify this view.
There are a wide array of the cogent arguments on how living abroad could exert disastrous impacts on society. What is essential in the immigration is the language knowledge of the adopted country. If the absence of this knowledge is outstanding, it will leave no doubt that interaction among individuals will be on the blink of disruption. For instance, an English driver, when driving in one of the bustling Japan streets_ due to lack of Japanese literacy fail to read singes_ and enters the street blocked in order to repair. Is it possible to illustrate what will happen? Even because of misunderstanding, police might consider it as a terrorist attack. It, over time, would instill reliable feeling into society, and weaken social fabric.
Instead of cited issues, by comparison, my perspective is if there is this vital communication tool (common language), settling in abroad will be not only without difficulties but also fruitful. First and foremost, thanks to this skill, all of the tensions originated from misunderstandings would be ease. It will enable foreigners to be more sociable and talkative rather than isolated. Additionally, this development could provide the golden opportunity for them to learn more about the new culture from religious rites to the type of food. This will assist the aligners to assimilate into the society as soon as possible. Finally, it is far more likely by these achievements new arrivals possessing needed competence would be capable of being put on the fast scheme and climb up the success ladder in the competitive job market. Personally and sociable, Thus, it is lucrative.
Based on the points outlined above, owing to the lack of common language immigrates can put society on the verge of insurmountable problems. I, however, firmly reaffirm, by the eradication of this stumbling block, people and community alike are prosperous. In fact, the more people know languages, the more society benefits.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

weak coherence and errors in structures have reduced comprehension significantly. some points need more development. poor diction

score:5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

While people used to lived in themselves mother country, the recent decades has seen lots of immigration to another country which can cause various social and practical problems because of being different language of that country with mother...

While people used to lived in themselves mother country, the recent decades has seen lots of immigration to another country which can cause various social and practical problems because of being different language of that country with mother tounge. However, it seems these problems are not serious, and there are sensible solutions for them.
First of all, before immigration to another country, it should be earned information about speaking language in destination country and daily idioms. This can be easily done with a little exploration  in lots of sites and weblogs. Furthermore, these days fortunatelly exist various mobile applications can help in learning another language or even translate online between two different languages. Last year I went  to China for holiday, and although I never had learned Chinease, with using an application installed on my smart phone, I could conveniently communicate with Chineasians. Moreover, todays English is became an international speaking language and in many countries there are English courses in schools and English may be second language for people.

Beside of this, these days with kind of internet, every one can be familiar with another country in various fields related to immigration and daily affairs, especially social culture, citizen rules and traditions. In addition, becase of tourist attraction goals, governments websites provide lots of information that probably is useful for immigrants.
In conclusion, it seems social problems and speaking language for new incomers to a country can be easily eliminated via exploring in  internet and taking part in second language courses or using related applications, respectively.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

frequent grammatical errors with weak cohesion in most sentences

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Living abroad has always been challenging for individuals. Although the lack of ability to speak properly might create some difficulties in practical issues, I disagree that it would lead to any sort of serious problems in social matters.
As far...

Living abroad has always been challenging for individuals. Although the lack of ability to speak properly might create some difficulties in practical issues, I disagree that it would lead to any sort of serious problems in social matters.
As far as extreme social problems are concerned, they are likely to be prevented via respect and obedience. It means, if immigrants were aware of the nations’ cultural norms and their fabric of society, never would they face any problem if respecting them. To illustrate, Muslims living in Europe would be never objectors to drinking alcoholic beverages in public as they know this is something traditional in those countries. Furthermore, if citizens, including natives and immigrants, obey the regulations, nobody might be ever faced with a major problem. Hence, avoiding serious problematic issues would not necessarily entail speaking a foreign language properly.
Social problems apart, the practical ones, however, are different. It appears that to avoid such practical problems as bank related issues or political matters individuals in fact need to know the official language of the country; otherwise, they may have some trouble in terms of their financial transactions, especially when it comes to loan some money from banks and have to sign a pile of official documents without being able to study them due to the lack of the linguistic skills. Moreover, joining in political events like presidential elections, understanding the candidates’ language would be paramount for one who wants to vote. Indeed, a good understanding of candidates’ language and consequently their opinions would lead to better choice of a candidate.
In conclusion, although having problem in using a language might cause some misunderstandings and troubles in practical issues for immigrants, major social problems would have nothing to do with language if everybody followed the laws and codes of conduct of a society.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

mechanical use of some structures. some parts have potential for further development. use topic based terms more

score:6

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_کپی_نمی‌کنم
Since people have been traveling to various countries for work or study or any purposes, they can be faced with challenges. One of the most notable ones is language barriers. While some people feel that language difficulties could...

#من_کپی_نمی‌کنم
Since people have been traveling to various countries for work or study or any purposes, they can be faced with challenges. One of the most notable ones is language barriers. While some people feel that language difficulties could not contribute to social and practical problems, from my perspective speaking in a foreign language can be accountable for some of the social and practical issues. To begin with, opponents of the latter idea maintain that connecting with other people in an external society does not need specific speaking skill. They believe that using gestures and paper painting, which had been used by our ancestors is compelling evidence that humans can socialize without speaking. Furthermore, they assert that the appropriate substitute for people to transfer they thoughts and words is painting. This idea is stem from speechless individuals who are presenting their notion via painting and drawing. All of the above demonstrates that foreign language could not hamper socializing.
On the other side, although some opine that language barrier is a trifling matter, I believed that speaking in a foreign language is a necessary factor to binding with other as well as seizing senior job position in working are. This is to say, employers are willing to recruit employees that can comprehend tasks and orders appropriately, and this practice needs adequate knowledge of the language. Thus, individuals lacking proficiency in speaking a foreign language squander a large number of job positions. Besides, international communities and are reluctant to network with this type of foreigners. As a result, weaken language skills results in keeping individuals at arm's length from other.
In conclusion, it is widely acknowledged that speaking in a foreign language can contribute to dire social and pragmatic problem which is possible to result in severe consequences.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

take paragraphing into account. errors in word forms. and verb tense.

score:6

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_کپی_نمی‌کنم
Leaving your country towards a new destination is a challenging process. One should make huge effort to adapt physically and mentally to the new environment. The major challenge people face upon entering a new country is the...

