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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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There are some people making the general assertion that people these days are faced with countless choices. However, I completely disagree with this idea for two major reasons which will be discussed in detail.

To begin with, although there might be found an abundant supply of items to choose from, circumstances limit people’s freedom and flexibility. In other words, regardless of the availability of ample opportunities, it is not technically feasible for everyone to consider all the existing options when making a decision. This is amply illustrated by one’s income level and purchasing clothes; it is incontestable that someone from low income brackets cannot afford to buy designer clothes no matter how many different brands are offered in shops. Therefore, only the few privileged are likely to be overwhelmed by numerous possibilities to take into account.

Another rational justification is that nowadays a growing number of people tend to opt for quality goods which are outnumbered by similar but mediocre copies that markets are teeming with. Simply put, considering that modern consumers are likely to prefer authentic and high quality products, they automatically exclude other alternatives. For instance, some refuse to buy anything labeled “made in China” as they believe all Chinese productions fail to meet acceptable standards. More specifically, the prevalence of these items restricts buyers’ flexibility and omits many choices from their lists.

In conclusion, contrary to the popular belief, I believe that people are not provided with too many options to choose from. The most obvious argument justifying this assumption is that it may not be financially viable for all people to consider pricy and famous brands and yet many have a tendency to choose lasting and genuine products. These limiting factors have far-reaching effects on what consumers put in their shopping basket.  

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من واقعا از موسسه شما ممنونم. بخاطر ورک شاپ هاتون. نمی دونم چطوری تشکر کنم. فقط یک خواهش دارم اینکه سمپل این دفعه اصلاحاتی را که با قرمز نوشته بودید را ترجمه نکردید. خواستم که اکر امکان داره این اصلاحات را ترجمه کنید.
با تشکر...

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من واقعا از موسسه شما ممنونم. بخاطر ورک شاپ هاتون. نمی دونم چطوری تشکر کنم. فقط یک خواهش دارم اینکه سمپل این دفعه اصلاحاتی را که با قرمز نوشته بودید را ترجمه نکردید. خواستم که اکر امکان داره این اصلاحات را ترجمه کنید.
با تشکر فراوان از زحمات شما بزرگواران

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It is often argued that as time passes, technology-based stuff is being improved, science progress rapidly and everything changes that result in human faces more and more new ways to choose. Based on this fast speed of growth of the world, it...

It is often argued that as time passes, technology-based stuff is being improved, science progress rapidly and everything changes that result in human faces more and more new ways to choose. Based on this fast speed of growth of the world, it seems logical that many people believe we have more options to select.
In general view, we can analogize the human life to shape of a tree which has been made of a trunk and some main branches which come out from it. Every branch is divided to much more small ones. It means as we go forward, we confront much more alternatives to choose from.
In detailed view, we can find some reasons to explain this statement clearly. Firstly, people's lifestyles depend on technology which is improving with an extraordinary rate that leads to the invention of new products, tools, and methods in different fields such as industry, medicine, transportation and etc. It makes clear that in our daily life, we confront much more choices than before.
Secondly, science progresses in research centers and academic environment, thus the notion of our uncertainty which turns to information increases. This means our cognition to our around environment rises. This rapid growth of dimensions of our known rules about indefinite world reveals new ways to go through. In fact, in due of this progress, we gain lots of data to analyze and change them to information which makes a broader range of alternative in front of us.
In conclusion, based on reasons which were explained above, people meet much more choices and this range is extending day by day.

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It is often argued that human being is struggling with too many choices. I completely agree with the idea that people face plenty of choices in today’s life.
There are several reasons why people have to consider multiple factors of how their...

It is often argued that human being is struggling with too many choices. I completely agree with the idea that people face plenty of choices in today’s life.
There are several reasons why people have to consider multiple factors of how their choice would make a difference in their whole life. Firstly, with the advent of industrial revolution. The society has undergone considerable changes in terms of technology and the complexity of it. For instance, old people or in some cases middle-aged ones find it very struggling to do their online purchasing or banking procedures on computers. This makes it even harder for those who want to utilize and get to know to use the product in advance for their routine life
Secondly, the impression of technology on costumers’ habits is one of the most important factors which has drastically affected their life. Nowadays the market makes it harder for those which are attempting to make a choice due to the variety of products available in the market, most specifically the products made in the same category such as mobile phones, computers, etc. In contrast, there were much easier choices to make due to no competitive market and no other choice to make in a specific category of product.
In conclusion, there might be some inconvenient situations that people in seek of their own choices, it might seem a bit challenging for them, and get to utilize the product available in the market. I believe that they have to keep themselves up to date and stick to the unstoppable train of technology.

