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سوال 18 January برگزار شده در ایران

The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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It is argued that people are genetically predisposed to emulate one another and this is illustrated by the way they follow identical fashion trends slavishly or succumb to popular consumer products. Admittedly, I am in complete accord with the given statement and the following reasons can justify this view.

The most cogent argument in line with the stated claim is that all humans are instinctively inclined to be recognized as part of a community. Simply put, what gives the vast majority of people a sense of belonging is their ability to fit in with and be embraced by society. A further instance of this is evident in the way citizens of a particular country conform to their established social or cultural conventions willingly. Take eating habits and table manners, which may vary from one region to another, for example; perceiving these as clear indicators of a common identity, people adhere to them with open arms.

Similarly, people tend to imitate their fellow beings or what fashion dictates because of a universal and deep-seated need of being approved by others. To put it differently, we cannot help but feel the need for a seal of approval received by society which gives everyone a sense of satisfaction. A good illustration of this is our unflagging attempts for academic accomplishments such as higher grades. That is to say, looking for a completive edge constantly, pupils keep working hard towards a great acclaim either from their parents or teachers.

In conclusion, I would like to reiterate my opinion that all humans have a natural inclination to dress and behave in a similar way and this is justified by a number of compelling reasons. To recap, as humans we derive a great pleasure from forming part of the social fabric and being approved or praised by those around us.   

 

شرکت‌کننده محترم،
تا ساعت 17 روز شنبه 1396/11/21 فرصت دارید، برای این موضوع رایتینگ‌های خود را نوشته و به صورت کامنت، در زیر پست، ارسال نمایید. تمامی رایتینگ‌ها توسط ممتحنین بیان برتر ارزیابی شده و به آنها نمره داده خواهد شد.

 

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سلام من تازه آموزش ایلتس رو شروع کردم آیا می‌تونم رایتینگ های با موضوعات دیگه رو اینجا بذارم که دوستان عزیز در موردش نظر بدن

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من خودم تو فهم دقیق موضوع سوال مشکل داشتم. سعی کردم یه تحلیل از جواب برای خودم بنویسم. نمیدونم چقدر درسته، ولی میذارمش اینجا شاید به شما هم کمک کنه.
علاقه انسان ها به کپی کردن و تقلید از همدیگر (فکت؟) در محبوبیت فشن و لوازم مصرفی نمود پیدا کرده...

من خودم تو فهم دقیق موضوع سوال مشکل داشتم. سعی کردم یه تحلیل از جواب برای خودم بنویسم. نمیدونم چقدر درسته، ولی میذارمش اینجا شاید به شما هم کمک کنه.
علاقه انسان ها به کپی کردن و تقلید از همدیگر (فکت؟) در محبوبیت فشن و لوازم مصرفی نمود پیدا کرده است. موافقید یا مخالف؟
چیزی که من برداشت کردم اینه که ما باید علاقه مردم به تقلید رو به عنوان یه فکت بپذیریم. بعد تحلیل کنیم که محبوبیت مد و لوازم مصرفی میتونه دلیلی بر این فکت باشه. (به عنوان یه موافق)

دلایلی که جواب نمونه بیان برتر (به عنوان موافق) آورده ایناس:

1- انسانها تمایل دارند که جزئی از اجتماع باشند (انسانها موجودات اجتماعی هستند). و این موارد (استفاده از لباس ها و لوازم مشابه) چیزیه که میتونه این حس تعلق رو به اکثریت مردم بده. مثال تکمیلی دیگه ای هم که میتونه نشانگر این موضوع باشه: اینه که مردم با رغبت خودشونو با بعضی دیگه از قراردادهای اجتماعی وفق میدن. مثل اداب غذا خوردن. و در پایان نتیجه گرفته که اینها نشانه هایی هستند که مردم با رغبت و آغوش باز پذیرای این طرز رفتار (تقلید از همدیگه) هستند.

2- دومین دلیلی که آورده شده اینه که مردم به سمت فشن میرند چون به شدت نیاز به "تائید از جانب دیگران" دارند. ما نمیتونیم انکار کنیم که این "حس تائید" به ما حس خوب و رضایت بخشی میده. مثالی هم که آورده شده اینه که تلاش های ما برای کسب مدرک و درجه های دانشگاهی و نمره های بهتر، همه برای ارضای این حس تائید از جانب دیگران و والدین هستش.

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Fashion refers to a style cloth worn by most people.increasing the tendency of people to imitate each other's clothing style is rooted in social and psychological factors.In this essey social and psycological impacts on incresing the tendency of...

Fashion refers to a style cloth worn by most people.increasing the tendency of people to imitate each other's clothing style is rooted in social and psychological factors.In this essey social and psycological impacts on incresing the tendency of replicating fashion style will be discussed

People 's fashion style is indication of one's taste, social class and gives people a sense of identity in society.people almost always put value on social acceptance as they prevent from dressing up in cloths are at odd with personal style of other people.Therefor, they tend to imitate other people's fashion style to stay within social norms.For example, young generation wear colorful cloths which are confirmed as much-loved fashion style among youth in order to express their solidarity with the majority of young people of society.

Wealth and fashion interrelate and the interdependancies of keeping up with the latesy fashion and possessions are the main charachter of fashion world so it is likely to lead to the fact that fashion is one of the most luxurious habbies that gives people desired look, boost their moods and increase their self confidences therefor peole translate their self-esteem into a personal style. Accordingly, people from less low social class are much more interested to sampling well off people personal style in a belief that they can thus keep up with fashion, increase their self confidence and indicate a higher social position.

As outlined aboved,more and more peole are into copying ane another to gain social acceptance.Besides, people try to keep up with fashion to boost their self confidence, in an affort to indicate a higher social class by replicating well off people clothing style.

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Fashion refers to a style cloth worn by most people.increasing the tendency of people to imitate each other's clothing style is rooted in social and psychological factors.In this essey social and psycological impacts on incresing the tendency of...

Fashion refers to a style cloth worn by most people.increasing the tendency of people to imitate each other's clothing style is rooted in social and psychological factors.In this essey social and psycological impacts on incresing the tendency of replicating fashion style will be discussed

People 's fashion style is indication of one's taste, social class and gives people a sense of identity in society.people almost always put value on social acceptance as they prevent from dressing up in cloths are at odd with personal style of other people.Therefor, they tend to imitate other people's fashion style to stay within social norms.For example, young generation wear colorful cloths which are confirmed as much-loved fashion style among youth in order to express their solidarity with the majority of young people of society.

Wealth and fashion interrelate and the interdependancies of keeping up with the latesy fashion and possessions are the main charachter of fashion world so it is likely to lead to the fact that fashion is one of the most luxurious habbies that gives people desired look, boost their moods and increase their self confidences therefor peole translate their self-esteem into a personal style. Accordingly, people from less low social class are much more interested to sampling well off people personal style in a belief that they can thus keep up with fashion, increase their self confidence and indicate a higher social position.

As outlined aboved,more and more peole are into copying ane another to gain social acceptance.Besides, people try to keep up with fashion to boost their self confidence, in an affort to indicate a higher social class by replicating well off people clothing style.

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The popularity of fashion style is now greater than at almost any point in history.More and More people are interested and tend to copy one another in terms of the latest fashion style.It is rooted in the fact that alternqtive livlihoods have...

The popularity of fashion style is now greater than at almost any point in history.More and More people are interested and tend to copy one another in terms of the latest fashion style.It is rooted in the fact that alternqtive livlihoods have been explored as the overall quality level of life has increased in developed countries.Besides, people almost always are affected by addvertisings in term of celebrities' fashion styles.In this essaye the popularity of fashion production will be discussed.
In developed countries almost always fashion news receive extensive coverage as enough funds have been rised and alternative livlihooda have been explored.For example,in underdeveloped countries ecconomic news usually catch a headline, where people are looking for descent jobs.Exploring alternative livlihoods come in the form of following the latest fashion style and put value on products of low quality but fashionable that is likely to lead ro excessive production and pave the way for unethical companies to increase the profit margin

People's lifestyle has changed through advertising as ordinary people are looking for sampling a new way of living.It comes to the form of sampling celebrities' lifestyle therefor celebrity endorsment has catched thei attentions and has became popular as all channels are advertising channels and profit companies recevie their targets and make them follow fashion styles through showing adverts in the middle of primary time when people watch a tv show or listen to a broadcasting.Word to mouth advwrtising is a persuisive way to open up opportunities for profit companies and unethical bussiness to creat brand loyal and brand awarness therefore give people incentives to by much more branded products

According to outlined above, while fashion world almost always grabs a headline, one not only see no facts in favour of popularty of fashion products and excessive production but also give profit and unethical bussiness a chance toake much more money.It is suggested people have a firm stand against overconsumption and exvessive production in terms of fashion world.

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People generally tend to mimic whatever has been done by the others. It is more tremendously portrayed in wearing some clothes and using some commodities. I utterly agree with this outlook and assume that this has twofold.
First of all, the...