#من_کپی_نمی‌کنم
Leaving your country towards a new destination is a challenging process. One should make huge effort to adapt physically and mentally to the new environment. The major challenge people face upon entering a new country is the lingual difference, hindering their ability to communicate effectively. The problem gets worse when you are in a not-so-good situation. For example, when looking for a restroom or trying to find an address, your high stress level acts as a barrier, preventing you from fully understanding people’s meanings.
Even the basic daily encounters take a huge amount of time and effort. Since people are used to thinking in their mother tongues, at least four rounds of translation should take place in one’s mind to have a short conversation. You might choose to show your point through gestures and body language. However, in doing so, you should beware of the controversial meanings some gestures indicate. For example, in some countries, a simple thumbs-up is taken as a curse.
Besides, it is a great comfort to see lots of people around that speak in the same language as you. The familiar tone gives you a sense of security and belonging.
To conclude, I agree with the above statement to great extent. However, there are lots of tools and techniques used to fill the lingual gap, among which, body language is of great value. In addition, most people develop some degree of empathy towards a person who speaks in another language, trying their best to make him/her feel like home.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

try not to introduce new ideas in the concluding part and stay on the main topic . most sentences are error free, and ideas are relevant

score:6.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It is feasible that we are faced with some problems if we want to live in another country with a foreign language. although living in country with different language might be bring significant positive change in our life, there are hard...

It is feasible that we are faced with some problems if we want to live in another country with a foreign language. although living in country with different language might be bring significant positive change in our life, there are hard challenging for who want to live in there.
With living in diverse place is provided context for progress. Many of people demand facilities education and job opportunities for flourish and meet their need. in other word, living in advanced country not only trigger a better life but also the future likely will be guarantee.
By contrast, Lack of acquaintance with culture of the country cause social problems. maybe a especial action in our culture possess a proper meaning and bring about praise , while in another country if you fulfill it, there is likelihood of punishment by local people. Likewise, we should try to adopt the new language and culture on the ground that after a while the circumstance of life will be hard for us and we should leave that country because we failed to adopt new culture.
Another important issue is living in different country can lead to we lost our job. sometimes we need to communicate with cooperators to solve problems but we fail to do it on owing to a unsuitable communication. moreover, job prospect is one of our goal but poor communication it endanger.
Therefore, I agree that for living in another country we should ready for diverse problems and being these difficulties are inevitable.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

do not get affected by your mother tongue. poor diction, lack of coherence in some sentences

score:5.5.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Living in a country whose people speak a different language than yours, may cause some problems in some specific cases but I can't agree with this statement in all aspects.
Generally, it is thought that if a learner of a language intends to...

Living in a country whose people speak a different language than yours, may cause some problems in some specific cases but I can't agree with this statement in all aspects.
Generally, it is thought that if a learner of a language intends to improve his or her skills for that language, he needs to be in touch with people speaking it as their native language.
So living in a country with your target language can be technically useful and productive. Furthermore, when you are able to hear the words and verbs from a native speaker and observe the use of them in everyday lives of the people, it affects your skills considerably. I believe that it gets so much easier to learn a language when you have to communicate with natives. There will be some practical problems for sure but they are going to fade away as soon as you come to know the people around you and have real conversations with them. Above all of this, a person who is going to live in another country with a whole different language, needs to know the primary principles and necessarily, the alphabet of the language. This helps him/her get accustomed to the environment better and easier. All things considered, when you are forced to live in a foreign language speaking country, you can use it as way to improve your abilities in speaking and understanding another language than yours.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

the response is under-length. take paragraphing into account. some parts have not been sufficiently developed

score:5.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_كپي_نميكنم

In this day and ages some people emigrate and living in other countries, either willingly or unwillingly, so ability of speak in their national language is necessary for living in these countries. Some people believe that this...

#من_كپي_نميكنم

In this day and ages some people emigrate and living in other countries, either willingly or unwillingly, so ability of speak in their national language is necessary for living in these countries. Some people believe that this necessity can effect on their social life and face them with applied problems.
At first, I agree with this attitude in short term especially at the beginning of living in other countries, at this time your confidence to speak is less than before when you living in your motherland so it can face you with some problems to make friends. People think you are an introverted person and you seem shy.
It affects your social life and makes weak social relationships also make you sad and depressed. Social communication is a need in human lives.
Misunderstanding is another problem can be happened. Spoken language is different with formal language, you have to use correct phrases, adverbs, idiom and so forth in your sentences otherwise may cause misgiving. Most people can’t make it and they can’t distinguish its difference at the beginning of life in another country.
In a nut shell, whether we like or not speaking plays an important role to establish communication so we should improve our language skills before migration.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

your essay is under-length. off-topic statements can be seen. grammatical errors

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Living in other country that you have to speak foreign language has many advantages and of course disadvantages, and for solving that you must hardwork over and over, but in my opinion positive points much more important to negative points.
On...

Living in other country that you have to speak foreign language has many advantages and of course disadvantages, and for solving that you must hardwork over and over, but in my opinion positive points much more important to negative points.
On one hand, when you decide to live on foreign country there are many opportunities that you can make progress in your job, observing the thechnological advancement and use it also, make contact with other people with different language helps you to improve your language, it helps to find better job and home and things like that, familiar with new traditions is the other good point for living on different country, you can see the beautiful places and enjoy that.
On the other hand, you confront with many problems that make hard living there, first of all you are far from your family which is most important problem, you are sad and this affects on ability and efficiency, second problem is language, when you can’t communicate with other people you will have many problems to find better place for living or open the new account in the bank or buy a everything that you need it, third factor is traditions, you don’t know many things about their traditions and it creats many problems for you, finally money and your expence and currency exchange rate can create many negative points on your life.
From what has been discussed above living in other country with different language has many positive and negative point, but the good points are much more important than bad points, the world is being changed to village world and people have to match with, we must have ability to make communicate with global community and use the opportunities for making progress.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

very limited range of lexical. statements have not been sufficiently supported. grammatical errors

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It is vividly clear how challenging problem, accommodating in a nonnative country is. Although many are inclining to be resident in another country in order to learn a foreign language or bearing other reasons, they would be satisfied by; this...