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Increasing the rate of growth in different fields, specifically in technology has made huge effects on our lives. One the most important results of this change can be considered as a vast variety of options in both of short and long-term...

Increasing the rate of growth in different fields, specifically in technology has made huge effects on our lives. One the most important results of this change can be considered as a vast variety of options in both of short and long-term objectives of people. The more, we face ways, the harder we can choose. Choosing a place to live, a major to educate, a job to work or even smaller affairs such as buying our needs are some aspects of life that show us how hard we go forward among extra options which we should select among them.
In a simple instance, selecting a specific way to educate and gaining job has been known as the first and the most significant decision which everyone in his life must take. In recent years in comparison to some period of human’s life, like two hundred years ago or even more, we can easily see numerous options in field od education and job have been shaped. Inventing computers and some related productions such as the cell phone, laptops or enternet-based businesses can show a good example of this rapid speed of choice’s growth. If we look at some regions in where people live with lower levels of improvements, like old villages far from big cities, we’ll find out this big difference in our types of lives.
In conclusion, because of this truth, I mean unstoppable change and growth, I do believe that as time pass, human will face the harder situations, the more choices to choose, exactly like a tree which rises.

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While people just used to rely on a few options to choose in their life, nowadays various opportunities enable individuals to enjoy myriad choices to achieve their goals. There have been divisive idea in comparison of number of choices people...

While people just used to rely on a few options to choose in their life, nowadays various opportunities enable individuals to enjoy myriad choices to achieve their goals. There have been divisive idea in comparison of number of choices people have in the course of years. However relying on the availability of different choices not necessarily guarantee our success and lead us to our preferences.
On the one hand, there is an inextricable link between opportunities and number of choices exist. So many are of the opinion that nowadays availability of extra choices compared to past grossly has enriched people to reach their goals. That is a number of true choices enabling individuals to acquire desirable occasions is a bone of contention. In fact the availability of versatile options due to clear breakthroughs and growing progress of state-of-the-art technology represents more opportunities for people so as to attaining what they set for their life ambitions. Ubiquity of internet for instance solely opens a new window of many choices for new generation to choose range of their desires . contemporary art and educational records epitome it. Hansel, chances of many choices make them to opt several options simultaneously which facilitate their way of prosperity .
On the other hand, by contrast to the past, although it may seem that people were deprived of the cutting-edge technology, the considerable amount of prominent inventions show that they surely had the same opportunities and number of choices to follow. human in each categories of history has their own choices. Multifarious achievements which have left as legacy for us not only prove that without accessing high-tech which is supposed to create higher choices they record worthwhile methods, but also numerous techniques and devices just through their available choices indicate that how they handle their choices . In fact it wouldn't be a range of choices that make a community or ones prosperous and satisfied. It is the effort and struggle as well as being determined strengthen our mind how to use their choices and occasions.
To conclude, the crux of the matter is that we are required to be enlighten about availability of choices which are compatible with our abilities and creativity. Even comprehension of true choice is considered a kind of tremendous upheaval for us to try different chances to be flourished in our ambitions. So merely pride of more choices we enjoy now cannot be a privilege for this era if we do not truly explore and exploit them.

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It is often argued that human beings are exposed to an explosion of choices in modern life. I completely agree with the idea that people acquire plenty of choices in 21th-century society.

There are several reasons why people...

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It is often argued that human beings are exposed to an explosion of choices in modern life. I completely agree with the idea that people acquire plenty of choices in 21th-century society.

There are several reasons why people are bound to have a bunch of selections in the new world. Firstly, with the advent of industrial revolution, society has undergone considerable changes from radical changes at means of production, which enormously eradicated relations of production, to cultural transition. Thereby keeping up people's lifestyle with contemporary amendments. Consumer behavior can be a good example of this process. In fact, even though cutting-edge technology has potentially provided countless problems, it enables individuals to benefit from numerous choices through mass production.

Secondly, in addition to the deep impression of technology on consumer's notion, it has replaced the mechanic solidarity with the organic one. That is, not only has the previous formation deeply been deteriorated but it has predominantly been created state-of-the-art structures that expanding the scope of people's choices. In the past, for example, society members could not reap the benefits of much action freedom and had to obey the existing rules but nowadays in the capitalistic system, they are no longer greatly limited as they are willing to marry amicably someone who loves or wears a good dress they like. Moreover, people can take advantage of homo-sexual relationships which have been recognized legally.