People generally tend to mimic whatever has been done by the others. It is more tremendously portrayed in wearing some clothes and using some commodities. I utterly agree with this outlook and assume that this has twofold.
First of all, the majority of people imitate other's performance due to fear of being the first one. to clarify, it is true that being the first person experiencing something almost always has more potential threats and even unforeseen negative features which are bound to be inevitable; people, thus, prefer to wait that others use or buy some kinds of commodities then, after analyzing feedbacks, they commence to use them. This is one of the justifications of copy. Consider cutting-edge model of Audi R8 recently introduced, everything is set to be a mystery about that from quality to safety. According to this perspective it seems more preferable to wait for a while to realize whether it can be an invaluable choice or not. If the answer is yes, the others will flock to buy this car; consequently, it appears as copy.
The other aspect is people's psychological respond to what has been repeatedly advertised in the media. using celebrities and well-known athletes to show some clothes or consumer demands leads people to purchase those commodities; since character introducing them are greatly popular and acceptable, the society automatically assume that the merchandise is popular and acceptable, as well. This tricky psychological method gives rise to an increase in the use of potential merchandise such as clothes. As e result, another tendency to copy has been shown this way.
To sum up, I personally aver that people do imitation in a huge volume in various grounds because of two main reasons: firstly, they are reluctant to be the first person experiencing a new commodity. Secondly, a fascinating and persuasive trend- they are both psychological- lead to them using an advertised good.

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#من_کپی_نمیکنم

People generally tend to mimic whatever has been done by the others. It is more tremendously portrayed in wearing some clothes and using some commodities. I utterly agree with this outlook and assume that this has twofold.
First...

#من_کپی_نمیکنم

People generally tend to mimic whatever has been done by the others. It is more tremendously portrayed in wearing some clothes and using some commodities. I utterly agree with this outlook and assume that this has twofold.
First of all, the majority of people imitate other's performance due to fear of being the first one. to clarify, it is true that being the first person experiencing something almost always has more potential threats and even unforeseen negative features which are bound to be inevitable; people, thus, prefer to wait that others use or buy some kinds of commodities then, after analyzing feedbacks, they commence to use them. This is one of the justifications of copy. Consider cutting-edge model of Audi R8 recently introduced, everything is set to be a mystery about that from quality to safety. According to this perspective it seems more preferable to wait for a while to realize whether it can be an invaluable choice or not. If the answer is yes, the others will flock to buy this car; consequently, it appears as copy.
The other aspect is people's psychological respond to what has been repeatedly advertised in the media. using celebrities and well-known athletes to show some clothes or consumer demands leads people to purchase those commodities; since character introducing them are greatly popular and acceptable, the society automatically assume that the merchandise is popular and acceptable, as well. This tricky psychological method gives rise to an increase in the use of potential merchandise such as clothes. As e result, another tendency to copy has been shown this way.
To sum up, I personally aver that people do imitation in a huge volume in various grounds because of two main reasons: firstly, they are reluctant to be the first person experiencing a new commodity. Secondly, a fascinating and persuasive trend- they are both psychological- lead to them using an advertised good.

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all parts are covered. try to avoid repetitive vocabulary and not get affected by your first language. some minor errors
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all parts are covered. try to avoid repetitive vocabulary and not get affected by your first language. some minor errors
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#من-کپی-نمیکنم
While people used to follow persons’ previous generations , the recent decades have seen a fall in the number of individuals who have duplicated humans’ activities. I firmly believe that the desire of people to being similar to...

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While people used to follow persons’ previous generations , the recent decades have seen a fall in the number of individuals who have duplicated humans’ activities. I firmly believe that the desire of people to being similar to another human ,however, is not indicated in the popularity of fashion clothes and employment of consumer commodities ; for this claim several reasons can be posed.
First of all, the tendency of individuals in order to resemble one another would be illustrated in the copy of religious. When desiring to be pious, new generation have to duplicate activities of old-fashioned generations. For example most of Iranian people follow a religious person.
In addition, not surprisingly emulating wrong traditional beliefs might be kind of being similar to other people. Should individuals do not contemplate about local beliefs, they simulate them. By way of illustration, there has been an incorrect belief that men enjoy more overt advantages than women; not only is this a wrong belief , but also following such view can hurt women in the world.
Finally, majority of individuals desire to simulate famous persons’ behaviors in spite of the fact that their performance could not be appropriate in order to duplicate. A case in point is popular artists would have inappropriate activities. Such as addiction ;yet young generation know about this problem, they follow these activities.
To sum up, people in the world should not be follower for worshiping as well as obeying folklore and being similar to a famous person. It can be excellent idea that governments should engage psychologists at schools so as to instill confidence in to students that they should be themselves.

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the writer presents his idea clearly but there is a tendency to generalize in body parts. frequent grammatical mistakes.
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Bahar Dehkordi, [۱۰.۰۲.۱۸ ۱۷:۰۷]
Observing apes to human being behavior there can be seen a link between a wide spreading attitude amongst members of societies duplicating ones another habits. It seems fashion benefit from the same trend using it...

Bahar Dehkordi, [۱۰.۰۲.۱۸ ۱۷:۰۷]
Observing apes to human being behavior there can be seen a link between a wide spreading attitude amongst members of societies duplicating ones another habits. It seems fashion benefit from the same trend using it as a weapon in its favor. Notwithstanding, this naive conclusion could have been true, I am of the exact opinion.
Primarily, sharp desire of being unique in human race must not be forgotten which appeared to be the reason for fashion growth. Since, brands and their designers tend to sell the idea of peculiar garments. People form all walks of life, especially those shallow minded ones attempting to look more sophisticated by altering their dressing-style, predominantly sounds not working. This susceptibility let those in charge manipulate multitudes desire guiding to an implausible fall down in commercial trends flow.
Individuals craving for luxury lifestyle, furthermore, is the reason fashion reach this level of popularity. Normal people carrying their routines dying to fancy a glamorous way of living filled with wealth and welfare. Having clothes and objects only celebrities and loyal families are found affordable, misleadingly, make ordinary people feel satisfaction.
All this said, fashion is the industry o persuasive advertisements, lifestyle initiator and an entertainment chiefly for simpleminded people. It does not do much with tendency of individuals to copy ones another, in fact it is the matter of not doing what seems to be followed by common members of society.

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grammatical errors can be found. there some memorized phrases. ideas need more development
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In the last fifty years fashion show together with product industries have seen a major breakthrough in their feild.Nowadays almost every one especially young people and juveniles have tendency to be fashion and follow the latest fashion model or...

In the last fifty years fashion show together with product industries have seen a major breakthrough in their feild.Nowadays almost every one especially young people and juveniles have tendency to be fashion and follow the latest fashion model or may be an actor or actress as their role model.


Unfortunately in many societies today almost every indivisual judge each other by their appearance.All of us have faced situation that people with fashion appearance are highly respected than the others with simple and not fancy customs or dress;because of these people are persuading fashion and follow consumer goods.

The policy are followed by advertisers,in addition,are somehow encourage people to be more consumerism.Advertisment unconsciously persuade consumer to imitate fashion model;and choose them as their role model.it is their policy to show fancy thing more and more interesting which manage to attract their customer's attentions.

The last not least criteria I like to mention is that nowadays almost every company and industry somehow temting people to buy their products;they encouraging the requirements of costumers.for instance about 10 years ago nobody have touch-screen cellphone and threre is no need to possess it;however now almost every one feel this need;thanks to the potential requirements they creat.

To sum up;there is no doubt we should be neat with good appearance but not necessary be fashion.

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errors in choosing the appropriate tense. off-topic statements particularly in concluding part. poor coherence
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errors in choosing the appropriate tense. off-topic statements particularly in concluding part. poor coherence
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Inhabitants' inclination to be like others might be one of the most important factors for developing fashion industry that is why the more customer, the merrier benefits. Although setting some policies could be an undeniable reason which is...

Inhabitants' inclination to be like others might be one of the most important factors for developing fashion industry that is why the more customer, the merrier benefits. Although setting some policies could be an undeniable reason which is increasing the number of sale. I believe that every phenomenon is occurred because of different factors.
Arguably, people have been always enthusiastic in sharing their ties with others. Regarding this matter, multitudes have been trying making more common features to be more gregarious. Base on this fact, new trends might be welcomed since they are going to behave same as others to get belonging sense with their social life.
In addition, every event in societies happens as a result of some author attempts. To be more exact, promoters take some measures such as advertising to outsell. This trend could be more beneficial if they company with famous folks for example actresses and singers. It is worth mentioning that, they encourage inhabitants by conquering their affection aspect that is why people are interested in being the same with others.
In order to summarise, update clothes and final goods are increasing day by day in a way that society members have been inclined to be parallel with associates. moreover, hidden policies can not be ignored.

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the answer is under-length. there are grammatical errors
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At first, we should know using similar clothes or goods are imitation or just they are devoid of productions. In order to give an acceptable answer to the question, it is difficult to get merely one side and follow along. Sometimes people like to...

