IELTS Cambridge 11 - Test4 - General Writing - Task2

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion asserting that a lot can be inferred from the way people choose to dress. These interpretations can provide us with insights into others’ personality and cultural background. I, however, disagree with the given statement on the basis of financial constraints and mandatory social conventions.

To begin with, the main reason is that financial circumstances are a determining factor when fashion is concerned. To put it another way, regardless of one’s taste in fashion, they are compelled to keep within their budget when purchasing a garment. This in turn excludes many options from someone’s shopping list simply because they may not be able to afford it even if the item is appealing. Take designer clothes which are astronomically expensive for example; they are normally affordable for only the privileged few and not others.

Having said that, however, budget constraints are not the only causative factor in this respect. Another compelling argument against basing our judgment on one’s choice of attire as a clear indicator of their identity is that in many regions people have to conform to some established conventions. That is to say, these social norms have been around for so long that flouting them is considered the same as defying the law. A good illustration of this is clearly delineated by Islamic countries where Hijab is compulsory and not a matter of personal choice or freewill. Therefore, judging someone based on what they are wearing seems illogical and unfair.

To conclude, I personally take the view that it is ethically unacceptable to interpret one’s character or culture based on how they appear. This is mainly because our choices are usually restricted by deciding factors such as our financial status and the norm or law which may or may not be approved by all. (298 words)

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It is sometimes argued that recognizing individual's cultural background and personality is possible through looking at the way they dress. It seems that this kind of notion is valid in most cases.

There are several reasons why it is a logical...

It is sometimes argued that recognizing individual's cultural background and personality is possible through looking at the way they dress. It seems that this kind of notion is valid in most cases.

There are several reasons why it is a logical approach to judge people based on their outfit. Firstly, many dress codes are a reliable indication of specific culture. Even though rapidly going toward globalization, we are still influenced by our family and society, which we are being part of. For example, in Iran, many religious women wear veil and scarf and beard for men can be considered as a sign of religious beliefs and faith. Secondly, in many cases, people promote a specific cause with their appearances. In the 1960s, hippies manifested their protest against many social challenges in that era with how they dress. So they advertised their culture and belief system with their look.

There is a whole social convention behind relation between people's look and their characters. Although it is regularly called pseudoscience, it has been unbelievably popular among people especially those with a tendency toward superficial matters. Nowadays it is a common practice to predict and interpret people's attitude just with the first glance. All this these preconception lead to the formation of an agreement between people making it possible to assess and anticipate people personality based on their clothing. Over time, it gradually becomes more and more precise and dependable.

Therefore, I would argue that in many cases our opponents could be examined by their outfits.

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سلام وقت بخیر با ارزوی موفقیت ه گه تمام نر برای سما ...ما همچنن منتظر شروع تمرین ها کتاب دیگه هستیم منونیم اگه هر چه زودتر شروع کنی

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سلام ،خسته نباشید
دیگه از این تمرینات نمیزارید ،یعنی یه کتاب دیگه از کمبریج ها رو اینجوری پاسخ نمیدید?

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Cultural beliefs and personality impact on choosing clothes.in addition paying attention to the style of clothing could reveal some secrets about one's personality and background.while some characterstics could be found out by this way,i believe...

Cultural beliefs and personality impact on choosing clothes.in addition paying attention to the style of clothing could reveal some secrets about one's personality and background.while some characterstics could be found out by this way,i believe that it could not be able to give us a lot information related to culture and personality.the towfold reason why i feel are as followed.
First of all, although,style of clothing has determined as an indicator of recognition one's character and culture,this indicator dose not work sufficient in these days. since,people do not tend to wear costumes which were an index of their root.in other words,individuals use garments which are not related to their past and culture.in spite of difficult conception of cultural propertise for knowing culture,clothing have still been assisting to recognize personal characters
On the other hand,some limitation influence the fashion of clothing which entaile religious as well as economical and political boundaries.As we see,people who live in religious countries have to appear in society with Hejab so judgement will not be able fair.besides, such economical and political difficulties impact on priorities.in societies where there are civil war along with absence of security and famine,clothing is last preference so colthing is simply a way to cover the body rather than to select according their interest and personality.
To conclude,i would restate that although the style of clothing could appear some culture and personal characters,due to such economic,political and religious obstacles which affect chosen clothe,clothing do not reveal a great deal of one's cultural and personal characteristics information.

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As all we know  living in the big cities forced people to face with many culturesbecause people from other areas come to study and work there so it is necessary to relate with different civilizations .therefor one of the methods to...

As all we know  living in the big cities forced people to face with many culturesbecause people from other areas come to study and work there so it is necessary to relate with different civilizations .therefor one of the methods to acquaintance their cultures and traditions is how they wear ? in the following passage we will pay attention to find about cultures and character by choosing clothes.
There are two major patterns dressing form in my country such as official and sports  also if we do not concentrate with situation we are located  in my point of view sport style is really more convenient than formal and communicating to people in sport form is more friendly and attractive than the other one .
On the other side  if we live in a cosmopolitan city realizing other people’s nationality is quiet obvious by their covering such as Japanese and Arabic people with their special clothes.
On the other hand  people jugged and respect us by wearing tidy and stylish clothes  getting away from someone caused by putting irregular and dirty clothes.
Besides speculation about person’s manner by dressing style is possible most of the time for instance  some people like to have more concentration from environment try to put on completely different and fashionable clothes .
To sum up  i am really agree with this topic that  it is not impossible to guess about person’s culture and moral characteristic by types of put on dress .

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

The possibility of prediction for people’s belief and personality according the way they are dressing ,has been controversial. I think it can be possible due to some reasons.

In terms of choosing clothes, there are some factors at play and the first one has to do whit color. it is significant to consider the taste of people. It shows the attitude towards life. For example ,dark color illustrate being mature enough where as light color shows being energetic and easy-going and maybe out going. In addition the model of clothes is another factor to select to wear. Casual clothes which people feel more comfortable when wearing, are common for pleasure time. Some people grown up believing that they are free to choose clothes without considering situation therefore it is immaturity .for instance, the style of wearing suit is appropriate for work and it makes people more principal in formal activities. Where as wearing t-shirt or other casual is often for informal places.

There is no doubt that, people’s clothes represent the custom of them. Sometimes the gap between new generation and elderly illustrate some changes would have been occurred in culture later. For instance, Indian people wearing special clothes or Arabs dressing their own . Iranian women have their model of dressing according to the regulation.

In conclusion, The way we choose our clothes has a major impact on how people describe our character and culture on condition that have a deep look on the effect of fashion .


Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

The possibility of prediction for people’s belief and personality according the way they are dressing ,has been controversial. I think it can be possible due to some reasons.

