بیشتر رایتینگ های تسک دو آیلتس از ساختار زیر استفاده میکنن:
1-Introduction
2-Supporting Paragraph 1
3-Supporting Paragraph 2
4-Conclusion
These paragraphs take up most of your essay and are therefore where most marks are won and lost. Write two good supporting paragraphs and you are most of the way to getting a good final mark.
در این پست موضوعات زیر مورد بررسی قرار میگیرن:
- look at what the examiners want
- look at good and bad examples
- show you how to write topic sentences
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اگزمینر از شما چی میخواد ؟ |
اگر به فرق بین نمره 5 و 8 نگاه کنیم میبینیم که اگزمینر از شما میخواد که با with ‘relevant, extended and supported ideas. به سوال جواب بدین.
This means that your ideas must actually relate, or be linked, specifically to the question and then you have to explain what your ideas mean and then support them with examples.
Good and bad examples :
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به مثال های زیر نگاه کنین و به آنچه که ممتحن می خواد فکر کنین. |
Question- Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sample 1
Many parents in full-time employment prefer to leave their children with grandparents when they are at work because they feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family circle. In other words, they do not trust a stranger to look after their child and feel confident that no harm will come to the child whilst being looked after by grandma or grandpa. For example, a 2013 study from Cambridge University showed that 62% of working mothers prefer a member of the immediate family to provide care when they are at work.
Sample 2
Grandparents are the best people to look after children for very obvious reasons. Grandparents really love their grandchildren and would never harm them. Also, the children really love their grandparents and feel comfortable with them. Finally, grandparents have lots of experience taking care of children because they are old and looked after children for many years themselves.
از نظر شما کدوم نمونه بهتر بود؟
نمونه 1 یک main argument داره - والدین پدربزرگ و مادربزرگ رو ترجیح می دن چون به اونا اعتماد دارن. در جمله اول خیلی واضح این رو بیان کرده و بعد در جمله دوم علت این رو توضیح داده. همچنین از یک مثال بسیار خاص برای حمایت از ایده استفاده کرده. این دقیقا همون چیزیه که ممتحن می خواد.
نمونه 2 argument های مختلفی داره و اکثر اونا بسیار کلی هستن. با توضيحات بسط نيافته و فاقد مثال. این دقیقاً همون چیزیه که ممتحن نمی خواد.
| How to write a topic sentence? |  |
The very first sentence in your supporting paragraph should be the topic sentence.Each paragraph should have one main idea only and the topic sentence tells the reader what this idea is.
این باعث می شه پاراگراف شما و کل essay واضح تر و راحت تر خونده بشه.
You will gain marks for coherence in the IELTS writing test if you do this.
Topic sentence و به عنوان تابلوهایی در نظر بگیرین که خواننده رو به جایی که می خواد بره هدایت می کنه.
| Let’s look at another question | |
Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 % female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?
بنابراین باید دلایلی برای و مخالفت با اختصاص درصد مشخصی از پست های نیروی کار به زنان فکر کرد.
For :
Fairness - Equality - Prevent discrimination - Women outperform men in many jobs - Women outperform men in many schools and university subjects
Against:
- Should be based on merit, not gender
- A few jobs, like construction, are better suited to males
I support the ‘for’ category so I am going to pick two of those reasons and write topic sentences for them.
شما همیشه باید ایده هایی رو انتخاب کنین که بیشتر در مورد اون می دونین، یا به عبارت دیگه، می تونین با مثال هایی توضیح بدین و از ایده هاتون پشتیبانی کنین.
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Women should be allocated a certain percentage of roles because to not do so, discriminates against them because of their gender.
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Females should be given a bigger share of jobs because women currently outperform males in most university subjects.
همونطور که می بینین، تمام کاری که من انجام دادم اینه که ایده های خودمو به روشی واضح معرفی کنم. برای انجام این کار نیازی به استفاده از زبان خیلی پیشرفته نیست.
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میدونی چرا اکثر داوطلبان آزمون آیلتس 5.5 میگیرن؟ اینجا کلیک کن تا برات بگم |