At first, we should know using similar clothes or goods are imitation or just they are devoid of productions. In order to give an acceptable answer to the question, it is difficult to get merely one side and follow along. Sometimes people like to imitate others, like children, and most of the times they practise to show themselves different.

Man-kind has improved by imitating, at first. Then it has changed the what it has learnt already to something new. In this kind of behaviour seeing people who are using the same products, fashion clothes or goods, can be digested as an imitation. For instance, children use and behave like their up-springs then they use the things they have already learnt to something new. Or an author, at first, learns how to use the alphabetic then she or he uses that knowledge to produce an esteemed work. Using and imitating others, therefore, can seem acceptable in this perspective.

On the other hand, most men do not like to imitate others, especially women---do not get it in a wrong way, please. In my country, most ladies when are getting part in a ceremony or party try not to wear the same clothes as before. In other words, women try to look different than others. This behaviour implies, another aspect of people tendency, which is utterly against their tendency to copy one another. By understanding this action and musing on it, we can come up with the idea which is in the opposite direction with the question.

Albeit, to wrap it all together, human tries and shows the similar tendency in some time, it desires to look different. At first, they try to imitate and when they got the influence over others, being like others is far from their intent.

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Nowadays, with due attention to the communication technology revolutions, sociologists are concerning about many new issues including people leaning to imitating behavior. To find out more, there is no simple cause or solution for this specific...

Nowadays, with due attention to the communication technology revolutions, sociologists are concerning about many new issues including people leaning to imitating behavior. To find out more, there is no simple cause or solution for this specific social phenomenon. However, in this article I tend to present capitalism as a major root cause of this subject, and then conclude that by the means of social networks, this issue penetrate to men whole life.
The advent of machines in nineteen century led to new production era, in which the manufacturing lines founded to fabricate a specific kind of product. There was no way to changing some features in those products except design and form new lines that was so expensive. Therefore the company owners – which known as a capitalist- was and are tending to unify the people taste to decrease the number of manufacturing lines and productions costs.
To obtain the similarity in taste, huge companies has backed the media and social networks to present role models whom known as star. People gravitate to these manipulated stars and try to liken themselves to these roles. People lonely life style and fake necessity of self-expression in this virtual world intensify the problem of imitation. Therefore, the result of these points is illusions lead to buy and consume more.
By the way, it is apparent that consumerism raid into most aspects of humankind life through the media and social networks. This is an unstoppable and natural flow in humanity and scientist believe it takes into vast social disaster that changes capitalism to a new order of the world.

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All aspects of people's lives have undergone massive changes since the advent of technology. It is inevitable , people from all over the world tend to follow a single tendency towards clothes and goods. The advancement of technology can explain...

All aspects of people's lives have undergone massive changes since the advent of technology. It is inevitable , people from all over the world tend to follow a single tendency towards clothes and goods. The advancement of technology can explain why the desire is undeniable.
There is a widely held belief that electronic media and the virtual world have revolutionized the way we consume products. These days, we are faced with a huge number of advertisements on the internet and media which can be seen by people from all over the world. In addition to the international advertisements, technological transport has offered to have an essay access to the products that are produced in different countries. Therefore, the availability of products causes people to consume the same goods and clothes.
Considering the increasing globalization of world trade, there are many manufactures and companies from different countries that work in other parts of the worlds. All of them produce similar products which are consumed by people around the word. For instance, the brand of Samsung belongs to South korea while the manufacture with the brand of Samsung can be seen in Iran. Also we can see a number of representatives of popular brand of cloths like Zara in Iran. Thus, having an essay access to goods and clothes can make the same tendency for people to use similar products.
In conclusion, having a single world desire to consume is rooted in the advancement of technology. In this case, globalization plays an important role.

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All aspects of people's lives have undergone massive changes since the advent of technology. It is inevitable , people from all over the world tend to follow a single tendency towards clothes and goods. The advancement of technology can explain...

All aspects of people's lives have undergone massive changes since the advent of technology. It is inevitable , people from all over the world tend to follow a single tendency towards clothes and goods. The advancement of technology can explain why the desire is undeniable.
There is a widely held belief that electronic media and the virtual world have revolutionized the way we consume products. These days, we are faced with a huge number of advertisements on the internet and media which can be seen by people from all over the world. In addition to the international advertisements, technological transport has offered to have an essay access to the products that are produced in different countries. Therefore, the availability of products causes people to consume the same goods and clothes.
Considering the increasing globalization of world trade, there are many manufactures and companies from different countries that work in other parts of the worlds. All of them produce similar products which are consumed by people around the word. For instance, the brand of Samsung belongs to South korea while the manufacture with the brand of Samsung can be seen in Iran. Also we can see a number of representatives of popular brand of cloths like Zara in Iran. Thus, having an essay access to goods and clothes can make the same tendency for people to use similar products.
In conclusion, having a single world desire to consume is rooted in the advancement of technology. In this case, globalization plays an important role.

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Without a doubt, fashion industry has become one of the most famous industries in recent decades. Some subscribe to the view that it is the clue in people’s inclination to imitate others in the way of dressing and choosing other products. I...

Without a doubt, fashion industry has become one of the most famous industries in recent decades. Some subscribe to the view that it is the clue in people’s inclination to imitate others in the way of dressing and choosing other products. I completely agree with this point of view.
The imitation of others is a human’s natural instinct that varies in different ages. While children try speaking and eating like their parents, the juvenile indicate their interest in coping others by following the latest fashions and fad. The fashion slaves usually buy some products such as clothes, shoes, glasses as well as perfume which celebrities wear or endorse their brands. In other words, being advertised by some all the rage persons or supermodels like soccer players and singers who are role models for the young, some brands will be popular among people.
In addition, although citizens used to be perfectionist who drive themselves to be superior to the rest in terms of different aspects of life like appearance, science subjects and sport, in recent years, the advent of internet and create a wide range of social websites with superficial subjects have caused conspicuous changes in the people’s attitude. In fact, they try to imitate the appearance of well-known person instead of their personality and achievements by purchasing new and modern things. As a result, fashion industry is bound to be more and more profitable and reputable. Moreover, the role of advertising to promote people to buy high fashionable goods is not inconsiderable. The Cambridge university, for instance, found in a recent study that the number of products sold according to people’s tendency to copy others and influence advertising is far more than purchasing on needs.
In conclusion, in my opinion, replication of others is a natural instinct born with individuals and in some people cause to spend a lot of time to keep up with fashion by buying luxurious items which are designed by fashion designers.

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Without a doubt, fashion industry has become one of the most famous industries in recent decades. Some subscribe to the view that it is the clue in people’s inclination to imitate others in the way of dressing and choosing other products. I...

Without a doubt, fashion industry has become one of the most famous industries in recent decades. Some subscribe to the view that it is the clue in people’s inclination to imitate others in the way of dressing and choosing other products. I completely agree with this point of view.
The imitation of others is a human’s natural instinct that varies in different ages. While children try speaking and eating like their parents, the juvenile indicate their interest in coping others by following the latest fashions and fad. The fashion slaves usually buy some products such as clothes, shoes, glasses as well as perfume which celebrities wear or endorse their brands. In other words, being advertised by some all the rage persons or supermodels like soccer players and singers who are role models for the young, some brands will be popular among people.
In addition, although citizens used to be perfectionist who drive themselves to be superior to the rest in terms of different aspects of life like appearance, science subjects and sport, in recent years, the advent of internet and create a wide range of social websites with superficial subjects have caused conspicuous changes in the people’s attitude. In fact, they try to imitate the appearance of well-known person instead of their personality and achievements by purchasing new and modern things. As a result, fashion industry is bound to be more and more profitable and reputable. Moreover, the role of advertising to promote people to buy high fashionable goods is not inconsiderable. The Cambridge university, for instance, found in a recent study that the number of products sold according to people’s tendency to copy others and influence advertising is far more than purchasing on needs.
In conclusion, in my opinion, replication of others is a natural instinct born with individuals and in some people cause to spend a lot of time to keep up with fashion by buying luxurious items which are designed by fashion designers.

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The issue of an entrenched tendency of people to replicate clothing style is still widely debated, despite not a rough number of people tolerant of the sameness. Personally, I feel that majority of people are interested in getting dressed in the...

The issue of an entrenched tendency of people to replicate clothing style is still widely debated, despite not a rough number of people tolerant of the sameness. Personally, I feel that majority of people are interested in getting dressed in the same clothing style acceptable in society, and I will explain why

Firstly, fashion is a means of expression showing one’s taste, mood, income level and one’s social class above all. Only by staying with fashion norms of society can people gain social acceptance and their social position can be displayed. Furthermore, only by the way of copying can people express their solidarity with other people. Clerks, for example, replicate clothing style and get dressed in suits in order to express their solidarity with and connection to society.