In terms of choosing clothes, there are some factors at play and the first one has to do whit color. it is significant to consider the taste of people. It shows the attitude towards life. For example ,dark color illustrate being mature enough where as light color shows being energetic and easy-going and maybe out going. In addition the model of clothes is another factor to select to wear. Casual clothes which people feel more comfortable when wearing, are common for pleasure time. Some people grown up believing that they are free to choose clothes without considering situation therefore it is immaturity .for instance, the style of wearing suit is appropriate for work and it makes people more principal in formal activities. Where as wearing t-shirt or other casual is often for informal places.

There is no doubt that, people’s clothes represent the custom of them. Sometimes the gap between new generation and elderly illustrate some changes would have been occurred in culture later. For instance, Indian people wearing special clothes or Arabs dressing their own . Iranian women have their model of dressing according to the regulation.

In conclusion, The way we choose our clothes has a major impact on how people describe our character and culture on condition that have a deep look on the effect of fashion .

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It is said that a person’s dress is the reflection of their character and culture. In my view, it is almost impossible to judge by a mien of someone; because it will be mere conjecture and it does not mean that is true. There are some elements...

It is said that a person’s dress is the reflection of their character and culture. In my view, it is almost impossible to judge by a mien of someone; because it will be mere conjecture and it does not mean that is true. There are some elements involve a person’s choice beyond their control that I will discuss in this essay.
In earlier times, when there was not the internet between people around the world, the choice of clothes mainly depended on their cultures or traditions which varies from country to another one; because the only principle to select a dress was their cultures.
Recently, However, considering the advances in technology that have revolutionized our lifestyle followed by the advent of the fashion industry; most people around the world wear roughly the same clothes. The fashion industry foists the choice of outfit on people. This trend changes year by year so, people require to opt for these brands.
Another element that I am willing to point out is government's influence on society, in some countries that there is not freedom it is distinctively different, because there is a strict rule regarding every aspect of life including attire; for example, in Iran women have to wear a hijab outside So makes it difficult to distinguish individuals from their character on their clothes' base.
To sum up, I believe that understanding one's character and culture from their outfit is impossible because of a variety of elements involves in the choice of dress Ergo, the way people dress is not necessarily the reflection of their culture or character.

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The different kinds of dressing in different parts of the world have always been impressive. Thus, when the question arise weather clothing reveal people’s character and culture or not, People seem to have divided opinions. I believe that...

The different kinds of dressing in different parts of the world have always been impressive. Thus, when the question arise weather clothing reveal people’s character and culture or not, People seem to have divided opinions. I believe that clothing does not always reflect wearer’s character for some reasons.


The first thing to note is that clothing is not always appropriate way to identify people’s culture. Compared to past generations, which clothes were chosen due to functional reasons , protecting them from the extremes of weather. People are more likely to choose comfortable and pleasant clothes regardless of their own custom and tradition. In other words traditional costumes have been marginalized by western-style suits as a result of prevalence of fashion all around the world. For example, these days Japanese are dressed like Americans.


In addition to this recently some countries are faced with harsh economic situations and their citizens are struggling making ends meet , let alone providing decent clothes.To clarify, some are dressed in inappropriate way. however, indeed they are organized people. Contrastingly, some people in fact are not organized people but since they can afford to keep up with the latest fashion , they are always dressed well. Therefore ,
judging people’s character by their outfit choice is not fair, in other words in some parts of the world people live under particular circumstances and they do not have the right to choose whatever they desire to wear because of some religious limitations or customs.


As shown above, to conclude dressing is not the right way to judge about people’s culture and character considering the fact that some sophisticated people do not much care about their clothes.

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What everyone wears and how anyone looks has some direct correlation with their characteristics and their personality in some people’s view. I am of the opinion that the way someone clothes in the society illustrates his or her culture and...

What everyone wears and how anyone looks has some direct correlation with their characteristics and their personality in some people’s view. I am of the opinion that the way someone clothes in the society illustrates his or her culture and personality. In this essay firstly we look at the impacts of various kind of wearing and then its effects on others perspective.
What we get impressed by initially is the appearance, we all face with different people in the every day’s life which know nothing about them but we can estimate a person’s features like his or her society level, career or even their perspectives throughout their wearing. For instance many people choose their clothes depending on their regional traditions or based on their religious believes in many part of Iran which make it easy to be recognized by others.
Additionally, people can be distinguished among others and nearly guessed their kind of view from their looking, as we know most of tribes or creeds have their own special clothing, for instance Arabs and Kurds have their significant costumes or youth wearing baggy style are RAP music fanatics thus have their own specific manner so anyone who seems the same can roughly be considered as one of them.
To sum up, I believe that it’s approximately possible to realize people’s characters and culture throughout their looking and their choice of clothes as it is the first and the most effective aspect on anybody’s appearance so we can rely on it most of the time when we have no background.

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It is obviously accepted, the countries possess their own wearing traditions and customs.also, Variety among their tendencies could be justified by environmental and religious inducements. Those contributing elements are bound to explain in...

It is obviously accepted, the countries possess their own wearing traditions and customs.also, Variety among their tendencies could be justified by environmental and religious inducements. Those contributing elements are bound to explain in detail, followed by my own perspective on the matter.
This is heard, personal features play a vital role to select a outfit. There Are bunch of distinct attitudes toward any dimension of the life, such as dress functions. To clarify, some style which is appreciated by a minority, contrastingly would seem kind of offensive manner in other point of view. It is strongly influenced by the one's attitude . Therefore, there is a huge gap between dressing by the sociable person and the shy

Former group of people tend to be in center of the attention also, have craving for being apparently outstanding. On the other hand, later social members scare and scape from those flashy situations.
In deed if someone Was isolated, conservative, and depressed, they would dress in dark colors. Their domestic specific trigger feelings and emotions that shap particular taste.
As well as this, each nation perpetually share common values. This principle flowing throughout the community, is basically rooted in the background, thereby has being transferred by families to the next generation.

These lessons learned shape the discipline of the decision making.
Even for primary affairs connecting to the appearance, although it seems as matters of personal taste.
As result, society members implicitly oblige to obey conventional rules besides observing social etiquette.

All in all clothes send determined messages towards audiences, even if those are unintentional. I would admittedly have to assert that,
This behavior has been created
In childhood, And are stable in character.

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It is commonly stated that the way people dress can reflect their personality and culture. I am, nonetheless, of the opinion that although this notion can be true to some extent, admittedly, over-generalization is always misleading.
It is...

It is commonly stated that the way people dress can reflect their personality and culture. I am, nonetheless, of the opinion that although this notion can be true to some extent, admittedly, over-generalization is always misleading.
It is indisputable that clothes can be viewed as a decisive factor to represent cultural identity as well as people’s tendencies. To clarify, clothing is often thought to be a key component in the culture of a country, presenting the lifestyle of people who have been living in a particular area, their customes and even their mindset as well. In eastern countries, China and Japan for instance, people tend to wear formal clothes which reflect discipline in their culture. Additionally, clothes can be a sign of people’s attitudes and manner.For instance, people in modest clothes are likely to be reluctant to follow fashion trends, likewise, reviling and flashy clothes can be an illustration of people tending to be noticeable in the community. It is, thus, obvious how cultural and mindset of people can be revealed by their choice of clothes.
This notion, however, can not be true in all cases. It is argued that people should not be judged by their appearance, and in many cases, the way people dress could be deceptive. It can be exemplified by Muslim countries in which women are inclined to wear veil due to religious reasons, while many westerners wrongly believe that this appearance can be associated with tourism. Hence, this judgment in accordance with people’s dressing can lead to dispute.
To conclude, it is felt even though clothes can be seen as a sign of culture and character of a person, it cannot be justified as the only way of judgment about people.