It is vividly clear how challenging problem, accommodating in a nonnative country is. Although many are inclining to be resident in another country in order to learn a foreign language or bearing other reasons, they would be satisfied by; this trend is bound to get some drawbacks resulted in terms of sociable relations as well as cultural problems. I do agree with this matter because of some factors, being asserted in the following essay.
Firstly, hardly are found people to be compatible with native inhabitants. As a matter of fact when individuals are about to live in a foreign country, what might be happening as the most obstacle is how they to interact with the people of that region; believe it or not it is vulnerable. Rarely does anybody could cope with the new situation to communicate with the members of society.
Secondly another factor bearing such the importance to imply is just not to be able to talk that foreign language as the something might be resulting in practical experiences. Duo to the fact that learning this very language, native people are talking to, has much of a vital role to bear a better interaction compared with they used to imply in their country; for instance find a proper job abroad could be done by a good relation otherwise it won’t be clear where this trend would be heading as well as it is more likely to lead to a predicament matter.
In brief, it could be said that living in a place where you have been obligated to speak non mother tongue sounds to some extent fantastic; however it could be resulting in bad consequences such as incompatibility as well as hardly could they interact with native folks.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

over-use of some structures mechanically. ideas lack development. minor errors

score:5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It appears that dwelling in a foreign country result in spatial kinds of problems such as social problems and practical problems.From my experiences and my observations i should say i extremely agree with this statment.

From the social...

It appears that dwelling in a foreign country result in spatial kinds of problems such as social problems and practical problems.From my experiences and my observations i should say i extremely agree with this statment.

From the social side,firstly living as a foreigner may brings up cultural diffrences.For instance may one tend to marriage but it is feasible that values of hasband and wife selection be divergent among a foreigner and a native.As well job values are a main issues wich a foreigner would comes across into it. for instance americans are not concern regarding official wearing but britishes consider it and if one doesnt know it some issues might be exist for him or her.And eventualy some rights may exclusion foreigners.For instance a foreigner is not able participate in an election as president candidate.

From the practical side, firstly a foreigner can not tap into language just like a native and it brings up some difficulties for him or her.For instance more often than not now words Pronunciation are wrong.consider what would be happened if your black neighbor hears the phrase of "hello nigger" rather "hello neighbor" mistakenly? As well a large amount of language usages are dependence on cultural unconscious of a nation.Namely there are a lots of radical values entrenching an particular usage of a word similary if a foreigner doesnt live in another country for a long time he or she would not able to use language just like natives.The simplest example is collocations being an arrangementof words being used by natives as well as are capable of identify which foreigner use language such as a native?

To sum up,because of reasons being mentioned above i am exterimly agree that living in a country not being mother land cause people come across into an arry of difficulties having eather social aa well as practical aspects.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

sentences lack coherence with poor diction. errors in sentence and word forms

score:5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_کپی_نمیکنم

Linving in a country where a person has to speak foreign language causes some critical problems which are closely tied to one's social status.
On the suface, it is common knowledge that being abroad for a long time is a brilliant...

#من_کپی_نمیکنم

Linving in a country where a person has to speak foreign language causes some critical problems which are closely tied to one's social status.
On the suface, it is common knowledge that being abroad for a long time is a brilliant opportunity to chase dreams, regardless of any concern. But some practical researches have said something in contrast to what majority of people think.
Socialogists assume that the major problem which one encounters there, is social aloneness. This terrible issue occurs at the begining of the immigration thanks to some outlandish customes and also being far-fetched from family and friends. Some other disease happens due to this but they are not as dramatic as this one. Hence they are not mentioned here.
Eventually, with that main problem in mind, immigration has some advantages such as new experiences. So It is better to consider a subject by its both profits and drawbacks.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

your writing is under-length . the key parts have not been addressed sufficiently.

score:4.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

The recent decades have seen a rise in number of people who immigrate to another country. It is sometimes thought that immigrants experience various problems socially and practically that root at speaking skill to a foreign language. I hold the...

The recent decades have seen a rise in number of people who immigrate to another country. It is sometimes thought that immigrants experience various problems socially and practically that root at speaking skill to a foreign language. I hold the idea that root of many challenges is language differences.
There can be found a plenty of problems about living in a foreign country if immigrants do not able to communicate others. One of the most important challenges is social issues. Not having sufficient knowledge about country’s language where move there affect the kind of relationship them to native residents. This gradually causes sense of aloneness and finally depression. This results are confirmed by many psychologists among immigrant to Canada and United States.
Another point that could be mentioned is in educational area taken into account an important practical problem. The low level of fluency of students who attend university taught to foreign language effectively affect their understanding and knowledge. Therefore, they tend to not find a job with high salary in a competitive market. Thus immigration could not undergo a considerable change their lives.
In conclusion, considering both problems, I am of opinion that lack of language skill causes many problems for immigrants.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

your essay is under-length. ideas should be expanded, minor errors

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

The phenomenon which it is the foreign language in the oversea become a dilemma and make harder social lives and functional difficulties. I completely would side with this view via rational justification that going to mention throughout the...

The phenomenon which it is the foreign language in the oversea become a dilemma and make harder social lives and functional difficulties. I completely would side with this view via rational justification that going to mention throughout the essay.

From my standpoint, There are have been two principal explanation that why the strange language in the other nations can play a vital role for new comer’s lives. Firstly, if the people with less developed language go abroad, not only cannot have an impressive attraction but also maybe could that local one going wrong by means of alternative definition. in France, for example, just being spoken France and even advanced people in the English faced with problems in the daily routine .secendlly, the rate of job seeking to diminish then bring about life expectancy declined for such aspect.


This angle of matter argued that for monolingual person opened new doors toward more employment opportunities. simply put, international persons in the foreign nations being compared with the local citizen or with all newcomers, by no means, the ones with expert language heighten chances to find the high level of the job by expert language. On the other hand, children in the school age, in fact, have to tough second- language before schooling, otherwise, they fail in their lessons or even can be infused for children’s passion to carry out education in the future.

To sum up, the considering points above mentioned, the most rational justification can be drawn is that language barrier have a more downside rather than upsides that some earlier measure before traveling should be taken for fruitful results and improving life's standard in the new countries

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

errors even in structuring the most basic sentences. poor coherence. improve your accuracy

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_کپی_نمیکنم

Being in a country where you have to contact locals in any other language than your mother-tongue, always contain an various array of inconveniences. I, personally, believe that this is the biggest challenge to all the...

#من_کپی_نمیکنم

Being in a country where you have to contact locals in any other language than your mother-tongue, always contain an various array of inconveniences. I, personally, believe that this is the biggest challenge to all the newly-entered people to a new place.

Speaking out of experience, making friends or getting a major part to play in any group such as group of classmates or coworkers need to pose high level of the majority’s language. In other words, you, as a new member of a group in a new country should interact with others, and language is the main means of communication. The bid issues are slangs and idioms as well as prevalent jokes. Imagine how could it be awful, when you can not perceive why others are laughing or when you are not be able to get the meaning of some idioms using by natives.