A further reason likely to lead to people copying the same clothing style is rooted in the fact that it gives them a sense of identity so they are into to keep up with most popular fashion style in a belief that they can thus translate their self-esteem into a personal style related to a sense of identity for a particular group of people. For example, getting dressed in clothes off the peg is popular among artists as the believe that it is an indicative of freedom

I do understand the opposing view which is shown the tendency of few people to try different clothes all the outlandish fashion in order to gain desired distinguished look. Nevertheless, I fell that preference of most people is to one another in term of popular clothing style

Overall, I believe that people put high value on social acceptance and a sense of identity gained by replicating clothing style in society.

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People are very fond of buying clothes and other products which are bought by the majority of people. However, I personally believe that imitating from other people will not aid in the popularity of that good.
First, one of the aspects which...

People are very fond of buying clothes and other products which are bought by the majority of people. However, I personally believe that imitating from other people will not aid in the popularity of that good.
First, one of the aspects which helps a trend becoming popular is that well-known people and celebrities use the products of that trend, not ordinary people. And if people who have a reputation do not use these clothes or products, the ordinary people will not use them too. For example, if I wear a new cloth no one will buy it because I am an ordinary person. But if Leila Hatami who is a famous actress in my country Iran; wears that cloth it may help to its popularity.
Second, maybe people are keen on to imitate from other people but they cannot afford to pay for that specific product. Therefore, just saying that the popularity of a good is related to how much people are copying it from other people is incorrect.
Third, in my opinion, everybody tastes differ. And if you buy a product just by imitating from others, you will not use it again. Put in other words, if the item that you have bought is not your cup of tea, it does not appeal to you and you will not use it anymore. Since your friends and acquaintances will not see that you are using that cloth or product, they cannot imitate you. As you are not going to use it anymore, the use of it in the worldwide will be decreased and just have that good is not the reason leads to its popularity.
In conclusion, I think that just wearing the clothes in the same way as others do or buying products which others have bought is not a wise reason to say that these products are popular. Because only youth may imitate other and there is not any strict reason for buying that item, they will use it rarely because that product is not what they really wanted.

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Nowadays, human beings are usually to do as same as the others. This trend have appeared in people's appearances, what clothes they choose to wear, and the goods they consume. Although I agree with this view, I also do believe that the popularity...

Nowadays, human beings are usually to do as same as the others. This trend have appeared in people's appearances, what clothes they choose to wear, and the goods they consume. Although I agree with this view, I also do believe that the popularity to copy each other dose not narrow down to people's attire which will be clarified in the following.
On the one hand, the existence of huge number of clothes-related jobs, such as those who are involved in cloth designing, textile industries, and so on can be considered as a convincing reason why they have become so popular. At the moment, many people cross the world are waiting in Paris Weekly Show to visit the latest designs and tastes to wear or buy what have been on the show. More importantly, the simplest and the most convenient way that people choose to mimic others, particularly celebrities and well-known people, is to be in line with in garment they pick to put. Obviously, ordinary people are unable to play as important role as superstars do; therefore the easiest approach is to dress like them.
On the flip side, I am also of the opinion that dressing like others is not limited to consumer goods such home appliances or utensils. That is people migrate from small cities or rural areas to metropolises presents people's tendency for copying in all aspects of life. Otherwise, why some should quit their job and leave their hometown with many advantages over a new place, and house in skyscraper-surrounded positions. The numerous size of academic seekers and alumni without having any purpose for keeping up their studies validate that mimicking can be considered as an intrinsic value of each individual.
In conclusion, even though it is true that clothing like others is one the signs of appearing like others, this proclivity can be seen in the whole part of people's life.

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Public s orientation to imitate others specifically in the area of clothes trends and comodities upsurge these days. I believe this idea is rather absurd as following others calls for some particular conditions.
To begin with the imitation should...

Public s orientation to imitate others specifically in the area of clothes trends and comodities upsurge these days. I believe this idea is rather absurd as following others calls for some particular conditions.
To begin with the imitation should be taken into considerationculturally and financially. Although diversity and variety is the spice of life and makes it colorful cultur and reliegous issues shold be highly paid attention.Given the fact thateach country routine wearing is arisebfrom its traditional beliefs with combination of reliegion. Forexample, in iranpeople wear clothes adjusted to islamic orders that isthey cover themselves totally specifically womenand they do not wear thight clothes or light colors in publice due to not to attract strangers attention. Additionally it loads unpreveledge countries financially. Namely countries with low budget are not economically affordable to offet these comodities with the same qualities and low price so only affluent people provide these goods. Therefore producing in this manner is not counterintutively e conomic.
Morover although copying and imitation is a basic step to learn and is of some benefits for different levels of skills it can detriment creativity and innovation in the huge size as well. Forinstance if people simply copy a device without thinkingof enhancing it to aapt quality or adaptingto their cultural need gradually not only will they lose motivation to progress but also creating novel and developedcomodities comodities will be faded up. In the area of car industries we behold of a grate number of changes arranged to make our life easier and more comfortable while it was not possible unless with productive minds.
To sum up humankinds think of duplication a style to show their intentions toward popular devices and clothes in my opinion can not be .a suitable method for all nations

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These days, people’s willingness to copy fashion clothes and other types of commodities have been a controversial debate. I strongly agree with this view as a positive trend and the possible reasons will be explained in the following.

Firstly,...

These days, people’s willingness to copy fashion clothes and other types of commodities have been a controversial debate. I strongly agree with this view as a positive trend and the possible reasons will be explained in the following.

Firstly, individuals mostly prefer to duplicate some well-known goods of high demands among consumers to reap the benefit of making money. Precisely, Adidas as an example, is one of the most popular brands globally. Therefore, if some people are not able to afford to purchase its product, they may be fabricated at a lower price with almost the same quality to enter the market and engross buyers. Not only is copying of paramount importance to earn more, but also it can lead to provide more job opportunities which means the young probably can work with the help of other masses’ ideas.

Secondly, some nations are in disastrous economic conditions. Hence, they can copy the design of few commodities like fashion clothes rather than import products to satisfy the local people who are too poor to buy luxurious items. As a result, sellers can come through with budgetary support to the economy of their countries. Besides, local shopkeepers may alter either the original design or the quality to a more promising level, thus, their product is more likely to win the whole market over a long period.

In conclusion, people’s tendency to copy a few products may bring them a great number of advantages although the creativity should not be ignored. In fact, in my opinion the benefits of re-making the current goods outweigh its drawbacks.

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As most people would agree,there is an appetency in human nature to possess a patern to be copied by them.It is something that could not be denied specially in new modern world.As we witness in recent decades this trend has been shown off in...

As most people would agree,there is an appetency in human nature to possess a patern to be copied by them.It is something that could not be denied specially in new modern world.As we witness in recent decades this trend has been shown off in fashion clothes and consumer goods .Although it might have some drawbacks like any other trends examined by human beings, I am of the opinion that it is what could make our world and our life more appealing .
The most important reason might be that copying is what gives people a feeling of satisfying . Due to the fact that human beings are accounted as social creatures,being acceptable by having whatever is accepted by majority of people ,gives them a sense of happy satisfaction .Individuals have complicated interactions in the society and their relationships affect each other’s oppinions ,leading to make the best and the most creative ones as patterns to be imitated in different fields like clothing designs chosen or products in special brands utilized.
The second reason could be that making a pattern for people in various domains ,has become a kind of industry in which many people are involved as employers or employees . It is a business so luxurious which alot of people particularly the youth have found it so attractive to follow and succeed in, in other words creating an ideal model or sample to be accepted by most of customers would be what many businesses are competteting to gain access to, and it leads to make many new job opportunities .
In conclusion, I firmly believe that such a gravitation toward simulating which is used to be as a prevalent tendency in todays world could be regarded as an applicable one concerning plenty of advantages.

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The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods.
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It is true that people, sometimes have tendency to follow each other in some cases....

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The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods.
To what extent do you agree?

It is true that people, sometimes have tendency to follow each other in some cases. One the main reasons to imitate each other is to be successful in their daily basis. Although, fashion clothes and other types of goods are so popular between ordinary people, personally I believe, other factors apart from copying are main reasons for these popularities.

Firstly, social media and the mass media such as magazines and commercial channels which promote designer labels in short and long-term can attract large proportion of people to follow them. These persuasive advertisements have been repeating daily on commercial breaks in prime time or on sales page in magazine will deter taste of people when they want to purchase clothes. Besides, actors and actress in blockbuster movies and TV series indirectly persuade viewers to keep up with the latest fashion. Thus sooner or later, customer's taste will be changed dramatically when they are going shopping.

Secondly, if a person tends to be accepted as a member of a particular small community such as teenager peer group should follow some specific rules to demonstrate he/she has talented or intellectual. Unity and wearing same clothes’ style can be part of it. Also imagine staff who are working at a well-known company. Wearing formal suits and smart clothes is part of obligations to promote customers and clients effectively.