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In today’s societies, people have more freedom and a wider range of choices for selecting their cloths. It is generally believed that the type of clothes people wear have the ability to reflect their culture and character. My personal belief is...

In today’s societies, people have more freedom and a wider range of choices for selecting their cloths. It is generally believed that the type of clothes people wear have the ability to reflect their culture and character. My personal belief is that people’s choice of clothes is not the only factor to be taken into consideration for determining a person’s culture and character.
It has been proved by scientists according to a number of studies that, the beliefs that people have been brought-up based on have a profound impact on their choices. For instance, a person who has grown up in a religious family is not much likely to select flashy clothes. Accordingly, individuals with different personalities usually select their cloths according to their personality features. It can easily be seen that, the more a person is optimistic and happy, the more tendency they have to choose more colorful clothes.
One factor which may conflict with our judgments about people’s personalities based on their choice of clothes is the impact of peer pressures from the society and environment that they live or work in. Sometimes they lack freedom to choose their clothes and are obliged to wear specific kinds of clothes in order to obey the rules of work place or family and their wearing is not their choice.
Another major element that effects people’ choices is the cost of clothes. In some cases, they fail to afford their desired ones and have to buy and wear clothes that are not their main taste. Society members, in most cases, tend to consider a well-dressed person with expensive clothes as a good one. Admittedly, this can be a wrong judgment because people usually wear based on their financial statuses.
In way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that however, some choices in some cases can reflect the culture and character of a person when it comes to judgment to make a fair judgment other decisive elements should be taken into account.

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While people used to judge because of kind of their clothes, the recent decades have seen a fall of in the number of individuals who emphasize other people’s clothing styles. I firmly believe that judging people’s culture and character, however,...

While people used to judge because of kind of their clothes, the recent decades have seen a fall of in the number of individuals who emphasize other people’s clothing styles. I firmly believe that judging people’s culture and character, however, can be possible from their choices of clothes;for this claim several reasons can be posed.
First of all, not surprisingly type of clothes which are worn by people show their psyche conditions. Should people wear clothes that they have happy colors such as red yellow etc.it illustrates that their characters is intact. By way of illustration, in India majority of people always wear elegant hues and the figures indicate that they are the happiest individuals in the world.
In addition, not only does choice of clothes play a pivotal role in detecting persons’ characters but also it can be shown their level of earning money. When wearing smart clothes, the people have to spend money more. The UK is a good example, most of the individuals wear fancy clothing in as much as they earn more money than other countries.
Finally, wearing local clothes indicates persons’ culture. Yet the people afford so as to purchase contemporary clothing, they are inclined to wear traditional clothes. A case in point is Iranian people in country sides desire to cover local clothes despite government’s opinion. wearing local clothes for local folk, on the other hand, brings about being comfortable because they do several activities for example feeding to live stocks
To sum up, wearing any sort of clothes as well as divergent type of colors can be illustrated people’s thoughts and culture of countries in the world in spite of the fact that those people are not aware from themselves signs.

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Whether or not the style of clothing illustrates the personal trait and culture of an individual has turned into an argumentative issue. Although some people believe that clothes are the main indicator of person’s characteristics and culture,...

Whether or not the style of clothing illustrates the personal trait and culture of an individual has turned into an argumentative issue. Although some people believe that clothes are the main indicator of person’s characteristics and culture, others have the opposite idea. This essay advocate that an individual should not be judged just based on his or her clothes.
On the one hand, some costumes stem from traditions and cultures. In the other words, these clothes reflect the nationality of the person. As a case in point, Kurdish people wear traditional costumes in different occasions, ranging from wedding ceremonies to burial ones. If an individual is seen in a Kurdish costume, it will be apprehended that he or she has Kurdish custom and culture. As a result, in such cases, clothes can reflect the person’s culture.
Opponents, on the other hand, emphasize on situations that people have been forced to wear uniforms. Consider, for example, police officers wearing uniforms. Although their clothes show their jobs, they cannot reflect their personalities or cultures. For instance, some police officers are extroverted and talkative, while some ones are introverted and strict. Therefore, clothes cannot always indicate the characteristics of the person.
On the whole, both views for and against this idea that clothes are a good representative of people’s traits and cultures were argued. I personally side with the latter group who believe that the populace should not be judged from their styles and appearances.

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Most people believe clothing styles, chosen by individuals, can show their beliefs and personality traits. Whereas the choice of cloths sometimes is set to convey cultural values that are pivotal for people, they often have to wear special types...

Most people believe clothing styles, chosen by individuals, can show their beliefs and personality traits. Whereas the choice of cloths sometimes is set to convey cultural values that are pivotal for people, they often have to wear special types of clothes owing to particular situations in which they are being placed.

Attitudes of people can be recognized through their style of dressing. In other words, opinions and feelings play a crucial role in decisions about cloths. If individuals give a priority to their interests while purchasing cloths, they are very likely to enjoy high self-esteem. Recently, plenty of people, also, have been wearing the latest fashion. This represents a part of their character that ideas of their friends and colleagues surrounding them in society can be considerable for them.

Nevertheless, working in certain workplaces is bound to affect clothing. Inasmuch as every kind of clothes is not usually permitted at work, jobholders should not wear their favorite clothes. By way of illustration, employees of banks, flight attendants and workers of factories are forced to wear uniforms. Characteristic of staff cannot be understood while their cloths are considered, therefore.

Moreover, the disadvantaged do not afford to purchase their favorite clothes thanks to financial problems. Charity organizations usually tend to satisfy their requirements such as clothes and other facilities. The poor, consequently, are highly unlikely to decide their type of clothing which shows culture and character.

To sum up, although character traits of people would be a key factor influencing their choice of clothes, different circumstances make a substantial contribution to clothing.

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Due to improving in clothing industry the way people wear has undergone significant changes in recent decades. Thus, when the question arises whether clothes are able to reveal a lot about personality and culture, people have divided opinions. I...