Another problem, even for natives, is formal correspondence; It should be direct, polite, short and error-free in terms of spelling. Having lived and studied in my homeland since I was born, I still have major problem in formal letters let alone the letters in a foreign language. Many newly-arrived people have bunch of problems in this regard, there are some institutions where skillful agents are willing to give a hand so as to write formal letters in exchange for money, though.

All in all, above mentioned issues are just some simple examples of wide range of challenges to be struggled with while using a new language. That’s why I extremely agree that language is the top rank in the immigrants’ list of concerns.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

ideas are relevant but they lack focus. in some parts cohesion has been maintained mechanically. minor errors

score:6

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It is a highly debatable issue that immigrants who live in foreign countries with non-native language would face some practical and social troubles. Although I understand that some language barrier problems can be tackled by passing time, I...

It is a highly debatable issue that immigrants who live in foreign countries with non-native language would face some practical and social troubles. Although I understand that some language barrier problems can be tackled by passing time, I completely agree with this assertion.
On the one hand, some social problems can be mainly attributed to new language. First and most importantly, It is widely acceptable that language can affect our communication skills, which impact on both our daily activities and social behaviors. By the way of illustration, consider the role of language in shopping. If people are not able to convey their basic needs in foreign society, they are less likely to survive. Moreover, some immigrants would have difficulties meeting new people, making new friends, and participating in social activities.
On the other hand, living abroad can lead to several practical problems. The most noticeable difficulty facing foreigners appears in job market. To explain more, Immigrants seeking stable jobs might find it difficult to be prosperous in the selection process if they are not able to have effective interview with manager. On the contrary, there are some people who have been successful in the first stage, but they are faced with other problems at workplace. Some workers, for example, are not able to answer client’s enquiries , which has long-term negative effect on reputation of company. Furthermore, overseas students attending international universities have some problems with foreign language. It means that different subjects being taught by tutors with strong accent would be understandable for the vast majority of students, which has adverse effect on their academic outcome.
To conclude, it seems to me that there are various social and practical problems facing immigrant in host countries due to language barrier.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

ideas lack support. try to maintain cohesion without attracting attention

score:6

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Relocation to another country and being far away from motherland country leads to some difficulties such as practical problems. In my opinion, while immigrants may be faced with the dilemma of living in foreign country, some opportunities taken...

Relocation to another country and being far away from motherland country leads to some difficulties such as practical problems. In my opinion, while immigrants may be faced with the dilemma of living in foreign country, some opportunities taken by resettlement could not be ignored.

Language barriers is the primary obstacles in the path of residing in the new country which can bring enormous negative effect on communicating with others and this leads to a breakdown in communication. Consequently, poor interaction would results in losing individual's self-esteem and self-confidence which could certainly followed by being prone to mental disorders such as depression.

Cultural misunderstanding is another demerit of in residence at foreign country. In other words, not being familiar to indigenous conventions, newcomers are exposed to conflict with native population particular at work, where local customs predominate, novice have to conform to a same pattern. For example, having close physical distance during the conversation is not appropriate behavior in Western country while in Asian it can be a sign of intimate relationship.
Despite the drawbacks that are mentioned above, resettling in another country could provide a land of opportunities to meet success especially for young generation in underdeveloped country since in the most of these countries, there is just a little chance to being prosperous. If the skilled and creative forces were to lose their great opportunities, they would not certainly making progress.

In conclusion, living far from homeland and resettlement in the new country pose considerable difficulties such as the language barrier as well as causing the conflict over misinterpreting. However, this could be pave the way for acquiring more success.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

there are some grammatical errors. the answer covers the key points.

score:6.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

To be as a resident where is not our country, people face wide-ranging differences like language, culture and ways of living. I completely disagree with this vantage point.
In modern day, knowing the English language, as a common language...

To be as a resident where is not our country, people face wide-ranging differences like language, culture and ways of living. I completely disagree with this vantage point.
In modern day, knowing the English language, as a common language throughout the world, facilitates to move other nations for various aims. Given the primitive skills of spoken English and of written English, people are able to settle easily in other countries. Having had enough time in the early residency periods, the individuals can not only know the new language but also have daily own social and personal life, such as a relationship with others, shopping and other equally compelling activities. In the Uk, where people live in a wide variety of cultures and of languages, the new residents do daily activities similar to the domestic residents.
Moreover, to move towards a new country is responsible for facing culture shock. By having, rather than exceptional conditions, learning ability, everyone capable to learn both new subjects, such as language or own job skills, and accept the most items in the new culture which has the main role for staying in the new country. If, although the most people do this, the emigrants failed to learn the language and the culture of the host country, they would experience a plenty of all-important problems. For example, the developed countries where have immigrated a lot of individuals from other nations regularly for the years not only have provided ranging facilities for learning the language but also have made different situations that the domestics can share their customs and cultures with the immigrants.
In conclusion, emigrating to a new country means that the emigrants meet the new different methods in their life or in their own career, while I, undoubtedly, believe that these are new things
which could be learnt easily and fast.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

some parts lack cohesion. over-use of some structures mechanically

score:6

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_کپی_نمیکنم
It has always been believed that several substantial problems can be burdened by living in foreign countries. I strongly believe that language barrier should be taken into consideration as the most crucial issue which can lead to...

#من_کپی_نمیکنم
It has always been believed that several substantial problems can be burdened by living in foreign countries. I strongly believe that language barrier should be taken into consideration as the most crucial issue which can lead to social and practical problems.

To begin with, perhaps the most dreadful issue caused by language barrier is the risk of the social isolation, meaning that the majority of people living in foreign countries, or immigrants are unable to socialize with other people, since they are utterly expected to know the language of host countries in order to communicate and convey their emotions. Moreover, this issue can lead to a vast number of detrimental diseases, such as depression and introversion which are able to undermine their interpersonal skills, or deteriorate the quality of their lives.

In addition to this, academic underperforming has always been considered as a crucial burden, particularly for children and young adults when it comes to studying in foreign countries. To commence with, it has commonly been required that students have to know and learn foreign languages due to educating in schools or universities, therefore it is inevitable that those who cannot speak or understand completely, would not be able to study and complete their courses, as we have seen, a large number of foreign students have to be give up and quit their education annually because of the lack of sufficient knowledge in speaking and also understanding foreign language. Nevertheless, this issue can be ameliorated by some measures, for instance, providing students with several pre-courses in terms of all the language skills needed for reading, writing, and listening, as we can see in some countries, authorities make an effort to subsidize the costs of these classes for those who tend to pursue their educations in other countries.