In conclusion, generally people maybe want to follow each other in some items to enjoy their life in my opinion, majority of people would like to keep up the latest fashion unintentionally and do not imitate themselves. Other factors are effective to this phenomenon.

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Nowadays, the issue of whether or not the basic essence of copying each other comes from a specific logic has sparked a heated debate. According to the recent research, many expert anthropologists claim that such behavior among people is rooted...

Nowadays, the issue of whether or not the basic essence of copying each other comes from a specific logic has sparked a heated debate. According to the recent research, many expert anthropologists claim that such behavior among people is rooted in the fact that follow or copy something from popularity thing can instill a lot of confidence for them and their humanity. However, in my opinion, I agree with consciously follow because it is sector of human nature but unconsciously copy each other is not justifiable to me because people themselves have considerable latitude in decision or choosing anything.
To begin with, it is easy to see that many people around the world have intense desire to mimic or buy something that they are keen on. In addition, mass media, fashion show, and celebrities as means of powerful attractive tools are playing an increasingly important role in our lives. Nevertheless, since attractive ways have been created, such as use well-know people, effective media or social networks by manufacturers, they are more likely to attract people’s attention. Unfortunately, these days, many more teenage unconsciously attempt to imitate celebrities and popularity fashion clothes or consumer goods that could be root causes of serious troubles.
Secondly, there is no doubt that people are surrounded by variety of brands. Take japan, for example, youth in this country prefer to wear western cloths, indeed to use their nation’s clothes, as they believe these clothes are popular and stylish than their traditional clothes. As a result, lack of awareness to copying one another may simply diminish traditional culture and admittedly have adverse effects in the social future.
To sum up, although people have a power of election uniquely, they prefer to copy each other. Moreover, anthropologists believe that these such behavior make them feel self-confidence and self-image. From my perspective, imitate is part of human existence so it is better to use it with awareness.

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It is claimed that individuals' inclination to imitate other people,particularly the famous ones,has led to fad and consumerism spread in modern societies.I agree with this statement to some extent,but I do not think it is the case that everyone...

It is claimed that individuals' inclination to imitate other people,particularly the famous ones,has led to fad and consumerism spread in modern societies.I agree with this statement to some extent,but I do not think it is the case that everyone is a victim of fashion industry or consumer culture owing to this feature.
I believe that the majority of people have been attracted to the latest fashion trends and luxury lifestyles. For one thing, enormous group of community members are big fans of either movie stars or musicians as well as sports champions. Consequently,they strongly tend to mimic not only the way they put on clothes but also the way they behave. For example, it can be seen that some
people pay money to buy fake accessories like watch or sunglasses because they merely want to be similar to their favorite celebrity. Also.surprisingly,it has been commonplace that some others undergo a plastic surgery to transform their appearance in order to look like a Hollywood superstar.Furthermore,it is observed that huge amount of money is annually spent on buying unnecessary household appliances or furniture as well as luxury cars,just because the owners would like to enjoy as the same facilities as their relatives or colleagues possess.
However,it is not justifiable to suppose that all the people follow this trend through their lives.There are always enlightened human beings who have more to do than simulating other people. Thanks to this pioneers, The whole world has benefited from scientific and medical developments.In other words, all the inventions from the beginning up to now have stemmed from innovative brains who do not pay attention what other people wear or use.
To sum up, I partly agree that people's leaning to mimic the one another means that fashion and consumerism are mainstream. Nevertheless, there are some ingenious people who tend to be influential with their beautiful minds.

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It is seems that human have a grate tendency to follow others and we can consider popularity of fashion as a firm example of this issue. I agree with this statement.
As humans have a great willing to use a sample in different theme fashion has...

It is seems that human have a grate tendency to follow others and we can consider popularity of fashion as a firm example of this issue. I agree with this statement.
As humans have a great willing to use a sample in different theme fashion has become more popular recently and a big number of people have become fascinated by fashion each year.in fact, many society members would rather to fallow a special trend even in their own style. For example, tattered jeans which play revolutionary role in textile industry have replaced by the old one and it is not only popular among the young but also it is used but adolescence.
Moreover it is clear that due to the human tendency to follow others, many celebrities, and politicians should have well dress always.to cite an example around 1000000 of people pursue England residential families in matter of clothes and they try to wear the same clothes.
In addition, various fashion show are held in all countries because of meet the need of customers and it is strongly proof that people tend to have follow rules. For example each year a lot of designer an international producer forgather in Italy to invite new clothes and introduce to the world. Moreover, various majors are put around fashion in university schedule because of the popularity and important role of fashion in 21 century.
In conclusion, I personally believe that people instinctively tend to have a sample in each area and perusing fashion is a good example of them.

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It is sometimes argued that people tend to consume same clothing and goods because they enjoy imitation. It seems that this kind of notion is valid in most cases.

While the popularity of fashion is an inevitable subject, we can attribute the...

It is sometimes argued that people tend to consume same clothing and goods because they enjoy imitation. It seems that this kind of notion is valid in most cases.

While the popularity of fashion is an inevitable subject, we can attribute the huge proportion of it to the fact that many people love to follow their role models. Celebrities, models and public figures have been extensively copied especially by the younger generation. Whereas their impact on people has never been like this before, more and more people become similar in their appearances. This similarity can be mainly considered as a reliable indicator of this trend. These days, for example, it is not surprising to see a piece of clothing, worn by the wide number of people in short period of time or a resembling hairdo style in the majority of the youngster.

In addition, we can go even further and see similar trends in industrial goods. Industry deliberately sets out to create new modes and trends, the purpose of which is to maximize their profit, because they are aware of customer behaviors. Gone are the days which product durability was a crucial factor in the production line. Knowing consumers preferences, companies massively produce resembling goods to fulfill market needs. While mass production leads to lower price, more people afford to obtain these products, which manifested as the popularity of these goods.

Therefore, in my opinion, people's attraction toward stylish clothes and consumer products can be utterly interpreted as a sign of people's tendency to be similar.

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People intersted in imitate others in various subject of fashions(clothes,shoes,furniturs) pattern of models and social behavoirs.From my perspective ,it isnot acceptable for all we do,totally i disagree ,since,in some negative cases copying...

People intersted in imitate others in various subject of fashions(clothes,shoes,furniturs) pattern of models and social behavoirs.From my perspective ,it isnot acceptable for all we do,totally i disagree ,since,in some negative cases copying influence on wrong feilds which leads to harmful feelings and jealous.
To start with,most of the people are keen on do similar things like others as todays by use of internet it is common to know what is the mode owing to the show off their lifes.For instance,fashion-conscoius declare specefic model (or colour of clothes or shoes)so , the people wearing fashion and follow customs in order to get attention by others not only willing people who care about the newest ones,but also a huge range of men who concentrate populars at a perticular time.Moreover,individuals of society based on kind of inner feelings have a tendency variations and changes in styles.
On the other hand , some people feel jealous about other's possessions.Unfortunately,such negative behaviors decline our innovation and creativity.As an illustration,if someone choose dominant product in bazzar it distreputed throughout the places .That is , by passing time according to the convention people use fashions even dislike that.It is undeniable that ,sometimes trendy behavior could have a positive effect on career progression,higher improvement and appropriate choices to motivate people.If i want explain more for better comprehention globally i should say ;if you live in a city people loves reading books then ,you tend to study newspaper ,megazine and books as well.Hence,by peer pressure all of them contribute in a daily news discussion.Another positive reason is substantial impact of media when advertisements bombarded some messages tend to use it .
To sum up, i disagree in general however,i believe social conformity and norms views.

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These days, people prefer to design and set products with hints from the goods from other people or companies, especially in fashion industries. What in this essay is going to discuss is my agreed opinion for several reasons.
Increasing usage of...

These days, people prefer to design and set products with hints from the goods from other people or companies, especially in fashion industries. What in this essay is going to discuss is my agreed opinion for several reasons.
Increasing usage of the social media on the internet, people are trying to put on clothes and are using goods look like celebrities and good-looking persons, there are several reasons concerning this matter. The first reason why people copy others is the lack of creativity in such a way that the copy is far easier than design from the beginning, as a consequence, these people do not learn to invent or create the goods. As an illustration, there are various companies in China, which is manufactured and produced fake goods with copping rewarding brands from developed countries in order to export them to developing countries for purpose of consumption poor people. Indeed, there are not only demands copy and produce products with low quality in society, but also high benefits for firms, if they made goods like them.
In my opinion, what the best activity we can do to cut down the rate of the break copyright rules which is legislated by governments is giving licenses from brands and also localize the outputs of satisfying producers in order to shack the creative power of people as well as reducing use low-quality products.
To sum up, people try to use the designed products from others more than before more and more with poor quality due to the fact that it is so easy than create an output. Hence, if they want to have better quality in goods, they should stop breaking copyright.

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These days, people prefer to design and set products with hints from the goods from other people or companies, especially in fashion industries. What in this essay is going to discuss is my agreed opinion for several reasons.
Increasing usage of...