Due to improving in clothing industry the way people wear has undergone significant changes in recent decades. Thus, when the question arises whether clothes are able to reveal a lot about personality and culture, people have divided opinions. I strongly believe that clothes potentially have the power to show a lot about individual’s culture and personality.
It is true that customs have made substantial contribution to convey culture and characteristics. Having a particular dress play a pivotal role to unify people following an idea. Meanwhile, culture diversity has been displayed by variety of clothes belonged to diverse nations. Wearing He jab, Muslim women tend to demonstrate their culture. Clothes enable Monks to show they are belonging to a certain group having especial customs and culture.
Accordingly, clothes are responsible for individual’s first impression. This indisputable rule is rooted in the fact that the human mind is influenced by visual aspects. If a person wears appropriate clothes, people are bound to be profoundly affected .numerous fundamental aspects of people’s personality could be accessible by clothes. Recently physiologists analyze people by way of their choices for wearing clothes. Decent people tend to wear clothes by which they can cover the most important part of body while sociable people do not care about that mentioned issue; People permanently wearing dark color are depressed while those who have more life expectancy wear colorful dresses.
In conclusion, clothes are highly importance .they have power to reveal people’s secrets about culture and personality as well. I hope people take this potential into consideration when they choose their clothes.

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Cultural distinction can be identified by the distinction in its apparel. Such statement has deemed as a common belief among the certain part of community. However, with the emerge of the globalization world is moving toward a unique approach of...

Cultural distinction can be identified by the distinction in its apparel. Such statement has deemed as a common belief among the certain part of community. However, with the emerge of the globalization world is moving toward a unique approach of living in which similar clothing constitutes a segment of its existence. My thoughts in some ways are at the same side with abovementioned belief. In the upcoming paragraphs I will try to state my perspective.
every community depending on the region which is situated, complies of the culture which belongs to that specific region. Therefore, every attire people dress highly nurtures the culture that is admired by every individual. which in turn leads to wearing the clothing associated to that specific region. consequently, the clothing being used by every individual to some extent is able to describe awful a lot about a person's culture and even its character. Since every person's character can forge in the culture which he or she is grown up in, therefore, I utterly agree with the fact that different attire which stems from diverse cultures can indirectly manifest its community members' characters.
In recent years, however, due to enormous achievements in terms of technology there has been an upsurge in people's interest toward globalization. As a result, trend to wear similar clothing's have been emerged. Take the all fashion trends among youth members of the society which is a testament to the fact that world is surging toward a globally similar type of clothing. Furthermore, survey among people in different regions in recent years revealed that on par with other industries, clothing has globalized which has hindered the process of distinguishing people's character from their apparel.
In conclusion, my thoughts advocate the fact that every attire we use directly or indirectly demonstrates our character and the culture we are brought up in. globalization, nevertheless, has somehow veered off the course of clothing worldwide and brought about the similar kind of clothing and resulted in difficulty in distinguishing people from every culture.

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All over the world there are a huge range of culture with special customs.Absolutely , every region has special situation and rules.From my point of perspective ,mostly people choose clothes considering various factors in mind but generally i...

All over the world there are a huge range of culture with special customs.Absolutely , every region has special situation and rules.From my point of perspective ,mostly people choose clothes considering various factors in mind but generally i feel this argument is against.
To start with ,wildly climate changes have an impressive impact on wearing.Allow me to explain for better comprehention by giving an example.Switzerland is extremely cold most of the year so the population is compelled to wear warm dark coloured clothes as compared to india where it is mostly hot with light comfort style.Furthermore,another condition such as age,rules of workplace,religious laws of country,and habits could change styles totally.Likewise,it is undeniable that workplaces throughout the world obtain uniform for both gender.Thus , it cannot illustrate someone's character.
On the other hand ,some psychologist claim that background of an individuals could be reflected by clothes she or he wearing since some poeple use clothes to tell about their ideas,prestiges and beauty.In most cases ,it is true that some people put on typical dresses even if they have freedom to choose.As everybody see,to illustrating in developed countries some kurdish or turkish men wear their customs and some moslems women use scarf with hejab.
In conclusion,based on arguments discussed above it is considerable which wearing depending on conceptions and mood but contrary to popular belief there are many reasons to reject .

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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether people’s personality and social characteristics could be demonstrated by their wearing style. In this essay, I will explain why the extractive information of one’s appearance could...

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue whether people’s personality and social characteristics could be demonstrated by their wearing style. In this essay, I will explain why the extractive information of one’s appearance could be a reliable source to identify him more.
Myriad information could be gained by looking into one’s appearance. People usually select their clothing style base on the area and the culture, in which they have grown up. Take, for instance, the variety of wearing types in different regions of a country. Obviously, by looking into one’s clothing it would be simple to guess the area, from which he is coming. In Iran, for example, either Kurdish or Turkish people have their unique style which is precisely distinguishable. In other words, considering the style, people’s original area and culture is noticeable.
Personality and other characteristic features could be understood by what people choose to wear. In fact, each character has its own pre-defined style in the society. By way of illustration, a university professor is never expected to use a gangster-style clothing as the personality of these two types of people is completely different. In addition, considering characteristic factors, the clothing type will potentially determine both mood and character. As an example, being depressed, people usually use clothes with darker colors while energetic people will mostly wear happy-color clothes.
To conclude, according to above-mentioned facts, ignoring the exceptions, I believe that people can be deeply analyzed base on what they choose to wear and how they attend the society.

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It is true that to say the way society members wear, is potentially affected by not only their personal traits but also cultural backgrounds. I urgently allege that the style selected by them is undoubtedly stemmed from more various factors which...

It is true that to say the way society members wear, is potentially affected by not only their personal traits but also cultural backgrounds. I urgently allege that the style selected by them is undoubtedly stemmed from more various factors which will be discussed in detail.
Money does not grow on trees. We are living in an unstable world where economic circumstances have always changing. Thus, individuals tend to save money rather than to spend it on garments. To clarify, a part-time teacher, who has been paid poor salary, has a compelling reason to buy clothes from second-hand stores; on the grounds that he should make his needs. Consequently, you would not be able to apprehend neither characteristic features nor his culture from the outfit.
Globalization, accordingly, has a far-reaching impact on fashion industry. The best justification is that while surfing on the Internet, an array of online-shopping websites can be found delivering a variety number of goods ranging from shoes to underwear to around the world. Ergo, an African is ludicrously wearing as exactly as European. Evidently, there is no significant sign of African culture in his style.
In many Muslim regions, men and women must obey highly strict wearing rules. In Iran, wearing catchy or flashy clothes is likely prohibited either culturally or morality; as a result a young girl who is characteristically cheerful and happy, does not feel free to choose her favorite style which is based on her personality.
Admittedly, I opine that it might not be easy and straightforward to recognize a person’s character from the outfit certainly. In this regards, owing to mentioned reasons, knowing about customs, traditions or beliefs is unrecognizable too.

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While people used to wear certain clothes to show their culture in the earlier time, this way of wearing has undergone considerable changes in the recent decades. Thus, when the question arises whether clothes are able to reveal information about...

While people used to wear certain clothes to show their culture in the earlier time, this way of wearing has undergone considerable changes in the recent decades. Thus, when the question arises whether clothes are able to reveal information about culture and personality or not, people seem to have divided opinions. I strongly believe that it is unlikely to perceive a lot about individual’s culture and characteristics.