To conclude, despite a great number of definite advantages of living in foreign countries, there are several serious social, academic, and also emotional problems resulted from the hardships related to speaking another language.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

key elements have been addressed. some minor errors. most sentences are error free.

score:6.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

من_کپی_نمیکنم

Living in a country as a foreigner has many difficulties such as compatibility to their spoken language for immigrants which it can causes many problems like social and practical problems and I believe it so important and should...

من_کپی_نمیکنم

Living in a country as a foreigner has many difficulties such as compatibility to their spoken language for immigrants which it can causes many problems like social and practical problems and I believe it so important and should be considered.

People who live in a society need to communicate with other parts of the community,so they need to speak naturally to make a better relationship with people in society.First of all, they need to make friendship in order to develop more connection to improve their living condition,so if they are not able to speak fluently,it would shake their confidence and make them lonelier and more isolated.Secondly,when they are not able to communicate ,it can make serious problems in learning progress,so they are not able to talk to others in school and university and share data.Finally,some jobs are directly related to communication,so sufficient skills in speaking as a native can help people to make more advantages such as more selling records while lake of skill can causes losing client for some misunderstanding situations.

In some situation people need to express their feeling and needs clearly ,in order to avoid misunderstanding.To begin with,in some emergency calls when people need to describe problem to the police or resident doctor,they should to talk fast and clear and manage time in spoken language because it is important.for instance if they were not able to describe situation may they not receive proper help at exact time.Secondly,in some circumstances people need to negotiate about some essential contract such as talk to property service to express about detail of their favorite home and lake of ability can make problems.
To sum up,when people decide to live in a foreign country,they need to improve spoken language to avoid side-effect problems related to lake of language skills .otherwise,they may have serious difficulties in their way.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

avoid repetition,some structures are inaccurately written.improve your grammar. ideas are to the point

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من_کپی_نمیکنم
It is said that, living in foreign societies since you have to speak in other language can be problamatic which brings you social and practical troubles simultaneously.In my impression, I strongly believe that bearing this...

#من_کپی_نمیکنم
It is said that, living in foreign societies since you have to speak in other language can be problamatic which brings you social and practical troubles simultaneously.In my impression, I strongly believe that bearing this situation can be intolerable, which takes a great deal of patience that I will explain now.

On the pne hand, the most outstanding ground could be that, at the early ages of immigration, high proportion of individuals face with communication issues with natives. As they understand their saying the wrong way that results in resentment and depression in long term. For instance, there is no doubt that each country has its own ironic expressions that take time for newcomers to learn them at once.

On the other hand, a further undesirable feature might be that, in most cases, due to lack of knowing new language, immigrants would put themselves in precarious situations.Reading the instructions of consuming drugs in a wrong way may results in hospitalizing them for several days at least or it might be fatal sometimes.In addition, disobeying driving laws indeliberately would leads to harsh punishments or they might be arrested in worst case.These examples can be counted as a practical problems in my view.

I appreciate those who think completely different.However, I think life is too short to put yourself in severe conditions.

To sum up, I have this held belief that hardships of immigrations outweigh than its conveniences, as long as you become well-informed, qualified enough and know all the ins .and outs of lifestyle in other country

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

some parts do not sound natural, avoid generalizing and expand your point. grammatical errors

score:5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

live in other country have lots of problem. It is claimed that one of the most important problem in foreign countries is speak in other language and it can cause vital social troubles. I agree with this
statement. I will discuss it in the...

live in other country have lots of problem. It is claimed that one of the most important problem in foreign countries is speak in other language and it can cause vital social troubles. I agree with this
statement. I will discuss it in the following.
some people specially teenagers go abroad for education and they are not professional at foreign language and this due to they can not study well because they can not understand and recognize their languages and lessons.
This lack of ability can effect on their development and they can not achieve golden aims. For example my sister has gone to Germany and she has studied her major in German. She can not perceive their language and because of this she is not successful in that country.
In addition the other people have to go other countries because maybe they are internee and they should stay in that countries and tolerate everything which are good or bad. After some years they become citizen and they will stay there. Maybe they request negotiation for buy everything. For instance, for purchase a house they must know their laws in simple language until have great bargain. If they do not know their language , others will trick their easily. This experience can be so irritating moreover have bad impact on mind.
In conclusion , humans who lives in other countries must know their language because without this skill they can not community with other and they will encounter with so many essential problems. And I recommend them that they have good and useful plan for it.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

common errors can be found. poor coherence in some parts. limited vocabulary

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Over the past few decades, a growing number of people are leaving their home countries for various purposes. While some cynics claim that language barrier of migrants would lead to social and practical challenges, I sanguinely believe that the...

Over the past few decades, a growing number of people are leaving their home countries for various purposes. While some cynics claim that language barrier of migrants would lead to social and practical challenges, I sanguinely believe that the positive aspects of this trend should not be underestimated.
Conspicuously, one of the most complex issues associated with migrants' language barrier is communication problem. In societal level, not being well familiar with the foreign language causes a great deal of misunderstanding, which means non- native speakers fail to express their feeling and words properly. On practical level, this lack of communication skills would lead to discrimination against migrants because in many cases although they have higher technical skills, they cannot get the certain level of attention by the public. A valid illustration of this topic is the story of many migrants in Australia, USA and Canada where they have to get a low level job because of their unsatisfactory level of English.
Despite these challenges, foreigners can significantly contribute to different aspects in the host country. On a social level, host countries would benefit from the diversity, which means various views and ideas for solving the problems, which enhances the analytical thinking ability and sound decision making. On a practical level, people who come from overseas can bring their money, expertise and experiences to the host country, which substantially boost the economy.
To recapitulate, while there are some drawbacks related to living in a country with different language, the most persuasive arguments are the ones that lean toward the undeniable role of migrants in advancement of the host country. Therefore, in my view, if the native speakers support migrants, they would be able to significantly contribute to the society.

288 Words

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

sufficient precision and range of vocabulary. the second body paragraph has tendency to diverge from the main topic. some statements lack development

score:6.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Oh my god sorry I posted my essay for another subject.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Over the past few decades, a certain number of ancient languages, which are spoken by minorities, are becoming exploited. While some cynics claim that it is for the governments to survive these languages, I sanguinely believe that tax-payers'...