These days, people prefer to design and set products with hints from the goods from other people or companies, especially in fashion industries. What in this essay is going to discuss is my agreed opinion for several reasons.
Increasing usage of the social media on the internet, people are trying to put on clothes and are using goods look like celebrities and good-looking persons, there are several reasons concerning this matter. The first reason why people copy others is the lack of creativity in such a way that the copy is far easier than design from the beginning, as a consequence, these people do not learn to invent or create the goods. As an illustration, there are various companies in China, which is manufactured and produced fake goods with copping rewarding brands from developed countries in order to export them to developing countries for purpose of consumption poor people. Indeed, there are not only demands copy and produce products with low quality in society, but also high benefits for firms, if they made goods like them.
In my opinion, what the best activity we can do to cut down the rate of the break copyright rules which is legislated by governments is giving licenses from brands and also localize the outputs of satisfying producers in order to shack the creative power of people as well as reducing use low-quality products.
To sum up, people try to use the designed products from others more than before more and more with poor quality due to the fact that it is so easy than create an output. Hence, if they want to have better quality in goods, they should stop breaking copyright.

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With the advent of technology and ever-increasing products, people are of the possibility to imitate each other in terms of fashionable garments and the consumption of merchandise. I completely agree with this idea that society members are...

With the advent of technology and ever-increasing products, people are of the possibility to imitate each other in terms of fashionable garments and the consumption of merchandise. I completely agree with this idea that society members are effectively influenced in particular concerning fashion and other services.

To begin with, the phenomenon of fashion can be considered as a social aspect. To clarify, society members especially ordinary people have a tendency to follow the footsteps of their favorite person such as celebrities, actors, and actress, athletes and even political iconic personalities. So, when prominent characters are highly likely to change their lifestyle, the mass of society tend to obey role model. Although a large percentage of ordinary people are enthusiastic to mimic renowned people, there can be found that popular individuals also copy one another. The friendly party can be a good example of the exhibition for women that pay attention to details and their friend's objects.

In addition, we, in contemporary society, are faced with a multidimensional phenomenon so-called consumerism. It is meant that people consume or purchase in the market not only for meeting their needs but for exhibiting their social status. In other words, conspicuous consumption is rooted mainly in the fact that commodity would be a symbol of social prestige and identity. Moreover, it should be noticed that trend-setter people are set to establish a cutting-edge fashion and they render it obsolete themselves once again. Ergo, the false cycle would be constantly continued.

In conclusion, the phenomenon of fashion and consumption are hard to come by to be totally investigated. I, however, assume that show-off and luxurious lifestyle are factors that play a pivotal role in fueling this process.

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The recent years have witnessed a growing increase in the popularity of fashion clothes as well as the tendency of consuming goods. Whilst many people subscribe to the viewpoint that this is rooted in human’s nature to copy each other, I would...

The recent years have witnessed a growing increase in the popularity of fashion clothes as well as the tendency of consuming goods. Whilst many people subscribe to the viewpoint that this is rooted in human’s nature to copy each other, I would contend that this might be justified by different reasons.
It is an indisputable fact that people are willing to achieve success in their lives and considering successful role models seems to be the easiest way to reach this goal. It would be advantageous for most people, for example, to follow celebrities and behave like them or wear their favorite style of clothes so that people will probably be able to gain their favorable social status. Therefore, many people opine that growing fashion industry and ever-increasing rate of consumerism have reinforced the fact that there is deep tendency for mainstream society to act and live based on their successful role models.
Opposing view, nevertheless, asserts that individuals tend to put on trendy clothes due to their own attitudes. By way of illustration, some citizens are inclined to enhance their self-confidence. They, consequently, choose to wear stylish outfits. Additionally, high quality of some fashion clothes sometimes gives rise to the popularity of this industry. Similarly, same justifications might be considered for consuming goods. The role of the media, particularly advertising industry in encouraging people to purchase same products is widely acknowledged these days. These examples, as a result, can show the key role of other reasons along with people’s nature to copy each other.
By way of conclusion, despite of the fact that people’s willingness to imitate each other might be seen in the popularity of fashion industry and consumerism, I believe that there might be different reasons for this like people’s attitudes or impact of the media.

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It is evident that individuals have been into fashion recently much more than they used to be. Although some people believe that this trend is rooted in the fact that human is willing to imitate others, I personally suppose that there are other...

It is evident that individuals have been into fashion recently much more than they used to be. Although some people believe that this trend is rooted in the fact that human is willing to imitate others, I personally suppose that there are other contributing factors. The above-mentioned idea will be discussed to draw a conclusion at the end of the essay.
The popularity of some products among the populace is rooted in some factors. First and foremost, advertising has a huge impact on the number and type of sold goods. For example, after a series of advertisements about Iphone 8, Apple company has seen a dramatic increase in sale of thisproduct. As a result, purchasing behaviour of people are highly influenced by advertising. Another factor that has a substantial effecton sale trend is a limitation imposed bga producer or retailer. For illustration consider Apple companythat reduces not only the amount of production but only services for previous models of cell phones. It is vivid that in such situations people are forced to buy some special types of products inspite of their interests.
Although human being is sociable, she or he has strong sense of uniqeness. In other words, an individual is passionate about being outstanding. A celebrity, for example, spends vast sums of money buying a special clothes designed by a well-known designer. Therefore, human being pfefers uniqueness to imitation.
In conclusion, some reasons to prove if a product gains popularity, it is not just only because of human tendency to copy another one were provided. I personally believe that some compelling factors force people to purchase pre-determined goods.

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By far the most obvious disparity between humankind and animal has been the imitation phenomena that lead to radical changes and subsequently dramatic breakthroughs in the human's life. It has reflected on all of diverse respects of life even on...

By far the most obvious disparity between humankind and animal has been the imitation phenomena that lead to radical changes and subsequently dramatic breakthroughs in the human's life. It has reflected on all of diverse respects of life even on type of productions that one consumes such clothes. From a large group people 's point of view, the nomination of one commodity is only originated in the sense of emulation. My position, however, does not completely comply with this notion owing to the existence of other substantial factors having inevitable effects. There are cogent arguments on both sides of this contentious topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by my take on the controversy.
There are a significant number of explanations why people demonstrate intense tendency toward buying a specific product. First and foremost, a contributing factor is more likely the existence of an intrinsic force called emulation. Individuals, especially a great number of women every now and then, are to be cautious of others in connection to whatever the rest of people do, eat or even wear in view of the sense of competition deeply rooted in their nature. For instance, according to the inaccurate conception saying, "clothes make the man.", people, if being of intention to be go-gather, thoughtlessly will imitate from what others wear, in fact, they dress for success. Moreover, it is highly considerable that this process is able to possess an indirect effect on the increase of advocates of one commodity, although should these goods lack essential characteristics, those probably disappear eventually. Therefore, the renown of a product can be temporary in this way.
On the other hand, I would side with those who believe, emulation cannot be vital enough to maintain the popularity of a product. Failing to provide adequate quality for consumers Invading to snap up one production only because of either keeping up with the fashion or copying another one, goods do not have the ability to hold their position in the market with respect to extremely fierce competition in today 's market. Not only could high quality every so often grab ones' attention, but also it would eliminate other goods from the market. One of the most familiar specimens has been Nivea cream which could have lived up to people's expectations and win over their trust as well as heart for decades. In this case, the factor of imitation have gradually faded so that it has been affected by a wide range of features. By comparison, taking the initiative to increase the sense of emulation drive manufacturers to produce much higher quality, thereby improving the popularity of a specific commodity.
To make a long story to short, by putting all of aforementioned facts together, the conclusion can be drawn that while the innate factor of imitation can entice people to flood toward purchasing one product, the latter factor, quality, can play a key role to support popularity of it. I completely agree this result.

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ببخشید یه سوال داشتم. قبلا تو سایت یه قسمتی بود که می شد رایتینگ تسک وان و تو رو که خودمون نوشتیم با یه هزینه ای بفرستیم و تصحیح بشه...ولی یه مدته این قسمت فعال نیست...میخواستم بپرسم اگه بخوایم رایتینگ تسک وان و تو خودمون رو برای تصحیح اونجا...

ببخشید یه سوال داشتم. قبلا تو سایت یه قسمتی بود که می شد رایتینگ تسک وان و تو رو که خودمون نوشتیم با یه هزینه ای بفرستیم و تصحیح بشه...ولی یه مدته این قسمت فعال نیست...میخواستم بپرسم اگه بخوایم رایتینگ تسک وان و تو خودمون رو برای تصحیح اونجا بفرستیم، اون قسمت فعال نمیشه؟

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تا کی تصحیح می کنید و جوابش رو کجا باید ببینیم؟
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The recent decades have faced an upsurge in the tendency of human to imitate one another. When this question arises whether people tend to do the same as someone else does or not, it seems that individuals hold different views. Although copying...