Having an especial dress is of importance to unify some people fallowing a certain thought. This people wear particular clothes by which they demonstrate their culture and dominant ideas as well, however, it is required to launch a full-scale investigation into personality recognition. Monks and priests are two obvious examples of this group of people. Although certain clothes highlight the prominent idea, they failed to display people’s personality.
Nonetheless, it is true that people are judged by their appearance and clothes. Well-dressed people receive respect and attention much more than those who wear inappropriate dress. People, while numerous fraud happened by handsome offenders, tent to trust a person with sumptuous dress. Clothing is a key factor influencing people’s attitude and causes misjudgment. Despite some general characteristic such as having obsession and being tidy, information obtained from people’s appearance are neither amply nor reliable. Even a cursory examination reveals that poor people with low income are more likely to be generous than affluent people. The recent earthquake in Iran has reinforced the mentioned issue; people with inadequate economic condition made substantial contribution to meet the needs of injured people.
In conclusion, an extrinsic factor such as clothing never display accurate data from individual’s personality. People should be prohibited from judging in this way, for it is immoral behavior.

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It is the purpose of many psychosocial surveys and tests to reach an agreement on how it could be possible to gain a variety of information only by preference of people; however, whether we have the ability to interpret costumes in a specific way...

It is the purpose of many psychosocial surveys and tests to reach an agreement on how it could be possible to gain a variety of information only by preference of people; however, whether we have the ability to interpret costumes in a specific way is a divisive issue. This essay will argue that with the advent of human science it is easy to guess one's culture and personality.
For one thing, every culture has been researched by humanists around the globe consists of particular traditions, clothes, language, etc. To illustrate, consider a tourist travels to an African metropolis without knowing where the destination is, he can estimate very conveniently where the city is, regarding the wears, colors, hair styles which are mostly applied in these zones. So, the more we learn about a culture, the easier it could be perceive a person's clothes.
For another, it is widely accepted that clothes are supposed to be relevant to personality traits. According to the latest studies conducted into this matter, each character is likely to prefer a distinguished style in hair, clothes, behavior and so forth. However, sometimes, it has been seen some exceptions.
By means of conclusion, I believe there's being a meaningful relation between culture and character with clothes. To recap the main points, not only does it is an integral part of traditions, but also clothes are symbols of personality traits. Given this, it would be prudent if someone classified another person just with his wears.

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While some people believe that choice of cloth can be vivid emblem of culture and personality of individuals , other have oppose opinion . Both groups present compelling reasons to support their idea.
In every society, native residents wear...

While some people believe that choice of cloth can be vivid emblem of culture and personality of individuals , other have oppose opinion . Both groups present compelling reasons to support their idea.
In every society, native residents wear particular cloth since all of them have common culture ,moreover, mostly individuals with similar personality are trying to wear like their colleagues. For example, fans to encourage of favorite team in sport competition will be seen with similar clothing . For people in a region , particular cloth can be worn as nationally symbol ; in mu country traditional cloth for southern people is completely different from clothing of northern people. People with wearing clothes according to their culture and their personality , can be identified even without their id documents .
On the other hand, some people allege that choosing cloths originated by several factors . Economic factors ,the rich mostly choose better quality as their clothes which cannot be available for the poor ,thus the amount of budget exactly affect on choosing cloth .Furthermore, the recent decades have seen considerable changes in the way people wear due to clothing industry and some young people prefer fashion clothes which is advertised by the mass media, instead of suitable clothes coordinated with national culture and personality .
From my standpoint, in earlier times, it was possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes ,however, these days choosing clothes by individual is stem from diverse factors. For example, budget, globalization , advertisement, as well as , culture and personality .

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Across the history with human improvement many cultures and traditions have formed with different believes, and nobody can reject that.
Sometimes kind of clothes related in social values and cultural background
In this essay is going to discusse...

Across the history with human improvement many cultures and traditions have formed with different believes, and nobody can reject that.
Sometimes kind of clothes related in social values and cultural background
In this essay is going to discusse about the different cultures and traditions with different clothes and we must to respect to their choice and nothing tell to them.
There are many Cultural norms and social values in the world, I had better say the people tend to choose tradition or culture in their mind.
Many foctors are related in with culture and tradition such as believes and clothes and the like. Clothes one of the important factor to know the culture , in my opinion.
For example people with the same culture use the same clothes in ceremonies or funeral
Sometimes the government prefer to adopt stirict attitude towards to their people and force them to utilize special clothes. I think this method is wrong and unlike this issue had better adopt relaxed attitude towards to clothes.
From my point of view in developed countries people respect to other culture and believes and clothes as respect to their law.
From what has been discussed above one of the important factors in cultural norms is clothes, the clothes show the specific believes and traditions and we teach in different situation respect to other opinion and don’t let to other people to interfere to people’s choice about clothes. In my opinion people must to free to their choice in this matter.

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Even though globalization and its concomitants has blurred the cultural boundaries and brought dressing universality, I aver that customs can still be a reflection of one’s personality or cultural background in some specific conditions as will be...

Even though globalization and its concomitants has blurred the cultural boundaries and brought dressing universality, I aver that customs can still be a reflection of one’s personality or cultural background in some specific conditions as will be discussed in this essay.

Once people from different culture and geographical spots of the world used to wear different customs, upon emergence of international communication many of traditional clothes are now history. That is to say, the mass tend to uniform wearing style to avoid being distinguished in international occasions. For example, aiming at concealing their personality or origin of national culture of the owner, known as hindrance to make the most impression on the audience and avoid prejudgments and also to boost mutual understanding, tailored dark-colored suit along with a tie, is the most popular customs among men in many formal commercial or political meetings. The similar story is true when it comes to catchy worldwide dressing fashions that many around the globe tends to follow, regardless of their traditional dressing style or characters which make it again impossible to a make statement about their body image and self-image.

However, this is not always the case and still there are ways to illustrate peoples’ belief according to their clothes. To clarify, the new generation inclines to follow fashions to illustrate their outlook toward life. Take Punk group as an example. Their music, life style and particularly their dressing style are all symbols to show what they think about life and world as a whole. Further, in many societies traditional dresses are still dominant. In many middle-east countries, for instance, wearing long white clothes by men makes it easy for everyone to perceive their Arabic cultural background, albeit, it would be highly unlikely to distinguish them from personality perspective.

To wrap it up briefly, I acknowledge that cultural issues can be predictable though traditional customs but it is hardly recognizable to find out about the personality of individuals by means of what they have worn, unless they belong to an ideological group. Clearly, international wearing styles, whereby I believe any distinguishable feature is eliminated, are an exception for this conclusion.

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It is often argued that peoples clothes is a sign of their personality. Although I agree that appropriate clothes is so significant, I think that it is not a measurement tool for judgment about their personality.
First of all, I believe that...