Over the past few decades, a certain number of ancient languages, which are spoken by minorities, are becoming exploited. While some cynics claim that it is for the governments to survive these languages, I sanguinely believe that tax-payers' contribution should not be allocated to this matter.
Conspicuously, there are a myriad of reasons behind why public money should not been spent on saving ancient languages; one of which is communication problem. It is general knowledge that thanks to the globalization people in four corners of the globe are needed to communicate with each other more than every point of time in the past. Therefore, having more language diversity cause the greater level of misunderstanding and segregation, which has not only a detrimental effect on interpersonal interactions, but also it would slow down the commercial transactions.
In addition, it is firmly believed that the world is already struggling with unprecedented number of ongoing conundrum including lack of sanitation, clean water, famine and drought in deprived countries in Africa, war in Middle East, refugees in Europe and such like. Hence, it would be quite unfair that public funding to be allocated to saving some languages, which are merely, spoken by minorities. Consequently, governments must spend citizens' contribution in appropriate way, which has direct effect on tax-payers' life and public interest.
Despite these beliefs, there are some skeptics who conjecture that governments are responsible for saving ancient languages because they are representing the old history and culture of the particular place. Having their roots in real customs and traditions of the country, many of these languages have potential to be expanded and presented to divers group of people, who have interest in history including historians and archaeologists. Beside that, saving these languages can lure many tourists from all around the globe to make them familiar with these enriched traditions and cultures.
To recapitulate although it could be valuable to maintain endangered languages, I would argue that people's money should not be spent by the governments on this issue because by advancement of communication these kind of languages are doomed to death.
348 words

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Irrelevant subject

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

سلام. تشکر میکنم که بخش تصحیح رایتینگ رو دوباره راه انداختید، سوالم اینه که نمره ها رو چه زمانی میدین؟ و آیا نتیجه رو ایمیل میکنید با پایین رایتینگ خودمون درج میکنید؟

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Living in a foreign country can couse many problems for people who have imigrated such as:if you properly understand conversation you will encounter difficults when you visit a doctor ,you can not clearly tell to doctor to diagnose your disease...

Living in a foreign country can couse many problems for people who have imigrated such as:if you properly understand conversation you will encounter difficults when you visit a doctor ,you can not clearly tell to doctor to diagnose your disease and you are having trouble.
Do not know the language in the work enviroment so that you can not communicate with your client and colleages .that is not in the long run for you.
When shopping if you donot properlly understand the characteristics of the stuff can not have a good shopping .
You cannot participate in social activities because you can not talk well and understand people 's speaches well.
After a while you will be disappointed with this disability snd you will become lonely and will be your life difficult.
این اولین متن من هست.اصلا جالب نیست ولی به کمک شما شروع کردم ...

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

at least 250 words are required. try to improve your grammar

score: 2.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Be a resident of foreign country with the language which, is not your mother-language, has some challenges. Some believe that it can caused some social issues likewise practical problmes. In my opinion, I completely agree and this essay will...

Be a resident of foreign country with the language which, is not your mother-language, has some challenges. Some believe that it can caused some social issues likewise practical problmes. In my opinion, I completely agree and this essay will discuss some reasons to explain my idea.
First of all, every countries and even every cities have their specific culture. Individuals grow up with the culture of their country and behaving according to that so, on of the most difficulties for this people is adapting with new culture. For instance, in Iran, people are so friendly with strangers and this is their culture while, in Germany, people behave so emotionless with unfamiliar persons. In this case, new arrival would suffered from this behaviour . Thus, be familiar with new culture is one of the most arguable problem in society for new residents.
Secondly,some natives do not respect to foreign people. There are some old belief for some people which, they should not trust foreigners and give them responsibility. These racists thoughts would caused some issues for new arrival for finding job. For example, in Australia, there are some restriction in some application forms for international applicators. Therefore, Domestics have some priority compared to non-domestics to hire.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree that people would faced some new issues in society such as difficulty in finding jobs and adapting with new cultures. However some believe that with living in new countries you can gain some knowledge or learn some new things and this experienced would be interesting, the problems of learning how living in new foreign country is overweigh.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

grammatical errors can be found frequently. sentences lack coherence

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It is thought that living in a foreign-speaking country is set to be potentially challenging for individuals. I completely agree with the idea that people who live in another country can smooth away obstacles and seize an opportunity.

There are...

It is thought that living in a foreign-speaking country is set to be potentially challenging for individuals. I completely agree with the idea that people who live in another country can smooth away obstacles and seize an opportunity.

There are several reasons why living in a foreign-speaking country can be refreshing. Firstly, people can excel in foreign languages over time and get into a new world. Due to the social interactions, people are more likely to set aside traditional beliefs and local prejudices as well as moving along cosmopolitanism. Secondly, some people have an innate ability to learn languages and this ability usually opens up career; they are simply willing to gain a bunch of experiences and reach a top position. Finally, it is said that according to Marshall McLuhan we are in a global village then, we are expected to be able to be fluent in that language which is not only a medium of communication but also a medium that surpasses language barriers.

I believe that members of society should reinforce the knowledge of foreign language because this allows to them to embrace diverse cultures and throw their fears away. Apart from these aspects, individuals take the opportunity to visit different places such as historic sites, unique wildlife, contemporary customs and so on. Furthermore, living in the other country can have a positive impact on the feeling of individuals' global belonging. Although people are highly likely to be faced with a wide variety of challenges, they are able to overcome all obstacles in their ways and reap the benefits of a high self-esteem.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that while living in a foreign-speaking country might overshadow another aspect of one's daily lives, it can play a vital role in gaining stability and improving the standard of living.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

the response is strong accompanied with relevant and sensible ideas.

score: over 7

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

# من كپي نمي كنم
Most of the people lived in their own countries in the past, but nowadays many of them immigrate to another country for living. I feel they have lots of problems as to speaking in a foreign language. In addition they have to do...

# من كپي نمي كنم
Most of the people lived in their own countries in the past, but nowadays many of them immigrate to another country for living. I feel they have lots of problems as to speaking in a foreign language. In addition they have to do all of their practical work and social communication with foreign language so naturally it has some following problems.