The recent decades have faced an upsurge in the tendency of human to imitate one another. When this question arises whether people tend to do the same as someone else does or not, it seems that individuals hold different views. Although copying things such as clothing and consumer products have been prevalent among some certain social classes, all people do not approve this behavior.

The current trend in clothes styles or other items may not make a great contribution to the choices of some individuals. This is because they usually give priority to their favorite objects. By way of illustration, they are highly unlikely to follow the latest fashion cloths and expensive commodities. Therefore, copying one another is not to be seen among all people of society.

However, modern styles already enjoy much popularity and an array of fans. Inasmuch as advertising industry are playing a significant role in the taste of people, their preferences for clothing are undergoing massive changes. Even a cursory examination of favorite cloths of the young reinforces this belief. This is shown by copying the cloths of celebrities and well-known individuals.

Moreover, with the advent of the internet, people can easily be informed about state-of-the-art products across the world. If a survey of possessions of people are done, it is bound to reveal the tendency of people to purchase the same goods as each other. A case in point is buying costly watches, flashy cars and high-rise buildings that is common among upper-class families.

To conclude, despite the differences between the attitudes of people towards copying one another, majority of them are willing to imitate each other.

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memorized phrases can be found. an adequate range of vocabulary is attempted. ideas are often poorly developed.
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Nowadays, people inclinations have considerably increased in case of following fashion stuffs than ever before, and it has not only in clothes but in other consumer goods. In this essay we will launch a full-scale investigation into the reasons...

Nowadays, people inclinations have considerably increased in case of following fashion stuffs than ever before, and it has not only in clothes but in other consumer goods. In this essay we will launch a full-scale investigation into the reasons of this phenomenon.
Absorbing individuals to copy certain goods and clothes is considered in twofold: the media and advertisement. At first, it appears that media is substantially effective and it leads to wide-spreading fashion. Actors, for example, are glamorous role models particularly for youngsters. Therefore, many young ambitious people try to find better appearance, because of this they would persuade to change their life style like actors that they have seen on television. In addition, advertisement is a key factor influencing peoples taste. Besides, introducing their products to customers and producers more care about their incomes and how sell their goods. Therefore, manufacturer for aware guiding customers to buy their products are bound to use charmer people.
On the other hand, some times, choosing this potential style for buying or clothing might not choose freely by people. Nevertheless, putting on this way and people are set to change their taste. take, for instance, the students in youth age that they might put on peer pressure and even social stress, as a result , they will be accepted a common style for being like others. Thus, it seems that media and advertising could trigger goods reputation between people.
In conclusion, as above-mentioned facts give a one glimpse of potential reasons of popularity to copy of fashion products. Furthermore, I aver that people tend to copy from famous people and it have been created by advertisement and media. However, peer pressure and inclination for being stylish are played a pivotal rule, as well.

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a very good range of lexical. connectives have been used almost imprecisely followed by some impressions from the writers first language
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People have always tended to copy each other. It seems that high demands for fashion clothes and consumer goods are perfect examples for explaining this phenomenon.
Clothes, when people are in public, are the first impression that...

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People have always tended to copy each other. It seems that high demands for fashion clothes and consumer goods are perfect examples for explaining this phenomenon.
Clothes, when people are in public, are the first impression that others get before engaging in conversations. It is a natural instinct to judge people’s appearances and reciprocally to be judged for the clothes worn. Nobody wants to look strangely different from others and be considered as an anomaly. Thus, people observe new trends in fashion and follow them often quickly. This emulation is maximized amongst many millennials for example. In fact, they care more about what their peers wear rather than thinking what clothes might suit them. It can be argued that fashion clothes are basically worn to get people’s admirations.
Popularity of consumer goods in societies is another instance. What mass productions in food industries elucidate is high similarities in consumer decisions. This can be seen in the packaging, portions and even nutrition facts labels on products. Moreover, despite the incredibly competitive market of electronic devices such as smart phones, almost all major companies feature many same fundamental attributes in their products which proves that people’s interests in electronic devices are becoming much alike.
To sum up, it is undeniable that human beings have always been copying each other in many ways as far as I am concerned. In a sense, it is not far from the truth that mankind is a “mirror” for itself when it comes to tendencies. By looking at the popularity of consumer goods and fashion clothes, this argument becomes more tangible.

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variety of structures are used with some minor problems. the answer could be improved if ideas specially in the third paragraph had been developed.
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In our fast changing world there is an ever-increasing demand for fashion clothes and customer goods. Thus, when a question arises whether human have a tendency to imitate due to the prevalent clothes and common customer goods, people have...

In our fast changing world there is an ever-increasing demand for fashion clothes and customer goods. Thus, when a question arises whether human have a tendency to imitate due to the prevalent clothes and common customer goods, people have divided perspectives. It seems that a vast majority of people tend to imitate in many aspect of their life.
It is an undeniable fact that human is born with particular traits that some of which are woven tightly into human identity such as human ability to make a replica of something. For many people imitating not only is it a kind of lifestyle, but it also boost their sense of belonging. When celebrities have an especial hairstyle or wear special clothes, this makes outstanding contribution to hairstyle and clothes of their audience. Research reveals that in recent decades selecting customer goods and clothes have undergone a revolution due to people’s passion to copy their desirable roll-model’s appearance and give them a sense of belonging to a group of people who share an interest.
Most importantly, though, people are vulnerable thanks to this aptitude. People are under pressure caused by the media to expand this rule that if people want to be acceptable in a society, they have to possess the latest releases to the fashion market. Admittedly, media as well as branded products have been dominated by western culture; thus, the media make tremendous effort to manipulate people in order to boost turnover. Since having more tendency to imitate, young people are main target of western culture presented by television programs.
In conclusion, the high rate of making purchase of fashionable products speaks that people are willing to make a replica of something. Although it reveals people talent, this trend can turn out to be problematic.

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ideas are great but frequent errors can be seen. the response is good. in some parts connectives need a second look
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In recent years, a sizeable amount of consumption of clothes and other things which are popularity has increased. Some people believe that copying and purchasing is necessary for contemporary living. However, I personally disagree...

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In recent years, a sizeable amount of consumption of clothes and other things which are popularity has increased. Some people believe that copying and purchasing is necessary for contemporary living. However, I personally disagree with the view that following of fashion.
From an environmental viewpoint, the number of companies, when consumption of popular goods rises, are more likely to increase. Thus, companies should consume more raw materials and natural resources. Furthermore, a lot of waste is produced. Consumption of natural resources and waste production leads to environmental degradation. In recent decades, since wooden goods have been a popular good, companies are compelled to cut down trees. Thus the wildlife habitat is destroyed.
As well as, people's desire for fashion and copying fashion has an adverse effect on the cost of living. In businesses world, when demand for some goods increases, the price of them will rise. As a result, the price of necessary goods is more likely to increase dramatically. Thus, some families who have low salaries or live in deprived areas find it difficult to purchase necessary products.
Moreover, people who look for fashion may face mental problems. Since they do not have enough time and attention to others aspect of living for example family, journey, cinema and books, they are unable to benefit from relaxing atmosphere and playing with their children. Thus, they are more likely to become depressed.
Due to the reasons mentioned above, I personally believe that fashion and copying fashion might have several adverse effects on the environment, economic and mental health.

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In recent years, a sizeable amount of consumption of clothes and other things which are popularity has increased. Some people believe that copying and purchasing is necessary for contemporary living. However, I personally disagree with the view...

In recent years, a sizeable amount of consumption of clothes and other things which are popularity has increased. Some people believe that copying and purchasing is necessary for contemporary living. However, I personally disagree with the view that following of fashion.
From an environmental viewpoint, the number of companies, when consumption of popular goods rises, are more likely to increase. Thus, companies should consume more raw materials and natural resources. Furthermore, a lot of waste is produced. Consumption of natural resources and waste production leads to environmental degradation. In recent decades, since wooden goods have been a popular good, companies are compelled to cut down trees. Thus the wildlife habitat is destroyed.
As well as, people's desire for fashion and copying fashion has an adverse effect on the cost of living. In businesses world, when demand for some goods increases, the price of them will rise. As a result, the price of necessary goods is more likely to increase dramatically. Thus, some families who have low salaries or live in deprived areas find it difficult to purchase necessary products.
Moreover, people who look for fashion may face mental problems. Since they do not have enough time and attention to others aspect of living for example family, journey, cinema and books, they are unable to benefit from relaxing atmosphere and playing with their children. Thus, they are more likely to become depressed.
Due to the reasons mentioned above, I personally believe that fashion and copying fashion might have several adverse effects on the environment, economic and mental health.

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some inaccuracies in sentence forms and word formation. poor use of collocations . ideas lack focus.
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The tendency of human being to copy one another
is shown in the popularity of many thing. I think
that is because ,they think it make them more successful and feel proud, unfortunately in our country people are more interested in copy life...