It is often argued that peoples clothes is a sign of their personality. Although I agree that appropriate clothes is so significant, I think that it is not a measurement tool for judgment about their personality.
First of all, I believe that judging people from their appearance would not be a good job. Actually, maybe somebody doesn’t have enough money, but be a lettered man. Suppose a boy in the small village that has been born in a poor family and doesn’t have appropriate clothes, but is intelligent and would have a good future.
In contrast, some humans are rich but don’t pay attention a lot to their wearing. For example, Steve Jobs, the CEO of apple company almost worn a shirt in every conference. And as we know he was a most significant person in 21st century. In other words, he was a busy man with a lot of tasks, so the appearance was not a critical issue for him.
On the other hand, some culture has their special clothes. For instance, Arabs wear long white clothes and however their choice in wearing has undergone a considerable change over the centuries but it is also an inseparable part of their history and culture. By looking to an Arab man, you could just say that where is he from, but you couldnt judge him.
Finally, despite many claims and assumptions about relationship between peoples clothes and their personality, I have never seen any connection.
In conclude, I strongly believe that peoples choice for their appearance could not be a tool for judgment about their characters and personality.

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It is supposed that the way that people wear and select clothing, it is highly likely to be stemmed from personality and subculture circle in which they live. ergo, I agree with the view that choice of clothing effectively expresses cultural and...

It is supposed that the way that people wear and select clothing, it is highly likely to be stemmed from personality and subculture circle in which they live. ergo, I agree with the view that choice of clothing effectively expresses cultural and interpersonal context.

Firstly, The kind of clothes that we choose and wear are woven tightly into cultural characteristics and personality traits. Even though a large number of people tend to think that dress up is definitely associated with the privacy subject, I am inclined to notice that selection of dress, ethnicity, and personality would by no means be inseparable. For example, energetic people are bound to put on colorful garment or individuals who are belonged to the tribal community; dressed locally up due to their mores and tradition. In fact, wearing and selecting a certain garment not only helps keep them grounded in their own cultural being but also build up their collective consciousness.

Secondly, it should be noticed that choice of clothes will apparently be limited by the social existence of society as each country gain the benefit from peculiar clothes. Iran as a Moslem country can be a good example, thereby preventing people from putting on whatever it is preferred owing to the rule of Hejab. It means that women are strikingly punished if they put an unsuitable garment on. In addition, clothes styles have got dependence on class status. If individuals are members of the upper classes of society, they will undoubtedly take full advantage of diverse styles as compared to the lower classes.

In conclusion, as several society members are set to believe that clothes will be an exact sign of cultural structure and personal attributions, I also allege that personality and culture can be judged in a glimpse in such a way that people wear and select their clothes.

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Always,there has been a diversity of favors in clothing's choice among all walks of life. According to this variety,different arguments have been arose. Some people contend that the way individuals get dressed demonstrates their attitudes and...

Always,there has been a diversity of favors in clothing's choice among all walks of life. According to this variety,different arguments have been arose. Some people contend that the way individuals get dressed demonstrates their attitudes and even more their cultures. I agree with this point of view as long as the judgment is on the basis of clothing style rather than the amount of money spent on buying exorbitant famous brands.
From psychological point of view, generally, people express themselves to some extent by the way they opt their wear. It is suggested that people try to wear classic clothes or get dressed by their own taste have stronger personalities and more self-esteem. Even, it is claimed that the color of what we wear reflects our inside. For example, light and energetic colors are normally chosen by happy people while sad or depressed individuals commonly wear dark colored clothes. Although there are some exception which should not be overlooked.the most important one is due to teenagers who follow strange fads.Such choices are usually temporary and would change when their personality is completely formed.
From the cultural view point, they way people dress is rooted in their culture and traditions as well as the geographical features of
their habitat. to speak in detail, different ethnic groups are living in Iran,with a cascade of customs which lead to special costumes. Colors and materials used by them as well as the style of clothes coincides their traditions and climate of the land on which they are dwelling. While ,unfortunately,global fashion industries and migration to large cities have partially faded this diversity,however, these clothes are worn yet and shown in National Festivals to the younger generations.
In conclusion, clothes worn by individuals can e considered as an outer reflection of their feature and culture. Having said that it is unjustifiable to discriminate against a group of people owing to their appearance or because they can not afford to wear expensive clothing.

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It is believe that poeple can judge other’s background, personality and life vision regarding how they choose their clothes. Even though, there exist various reasons to prove to be well-dressed can affect everyone ‘s mind either positively or...

It is believe that poeple can judge other’s background, personality and life vision regarding how they choose their clothes. Even though, there exist various reasons to prove to be well-dressed can affect everyone ‘s mind either positively or negatively, in my opinion, the effect of choosing a dress should be attended. In this essay, I am going to shed some lights on the contributing reasons to it.



It cannot be ignored that nowadays more you be stylish, more people you can absorb. Indeed, so many because of looking for just eye-grabbing part of life, follow one with beautiful clothes. As an example, in a job interview, a person with reasonable and tidy garments can present his character positively and has a substantial impact on interviewee’s opinion in the first glance to show how they can count on him/her. More than that, while facing the unfashionable person with old fit outs these might be reckoned it is due to low affordability, being poor or, an unpleasant taste and not living in an updated society which all makes terrible illusion of a person.

On the other hand, we cannot ignore the fact that everyone has their own choice and tastes regarding their viewpoint. But, some so many people have unique dressing which completely reflects their opinion about the world or any specific religion. It means being varied in style; people sometimes follow their dreams and beliefs. So, in conduction by their appearance, their idea can be realised. There is wide range of this idea like Buddhism or any other religion, in the world and these deliberate differences give right to anyone to judge.



With all this taken to account, the unbelievable impact of how you choose your dress on others should be considered. Although we should live free, others opinion can ultimately make us insecure. Being presentable in each aspect of our life including clothing can strengthen our ties to the society.

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The diversity of clothes which are worn, resulting some people believe that clothes are a sign of people’s personality as well as culture. I agree with this statement that people can gain restricted information about people’s characteristic and...

The diversity of clothes which are worn, resulting some people believe that clothes are a sign of people’s personality as well as culture. I agree with this statement that people can gain restricted information about people’s characteristic and tradition but they can not talk a lot about them.
Based on climate and tradition, people decided to design appropriate clothes which meet their requirement. Hence, due to the different clothes which every country has, people can distinguish what others come from. For instance, Arabian men have worn a kind of special clothes which are long and loose. These type of clothes are proper for dry and hot weather which that special area has, whereas, Arabs wear them even if they do not live in their country to preserve from their tradition and culture. However, fashion industry which has developed in recent years concludes that people around the world dress according to mode resulting that the recognition of people based on their clothes is either difficult or impossible.
In addition, although it is impossible to find out the exact characteristics of individuals, people attain information about their surface personality from their clothes. For instance, if someone wears weird clothes which are not common, it is likely that he not only wants to stand out from others but also is eager to seem strange. However, because humans are perplex creatures and their personality has several layers it will be foolish if people think they can talk a lot about others based on their clothes.
In conclusion, from my point of view, despite the fact that some sides of people’s character as well as culture can be discovered from what they wear, they can not obtain a lot of information about people.