Firstly, people who immigrat to another country do not know completely about their culture and customs. Therefor they will have several sociel problems to communicelion with them. For example, they sometimes translate an idiom in their language to use in foreign language, but may be it’s usage is not correct or even be impolitely. For this
reason they have to be silent in these situations and do not use most
of things in their language in front of a new foreign peers or colleagues. In fact it is difficult for a talkative person. If him/her did not have an active communication for a long
times him/her could get a homesick.
Secondly, living in a foreign country with different language has some problems because they do not language skills perfectly. For instance when a person have some emergency situations such as accident or going to hospital he/she can not think about using foreign language to explain that event or disease exactly and it is difficult to police or doctor to realize what happened clearly, as well as, may be, if a doctor prescribed an especial remedy, they could not understand it’s interpret vividly. So they have lots of practical problems in different situations in the foreign society.
In conclusion, I believe living in abroad has not only serious social problems in communication, but also has important practical problems in their lives. So they should be earned approximately full language skills as far as they can, before they migrate.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

errors in subject and verb agreement, poor cohesion. limited range of structures with some errors

score:5

آخرین بار در تاریخ حدود 2 سال قبل توسط بورد تخصصی رایتینگ ویرایش شد بورد تخصصی رایتینگ
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من کپی نمی کنم.

Immigration to another country has increased in recent years either in legal ways or by refugee. Knowing another language is an important factor for those people who live abroad, and lake of knowledge can be frustrating.
Many...

#من کپی نمی کنم.

Immigration to another country has increased in recent years either in legal ways or by refugee. Knowing another language is an important factor for those people who live abroad, and lake of knowledge can be frustrating.
Many people decide to live the other places because of oppression and extremism in their home town, so they become refugee. It is normal that the majority of them do not know foreign languages as well as the others who were born there, or were citizen of that area. First of all, since talking is the initial way to communicate with other, they cannot make friends. Secondly, the refugees cannot have job or have to live at certain places that governments give them, so they do not relate with native people in order to raise up their connection. These reasons cause serious problem for their mind healthy.
On the other hand, people who immigrate, although, they enter to another country legally, and governments accept them after doing many filters such as having the high score in IELTS, adapting to new culture and learning many idioms, take long time. In addition, finding suitable job, and meeting other local people, need time, so, in this period, they probably suffer of weakness of their speech. For instance, one of my friends immigrated to Australia five years ago with her husband and their children. Although, they had enough knowledge in English, they just could make friends with other nations like Indian at their neighbours, then they are not very cheerful and try to improve their skill of talking.
In conclusion, switching the model of speaking to other languages, has many bad mind effects and it looks bleak many years of life.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

some parts lack cohesion. the ideas have not been sufficiently expanded. imprecise punctuation

score:5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Being as second language user can be very hard, and for person how has spoken many years in mothers tongue speaking in second language may be very tough and suffering. but with parctice they can improve it and avoid any mistake.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

At least 250 words are required.

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

In new millennium,some people emigrate to other countries for educating,living or working.Living in other country will be an arry of problems.One most of important problems is conversation with each other by their language.In this essay will...

In new millennium,some people emigrate to other countries for educating,living or working.Living in other country will be an arry of problems.One most of important problems is conversation with each other by their language.In this essay will provide cogent reasons about problems in other countries due to unknown their language.
It is a fact that essential to communicate with others is speaking.When folks inter the foreign countries they have to known about their language.It is really deapend.If you can not speak a other languages,it is more likely that ,you eill have a serious problem in your dealy life,even in simple happen.As an example ,buying a bread or rent of house.In different areas of global communication recognizing a common language removes communication barriers and increases convenience.When you do not understand other language you can make problems for yourselves and others.For instance,some years ago,we read about happning in Australia rang to her and said:your house has been burned ,but she perceive they asked her:”how are you?”she said:”thank you and by”,after ten minutes,her house burned in fire.
However,todaye English is the efficial language in the world,in contrast ,there exist many accents and pronunciation .This differences can cause serious social problems.It is abvious that all people have to learn foreign language.They need it for working connections and educates.Although ,some problems do not have special importance,I mean ,they do not negative impact on their lives.For example,when you travel ot emigrate to other contries,at the first,you will have a little problems in buying ,relation with each others and another things .After several mounths you learn new language ,if you have initial information about this ,you will updated with their accent sooner.
In conclusion,in the new world , learning foreign language is a necessity.You have to have knowledge about other language ,otherwise you will have serious problem on social and practical.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

too many inaccuracies have reduced comprehension. increase your precision

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

#من كپي نميكنم

In today’s world,immigration is much more
prevalent compared to the previous decades. Whatever the aims of migrants are,living in a country with a different language can be very challenging particularly for the illiterate and old...

#من كپي نميكنم

In today’s world,immigration is much more
prevalent compared to the previous decades. Whatever the aims of migrants are,living in a country with a different language can be very challenging particularly for the illiterate and old migrants.
To begin with,the educated and employed migrants usually encounter less social problems caused by living in a foreign country. Meaning that studying or working can create opportunities for making friends and having an active social life. In contrast,imagine an illiterate asylum seeker whose knowledge of the language spoken in his destination is very basic. How could he manage to make trustworthy friends while he can not communicate properly?Therefore,the social life of this group in a foreign country can be seriously compromised.
Moreover,it is inevitable for people to sort out different daily tasks from paying bills to visiting a doctor. The illiterate and old migrants are less likely to fulfill these jobs appropriately by themselves. For example,giving details of a heath issue can be almost impossible without knowing the doctor’s language.Therefore,this group of migrants are more likely to use an interpreter in order to make a contribution in their practical problems caused by their language limitations. Although,using an interpreter can solve most of the practical problems,it can create other issues such as confidential matters when being examined by a doctor.
In conclusion,living in a country with a foreign language can cause serious limitations on various aspects of life including social and practical aspects.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

already marked

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

In today’s world,immigration is much more prevalent compared to the previous decades. Whatever the aims of migrants are,living in a country with a different language can be very challenging particularly for the illiterate and old migrants.
To...

In today’s world,immigration is much more prevalent compared to the previous decades. Whatever the aims of migrants are,living in a country with a different language can be very challenging particularly for the illiterate and old migrants.
To begin with,the educated and employed migrants usually encounter less social problems caused by living in a foreign country. Meaning that studying or working can create opportunities for making friends and having an active social life. In contrast,imagine an illiterate asylum seeker whose knowledge of the language spoken in his destination is very basic. How could he manage to make trustworthy friends while he can not communicate properly?Therefore,the social life of this group in a foreign country can be seriously compromised.
Moreover,it is inevitable for people to sort out different daily tasks from paying bills to visiting a doctor. The illiterate and old migrants are less likely to fulfill these jobs appropriately by themselves. For example,giving details of a heath issue can be almost impossible without knowing the doctor’s language.Therefore,this group of migrants are more likely to use an interpreter in order to make a contribution in their practical problems caused by their language limitations. Although,using an interpreter can solve most of the practical problems,it can create other issues such as confidential matters when being examined by a doctor.
In conclusion,living in a country with a foreign language can cause serious limitations on various aspects of life including social and practical aspects.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

some parts tend to deviate from the main point, errors of subject and verb agreement, improper punctuation can be seen

score: 5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

When people choose to live in a foreign country, speaking to a foreign language is inevitable if they want to find a job or living better in the country. some contrasting views have been defined about this notion. some people argue that it will...