The tendency of human being to copy one another
is shown in the popularity of many thing. I think
that is because ,they think it make them more successful and feel proud, unfortunately in our country people are more interested in copy life styles like how wear,what wear , when wear or how do their hair or which is the newest shoes and so on to buy , it's has only one reasons and it's
because they want to say # see us world, we are the best #

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you have failed to address the task completely.
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In statistics, there is a definition which is called “mode”. Mode shows the pick of a histogram and means the most repeated observation in a research. Now, the question is if the human actions focus on the mode or not? In my opinion, the answer...

In statistics, there is a definition which is called “mode”. Mode shows the pick of a histogram and means the most repeated observation in a research. Now, the question is if the human actions focus on the mode or not? In my opinion, the answer is yes!
First of all, I believe that many behaviors of people are because of “swarm intelligence”. This idiom means some time people don’t think about an action individually. People all together tried to find a solution, such as the behavior of ants to find food. This kind of intelligence causes that a special plan is followed by many people. We can find this in many manner of people, such as the pattern of driving in a society.
Second, people feel more comfortable by following a routine behavior of society. For example, if somebody chooses her/his dresses according to fashion, he/she will feel more self-confidence and can be sure that everybody will accept his/her appearance.
Third, following the ordinary behavior and appearance of other people causes to consume less time and energy to decide about many things. There are some predefined steps to communicate others and there is no need to think and decide about them.
To sum up, I believe that our brain prefer to follow the patterns which are tested by others. This method might save us. In other hand, this action may cause some problems. It may avoid invention and correction. So, we should be aware of our brain desire to copy and repeat others behavior. Sometimes we should break our mental tabu and tried new ways.

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there is a sheer tendency to go off topic. problems in countable or uncountable nouns. acceptable paragraphing.
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Tendency of being to copy one another has become common among individuals, the amount of popularity of fashion clothes and costumer goods can be vivid emblem of this tendency .While keeping up with other people is designed to target a mass...

Tendency of being to copy one another has become common among individuals, the amount of popularity of fashion clothes and costumer goods can be vivid emblem of this tendency .While keeping up with other people is designed to target a mass people, personally with respect to the my personality I dislike to be similar with other people .
Today, most of the people spend the whole of our lives keeping up with other people, thereby they like to wear fashion clothes and they want buy similar costumer goods. They have tendency to copy other people disregarding quality and model of these clothes . The tendency can manipulate buyers to buy goods despite selling inferior goods . This cause impulsive shopping among people and therefore in spite of boosting the sale, it will misguide buyers to buy things in contrast with their cultural values. This tendency in my opinion, can be only valuable when people are following suitable role models or rewarding beliefs. For example, athletes wear similar clothes in global competitions to show their nationality . Moreover, Muslim women cover scarves to illustrate their religion belief with their tendency to copy holy women.
As can be concluded, I believe tendency of being to copy another one, should be controlled in fact it should be guided towards perfection . In my life, I like to be unique person ,thus similarity to other people or following fashion type cannot be my choice except in my religious or national beliefs .In as much as, the imitation of others may be only good in imitating positive behaviors.

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سعی کنید قبل از شروع به نوشتن، موضوع را خیلی خوب بررسی کنید تا مطمئن باشید، رایتینگ نوشته شده با موضوع همخوانی کامل دارد. همچنین در استفاده از مترادف ها دقت بیشتری داشته باشید. این رایتینگ نمره 5 میگیرد. برای تصحیح دقیق تر رایتینگ خود و دریافت...

سعی کنید قبل از شروع به نوشتن، موضوع را خیلی خوب بررسی کنید تا مطمئن باشید، رایتینگ نوشته شده با موضوع همخوانی کامل دارد. همچنین در استفاده از مترادف ها دقت بیشتری داشته باشید. این رایتینگ نمره 5 میگیرد. برای تصحیح دقیق تر رایتینگ خود و دریافت راهکار برای بالا بردن نمره، میتوانید از سامانه تصحیح رایتینگ تیم آیلتس بیان برتر به این آدرس https://vip-talk.com/correction استفاده نمایید.

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Many individuals hold the view that humans tend to replicate each other through fashionable clothes that they put on and commodities that they harness. In my opinion , I completely agree with this perspective
It is true that more and more...

Many individuals hold the view that humans tend to replicate each other through fashionable clothes that they put on and commodities that they harness. In my opinion , I completely agree with this perspective
It is true that more and more ordinary people have been pursuing the same clothing styles which are considered as the most popular ones . The prime example of this tendency could be observed in most social events in Vietnam , where celebrities are inclined to dress up trendy and elegant outfits , which are advertised by globally influential fashion icons or from fashion shows like Paris fashion week. Putting on these luxurious clothes could make them more confident , shoeing their socio economic status. Another example could be seen in daily life. Most inhabitants , particularly the younger generation , often go for garments that are novel and popular.Some even copy the style of their idols such as Ronaldo , one of the most renowned football players in Portuguese , whose fashion style is regarded as freshed and elegant.
Besides copying other's clothing styles , people in the present days also emulate each other via consumer goods. It is the case that prior to coming to a certain grocery or electrical store to purchase their necessity items , consumers tend to ask others for advice whether these products are well-made and they can pick out these if their advisers agree. This trend could be seen in all kinds of products , ranging from food items to electronic gadgets. To illustrate ,buyers would head for an IPhone if some of their friends are using it and hailing it as an excellent smartphone
In conclusion,I strongly advocate that people nowadays are replicating each other , especially in terms of trendy clothes and commodities

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زمانی که از لغات جدید در نوشته خود استفاده میکنید، خصوصا اگر این لغات پارافریز لغات سوال است، حتما مطمئن شوید، لغات دقیقا هم معنی هستند وگرنه اشکال Problem with the semantic fields از شما گرفته خواهد شد. به هرجهت رایتینگ خوبی ارائه شده است و...

زمانی که از لغات جدید در نوشته خود استفاده میکنید، خصوصا اگر این لغات پارافریز لغات سوال است، حتما مطمئن شوید، لغات دقیقا هم معنی هستند وگرنه اشکال Problem with the semantic fields از شما گرفته خواهد شد. به هرجهت رایتینگ خوبی ارائه شده است و میتواند نمره 6 تا 6.5 را بگیرد. برای تصحیح دقیق تر رایتینگ خود و دریافت راهکار برای بالا بردن نمره، میتوانید از سامانه تصحیح رایتینگ تیم آیلتس بیان برتر به این آدرس https://vip-talk.com/correction استفاده نمایید.

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It is highly believed that in modern and postmodern world, people not only have a high tendency to copy each other in clothes, but at times they make an attempt to behave exactly the same as others. I strongly hold the fact that it can be...

It is highly believed that in modern and postmodern world, people not only have a high tendency to copy each other in clothes, but at times they make an attempt to behave exactly the same as others. I strongly hold the fact that it can be obviously observed in fashion dresses and other consumer products. Given this fact, there are some socially and instinctively reasons represented in this essay.

First and foremost, socially speaking, individuals tend to be socially acceptable. To illustrate more, most of the time, while walking in public places, persons watching a large number of people are wearing fabulous clothes, so they feel it is worthwhile that provide the same stuffs like others. Consequently, in this way not only could they obtain self-confident, but also they would satisfied that are not different from the majority of the public. It is worth mentioning that this act is more seen in children among their peers compared with adults.

Secondly, having been imitating of celebrities is a widespread issue. Naturally, when human being are fascinated by someone including actors or athletes- even teachers fall into this category- put all their energy to behave like them. For example, in USA, a huge number of both the young and the old are fond of George clooney. Therefore, they strive to either wear similar to him, or speak the same as he speaks.

The last but not least, it is said that the more using, the more having quality. to elaborate on, being applied some special materials by the most of people indicate the fact that these sorts of goods are of a high standard and this thought will buttress the idea that things consumed by the majority are so worthy that virtually all society members require to purchase them In addition, individuals living in a progressive community no longer need to spare their valuable time to find information regarding the attribute of favorite products.

It is concluded that humankind inherently have a willing to copy others and as mentioned above it lies on socially and naturally causes. However, if only people would comply with their own view irrespective of others' opinion. It is hoped that being fashion-conscious among persons become less and less.

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رایتینگ بسیار خوب و مرتبطی به موضوع ارائه شده است. جملات تاپیک بسیار خوب مرتب شده و به خوبی نیز develop شده اند اما اشکالات minor در LR و GRA وجود دارد که سطح نمره شما را در حد 6.5 پایین می‌آورد. برای تصحیح دقیق تر رایتینگ خود و دریافت راهکار...

رایتینگ بسیار خوب و مرتبطی به موضوع ارائه شده است. جملات تاپیک بسیار خوب مرتب شده و به خوبی نیز develop شده اند اما اشکالات minor در LR و GRA وجود دارد که سطح نمره شما را در حد 6.5 پایین می‌آورد. برای تصحیح دقیق تر رایتینگ خود و دریافت راهکار برای بالا بردن نمره، میتوانید از سامانه تصحیح رایتینگ تیم آیلتس بیان برتر به این آدرس https://vip-talk.com/correction استفاده نمایید.

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