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While people used to draw less attention to their appearance , the recent decades have seen a considerable growth in the percentage of people spending most their time on clothes. Although appearance is the first factor to judge people, it seems...

While people used to draw less attention to their appearance , the recent decades have seen a considerable growth in the percentage of people spending most their time on clothes. Although appearance is the first factor to judge people, it seems that it fail to give much information about their creeds and intrinsic character.
The main reason why some believe that the way people wear clothes could demonstrate their culture and character is some clothes or colors are symbol of particular type of believes. When people appear in society with them, they are bound to represent specific information to others. In my country, Iran, some people use green tissue around their wrist or head with the aim of some political objectives.


However, one should not close eyes upon the fact that It is difficult to comment on people's personality based on their clothes. These days, the term " fashion" have found a vital position among people and many have great tendency to be a-la-mode. In each decades or even each year some specific type of clothes are common, so same clothes are seen among in a wide range of people with different thoughts. Following this trend introduces their interest in fashion industry and it is unfeasible to exactly understand the personality of the people.

Further, people always would not be liberty at choosing their appearance based on their willing or creeds. One major reason in this limitation is financial matter. The impoverished often have messy appearance, while it would not be their intendancy. so, it is unfair that they are judged by their clothes.


In brief, I strongly disagree that people's appearance tell much about their personality. Besides believes and culture, there would be several factors involving in which clothes people wear.

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It is certainly true that clothes are extremely important accessories in someone’s physical appearance .some people believe that choice garments shows who we are. In my opinion, such this notion of appraising people by their clothes is...

It is certainly true that clothes are extremely important accessories in someone’s physical appearance .some people believe that choice garments shows who we are. In my opinion, such this notion of appraising people by their clothes is definitely right.
First of all, clothes who people wear show culture who they have . One of main part of culture is religion. There are Christian, Muslim and Hindu in the world. Their dressings are quite different. Christian likes to wear suites , shirts and skirts,while Muslim prefer a traditional costume .Besides female Hindu would like to wear the Indian mass. So you can know culture any nation from their clothes easily.
Moreover, we can tell about personality people with type of clothes who choose. For example, people who are conservative tend to wear dress up garments as well, People who are happy like wear clothes with different color like red and pink and so on. Additionally ,people choose clothes with factors which are in their minds, about age,comfort,occupation .For example,individual who are young and his/her occupation is professor effect in how wear clothes because type clothes shows how much he/she is intelligent, helpful and sophisticated. Or person who is businessman, garments where choose shows his/ her wealthy, smart and category as well.
To conclude, everyone’s clothes show his/her identity and type character who play main role in his/her life .So we can know his or her culture and religion and even where she or he comes from.

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The diversity of costumes and clothes has always been magnificent around the world. While it is believed the clothes chosen by individuals might represent both their personality and their culture to a great extent, I feel, these days, it would be...

The diversity of costumes and clothes has always been magnificent around the world. While it is believed the clothes chosen by individuals might represent both their personality and their culture to a great extent, I feel, these days, it would be immensely difficult to judge people according to the way they dress.

It appears the style of clothing chosen by individuals would not always be based on their character. To illustrate, many people would not afford their favorite garment; therefore, their dressing might be rather about their budget than their interest and personality. They might occasionally wear disheveled, whereas they are indeed very neat people; or conversely, those who are characteristically disorganized may wear in a very well-organized way. It would therefore seem to be rather difficult to deduce what type of people they really are only due to their appearance.

From a cultural point of view, nowadays, clothes could scarcely be considered as a prominent symbol. Although all nations have their own costume, thanks to fashion industry, people are globally following the same style of everyday clothing. In this occasion, clothes have nothing to say about the culture. For example, despite a huge difference between the culture of China and the United States, their civilian clothes have become quite similar. Furthermore, in some countries where special rules have been legislated for the type of clothing, people must follow those special legislated styles. In these places, citizens must in fact dress according to the rules rather than either their culture or their choice.

Due to the aforementioned reasons, I would argue that despite the earlier times, in todays’ modern civilization, realizing individuals’ characteristic features and their cultural norms would be almost impossible and even unjust if their clothes were the only justification.

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Unlike ancient times, when the rudimentary function of clothes was to protect humanbeing from cold and warmth and rough surfaces;nowadays, clothes plays a more intricate role in human's life. It is believed by some that they can tell us a lot...

Unlike ancient times, when the rudimentary function of clothes was to protect humanbeing from cold and warmth and rough surfaces;nowadays, clothes plays a more intricate role in human's life. It is believed by some that they can tell us a lot about the character, thoughts and culture of people. From my perspective this idea is true but not in all circumstances.Two main reasons why I think so are elaborated below.

People are expressed through what they wear. Being our inner world reflectors,clothes can unfold our secrets and tell alot about our intentions.In other words, knowing about characteristics and personality of people as well as their culture is feasible through lookiing into their wardrobe. For example, by choosing a flowery flamboyant outfit with vivid colors can tell us a lot about the person's mood. Besides, wearing designer clothes and vogue accessories are signs of social status and by many, people worn them are looked up upon. In tems of culture ,clothes have always been playing avital role in cultural ceremonies whether the sad ones or the happy ones. While it is customary in many cultures to be dressed all in black in funerals in some cultures white is the indicator of being mournful, the costumes people wear in carnivals are other example of importance of clothes.
Despite the argument above , in my opinion , making judgment about people's ideas , throughs and culture on the basis of their outfit choice could not be always considerd right . Circumstances people live under are important in their capability of choosing their clothes. To exemplify,living in developing countries with awful financial economy and failing to meet the basic needs of life, most of people have dificulties finding something to eat, let alone being able to buy Clothes. For example,clothing, in many parts of a country such as Ethiopia plays the same role as it had in the past. On the other hand, in more conservative countries with a lot of cultural and religious limitations, people are not free too choose whatever they wish to express their personal or cultural beliefs. Therfore it would be not only undeniable but also rediculous to judge people living in harsh economic and political situation on the basis of their clothing.

To sum up, although clothes have been alwayes applied in societies as indicators of ideas and thoughts and cultural beliefs, they shouldn't always be means of judgment due to the lack of inaccessibility by most of people for economic or cultural boundaries

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People’s opinions differ as whether or not if it is possible to predict an individual’s thought and history based on their choice of suit. While some groups are thinking it is less likely to figure it out based on this assertion, I do not agree...