When people choose to live in a foreign country, speaking to a foreign language is inevitable if they want to find a job or living better in the country. some contrasting views have been defined about this notion. some people argue that it will bring both social and practical problems but some others do not think so. In my view, it would bring some merits and drawbacks that must be measured.

Some people who believe in problems argue that First of all, owing to cultural diversity, some words and expressions may be considered an offense in other countries. For instance, in Iran, the word "crazy" can be used as a friendly word between two friends but in other countries, the meaning of it is not suitable and can boost hostility when you are talking with you foreign friends in other countries. and it can lead to an unsuccessful connection with people for making friends in new countries. in addition when you are seeking a job, having knowledge about a foreign language play a pivotal rule in hiring. For instance, according to the study published by NYTimes in 2015 shows that if foreign workers could not speak the English language fluently after 1 years, they would lose their jobs.

although speaking English in a foreign country would lead to some problems it, can bring some merits for people. First of all, it opens up a wide range of opportunities for learning English fluently and acquisition better knowledge about new culture and languages. it also catalyzes the process of learning a new language and can help to learn faster and easier. according to the recent study, by Tehran university, learning a new language when you have to speak in a foreign country is twice faster than when you are trying to learn it in own country.

According to the above analysis, Although speaking language in other countries can lead to some problems, In my view, it will bring a wide range of merrits that cannot be denied.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

mechanical cohesion along with poor diction. limited range of structures

score:6

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Learning and speaking a foreign language is the most significant challenges of immigration. It is often argued some important issues are triggered by this challenge. I am of the opinion that it can leads to evitable problems. In this essay some...

Learning and speaking a foreign language is the most significant challenges of immigration. It is often argued some important issues are triggered by this challenge. I am of the opinion that it can leads to evitable problems. In this essay some cogent reasons will be presented in following paragraphs.

An effective connection with other members of society has had an impressive role to play in feeling content in a foreign country. In other words, when you cannot explain your idea truly, others would not understand you. Therefore it my followed you by sense of aloneness. Besides, isolation will happen and it is a recipe for disaster. A comparison between immigrants in US who can speak English very well and who can speak only necessary words, which written in an article in the firs column of The New York Times Newspaper, elaborated a rise in the rate of crimes that committing by last group.

On the other hand, the children of foreigner usually have to speak different languages with their parents and their classmates and friends. This instruction is faced them with identity crisis. It affects their treatment through their childhood. However, their future will change by this situation. For example, my close-knit friend, Amir, changed a lot after their migration to UK, while I believe that if they stay at our country he did not experience these moderations.

In conclusion, foreign language has had main issue of immigrants which I believe it can effects on their links with local people an also their children’s future.

(255 words)

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

errors in using even the most basic structures, poor coherence and progression

score:5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

Recently, immigration to a foreign country is a frequent topic of discussion. However some people tend to agree with the fact that it will cause serious social and practical challenges, I believe that the crucial role of living abroad has...

Recently, immigration to a foreign country is a frequent topic of discussion. However some people tend to agree with the fact that it will cause serious social and practical challenges, I believe that the crucial role of living abroad has recently become a controversial issue.
On the one hand, increasing the number of people who immigrate to a foreign country with cultural differences in recent years has had a financial impact on the host .For example; immigrants may take jobs where they should deal with local people. So, local habitants and foreign workforces are more economically motivation. Therefore, competition between them may contribute to providing economic incentives and filling the skill gaps.
In addition, immigration opens the door of knowledge by giving people the opportunity to see new places, meet different people and knows about food habits or might pick up a new language that makes them more confident and facilitate communication.
On the other hand, people who leave their birth place and immigrate to other countries are deprived of their cultures, traditions and language which are considered as a part of one’s identity. So, they are faced with emerging into new culture which leads to experience cultural shock by immigrants. As a result, the effect of shrinking cultural diversity are destructive, causing people to live in a simple and monotonous world and think or act in a similar ways. Furthermore, a new migrants who are separated from their friends or families in a new environment, may feeling more enormous and less constrained by social norms.
In conclusion, having considered all above point, I can conclude that however there are some social and practical problems of living in a foreign country, but I agree that it cause to more benefits.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

cohesive devices have been used with low precision, errors in word forms.

score:5.5

This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

It is true that residing in a foreign language speaking country could be a tough experience regarding communication. I agree that interacting with others in a foreign language could cause social and practical difficulties, but I also believe...

It is true that residing in a foreign language speaking country could be a tough experience regarding communication. I agree that interacting with others in a foreign language could cause social and practical difficulties, but I also believe this could be fun and somehow beneficial.

Talking in another language ,especially if you aren’t fluent enough , could cause social misunderstandings . For example , not pronouncing a word correctly can change its meaning altogether and hence confuse the listener . Some expressions on the other hand could be considered rude or too formal by the local speakers , but you can’t figure this out by just reading language books . Speaking a foreign language could also make practical problems . You might be unable to communicate your needs thoroughly, when asking for services like health care for instance . A misunderstanding by your boss could jeopardize your occupation , and dealing with a client , persuading him to purchase a product for example, can take years!


However , people usually have their funniest memories when mistaken in using a foreign language. For example I just read about a woman from abroad who had asked a company to fix her washing machine. After the ,job was done , the machine had become dirty, for which the woman had asked the engineer’s help; and gotten the answer “you have to put some ‘elbow grease’ on it” It took the poor woman a lot of time and energy looking for that magical “elbow grease “ before finding out that it means to put effort on something! Also, talking another language can challenge your mind, and be a good exercise for your neurons! It would prevent Alzheimer’s disease and keep your brain fresh and young !

In conclusion, even though understanding and making yourself understood in a foreign language could be followed by myriad problems, I think it does have some positive points too.

ادامه مطلب
This comment was minimized by the moderator on the site

inaccurate punctuation as well as poor diction in some occasions.
score:6

هیچ نظری در اینجا وجود ندارد

نظر خود را اضافه کنید.

  1. لطفا قبل از کامنت گذاشتن به پروفایل خود لاگین کنید