People’s opinions differ as whether or not if it is possible to predict an individual’s thought and history based on their choice of suit. While some groups are thinking it is less likely to figure it out based on this assertion, I do not agree with judging people of what they are wearing.
With the advent of social media, people are undergoing the new lifestyle, and choosing a theme of clothes has been attached with less importance of showing mind and back up. It is about to make fad and fashion much more popular, for example, there is an institute called “Panton” that announce yearly the color of the year. Accordingly, it seems to be a deep-rooted tendency of people to try a different style and the influence of to be on trend among societies can be heard in any aspect of their choosing, let alone wearing-style. This is shown person’s culture and personalities are less likely to purchase people to choose what they going to wear.
Furthermore, there are cascades of simples that shown judging someone what are they wearing is wrong, Mark Zuckerberg is a good example of this. He wears the no-name brand t-shirt every day, and as it well known he is one of the ten richest men in the world. Moreover, gone are the days that people insist on to show their culture by wearing their traditional clothes. These behaviors are set to play in their manner and morality more than show off a symbol .for instance, the ambassadors are wearing the diplomat suit in the official meeting, regardless to this fact they have not any more option.
In conclusion, it is more likely to know someone of what are doing and hanging out with them rather than what they are choosing to wear.

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unfortunately the level of error is too high. sentences have poor coherence. main aspects have been mentioned though.
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The motives of ones character is always seen by what they wear.people will always judge you by the looks.If you present yourself in cheap clothing or rugs to important people the impression of you will be the first they remember about you.when we...

The motives of ones character is always seen by what they wear.people will always judge you by the looks.If you present yourself in cheap clothing or rugs to important people the impression of you will be the first they remember about you.when we attend interviews we all dare to dress presentable.You always sell yourself by your looks.No wonder they say seeing is blieving and actions speak louder than words.Anytime a person puts on clothes they are expressing sth about themselves.That is why we have so many clothing stores and why so much money is spent on clothes.people like to choose their own clothes and express themselves by what they wear.people can talk alot but their clothes really talk more.separate from all of this my personality isnt going to match with my outfit.looks can change everyday but your character stays with you cause thats how you act.It wont reflect who you are and how you act.we should say to our noisy people dont judge the book by its cover.contemporary psychologists say that if you want to understand who person is you should take into account a few details of his clothing such as color material and how does it fit person loose or tight?

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the response is seriously under-length . ideas lack support and management
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People have differing view about whether the choice of cloths shows the personality or not. I personally believe that there is a direct relation between choosing cloths and personal characters.
In support of my point of view, there are several...

People have differing view about whether the choice of cloths shows the personality or not. I personally believe that there is a direct relation between choosing cloths and personal characters.
In support of my point of view, there are several substantial researches that have been claimed that the cloths we choose signify our personal characters. To explain more, if cloths are selected according to occasions , it would represent that how person care about people around him or her. Moreover, there are certain cloths for some special events, for example wedding, funeral, meeting, celebrations and academic places like universities and schools all require special clothing. Furthermore, being stylish and fashionable represents that person follow newest fashions and he or she tend to be attractive in terms of appearance. On the other hand, there are some people who do not pursue new styles. In fact, being tidy and neat is more important for them. In other words, doing regular ironing is one of the integral part of their life. It shows that this group of people pay enough attention to discipline and being punctual. Thus, what people wear is one of the way to know their personality.
aPart from selecting the kind of cloths, their colors are really considerable. color selection for cloths is the obvious image of people’s inner characteristic. Choosing light and exciting colors like orange, red, yellow, pink and purple shows how energetic, cheerful and easy-going they are. On the other hand, dark colors like black and brown are always chosen by depressed, disappointed and dejected peaple.
In brief, making choices of cloths is the good sign of individual’s culture and It represents their personal traits and inner characteristic.

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the prompt has been addressed. problems in subject and verb agreement. frequent errors in structures
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While people used to wear especial clothes in the past, the recent decades have seen considerable changes in the way people wear due to fashion trend and globalization of clothing industry. Meanwhile
, gone are the days children used to dress...

While people used to wear especial clothes in the past, the recent decades have seen considerable changes in the way people wear due to fashion trend and globalization of clothing industry. Meanwhile
, gone are the days children used to dress like parents to preserve their own culture.
Thus, it arises a certain question whether clothes give a lot of information about people’s personality and culture or not. People have divided opinion about this question, however, I strongly believe that only a little information can be obtained from people’s clothes.

Having a particular clothing is of the essence to unify people who follow a certain way of thinking .costume potentially is a known symbol by which people demonstrate that they imitate a certain way of life. Monk is a good example of people wearing special clothes to highlight thought and behavior that each of which effects their personality. Under this circumstance clothes tend to reveal individual’s culture. Moreover, it is clear that some general characteristics such as being ordered or having obsession is bound to be displayed in this way. Choosing a dress accurately, people are so tidy and crave to grab the others’ attraction.

Nonetheless, despite people’s enthusiasm to judge the others through the clothes, it is not scrutinizing and fair of judging due to the fact that individual’s character and behavior are so sophisticated and complicated to be simply recognized. A cursory examination of poor people reveals that despite public opinion, they are more likely to be generous than affluent people. Furthermore, it has less likelihood to find strong relation between dress and personality as clothing is an extrinsic factor, but personality is an intrinsic one. Budget, social status are two main extrinsic factors which a person will look into whether evaluating a dress is desirable or not while ethic is considered for an especial behavior by which personality forms.
.for example being handsome never emphasizes to being well manner and vice versa.

In conclusion, clothes are failed to demonstrate precise report of personality and culture ,and people should be banned to judge people from their way of dressing.

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key points are covered. a good range of vocabulary. errors in punctuation and grammar specially in the third paragraph.
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It is widely acknowledged that people’s choice of clothes has woven tightly into their culture and characteristics . From my standpoint, while some surface features and some aspectsof culture may be explored, talking a lot about them is...

It is widely acknowledged that people’s choice of clothes has woven tightly into their culture and characteristics . From my standpoint, while some surface features and some aspectsof culture may be explored, talking a lot about them is impossible.
Limited aspects of culture can presumably be discovered from potential choice of clothes. Belonging to a certain tribe or an ethnic community or even nationality in general, when people wear their local costumes or traditional outfit, is bound to be recognizable. Every year on Christmas, for example, KIMONO which is considered as a popular Japanese costume is worn by Japanese individuals in the United States; it is clear that they desire to stand out from that cosmopolitan society by this course of action.
Nevertheless, there is huge distinction when it comes to characteristics. It seems completely impossible to make a certain speculation as to people’s personality just based on their clothes, and this is mainly because of the fact that people’s taste in term of clothes is not always formed based on their personal features; as well as this, various factors such as limited budget affect their decision in purchasing garment. In other words, being able to talk a lot regarding to people’s personality without spending sufficient time with them and being familiar with their attitudes is nothing than a far-fetched idea. Consider several teenagers who are inclined to wear stylish and trendy clothes accesorized with luxurious accessories; is it possible to easily categorize them as selfish people? Or is being clumsy certainly identified from casual and indigenous clothes? A certain guess about people’s taught and beliefs, therefore, appears to be impossible just according to peoplee’s taste in clothes.
To sum up, whereas it is highly likely to some extent recognize people’ culture and character from their costumes and choice of clothes, I would contend that it is impossible to talk in detail about their attitudes and culture and reach a decisive conclusion due to several factors that dominate people’ s decision.c

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ideas are relevant but not always sufficiently supported. effective use of connectives should be your priority . sufficient vocabulary
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