In conclusions, although people have not enough gained unlimited freedom, it is my firm conviction that people have been freed from traditional constraints and have obtained more freedom to be highly likely to reach a lot of choices.

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In the modern world, there are individuals who consider we are faced with a veritable plethora of choices and options. I certainly do agree with this notion and will discuss it in this essay.

Questioning whether we are free of...

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In the modern world, there are individuals who consider we are faced with a veritable plethora of choices and options. I certainly do agree with this notion and will discuss it in this essay.

Questioning whether we are free of choice or not, some would bring up the fact that many circumstances and even in some cases natural disasters, they could not lead us to an excessive amount of choices and opportunities in our lifetime. Although I agree that life is not always fair and there are obstacles being thrown at us like rocks in tornados, they cannot stop us from pursuing our goals and dreams in the twenty-first century. I think barriers may drive us to another path but they definitely do not shorten our options.

I think that it suffices to say, we are bombarded each day with the necessity of making an endless stream of mundane decisions that could direct us to many life choices. We are choosing from myriads of TV channels, selecting one of those numerous playlists from our music library or even deciding what brand should we buy at the grocery store. According to philosophical studies, the destiny of every soul would change its direction with each of those tedious decisions in everyday life. To dive deeper, we have to determine which one of those dozens of majors we should take in college, which job would be the best for us, should our children go to a private or public school. To cut it short, back in our ancestors days, they hardly had any choices about what to do with their life comparing to our unlimited items to pick in our lifespan.

In conclusion, In my opinion, there are countless numbers of opportunities in our lives and we may be deemed lucky to be born in this generation of the overabundance of possibilities.

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it’s believed that in this day and age, there are plenty of alternatives. in my opinion, i completely agree that there are the vast manority of choices. in this essay, i tend to introduce the major explanation ehich will be explain in details in...

it’s believed that in this day and age, there are plenty of alternatives. in my opinion, i completely agree that there are the vast manority of choices. in this essay, i tend to introduce the major explanation ehich will be explain in details in the following paragraphs to draw a conclusion.
the most obvious reason is internet and tchnogy. in the past, some used to opt for their needed in the nearest supermarkets and shopping malls. however, in these days people prefer to surf pn the net and order the best one from several aspects like price, quality, etc.
another benefit obtained feom career. today, for inceasing the demands, companies and managers prefer to select some kinds of speacialist rather than who have a basic degrees. in last decades, the level of knowledge and efforts have increased. there had just several jobs, before.
the major disadvante associated with marriage or even having partner. because of various relationships and lack of commitment, youth prefer to live alone. so there will be demographic and will have ageing polpulation.
to draw a conclusion, even thogh having a lot of opportunities and choices have bad effects, i personally belive that it could be beneficial and give you the chance to have a better choice.

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It is certainly true that in this day and age, as people, we have too many options available for everything. Admittedly, in my opinion I agree that we have a long list to choose them.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that...

It is certainly true that in this day and age, as people, we have too many options available for everything. Admittedly, in my opinion I agree that we have a long list to choose them.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that technological devices. With the advent of technological devices, people lives’ are undergoing a revolution. That is, there are many choices that people want to them owing to competition companies. A good illustration of this is mobile phone that all of the brand attempt to sell their products by depicting a variety of mobile phones; people always amaze that which one is the best quality to choose?
Yet another compelling argument is that food is one of the primary needs of human beings, however we have too many options available for this basic necessity as well. The wide variety is available for people of all age groups, including toddlers. While, today we have a plenty of departmental stores full of baby foods, in olden days, baby food was prepared at home from ingredients available in the kitchen. We, furthermore, can see hundreds of restaurants within the same city, having various foods. This in turn alter desire of people to choose the best place for eating food restaurant or home. This situations is consequences of globalization.
To sum up, considering the points discuss above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we have a large number of choices in today’s world and it depends on you to how select them.

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Some people argue that the number of choices we could choose from has multiplied in the last decade, and we have redundant options now. While I agree that too many choices has made our lives harder, I believe that multitude of options might come...

Some people argue that the number of choices we could choose from has multiplied in the last decade, and we have redundant options now. While I agree that too many choices has made our lives harder, I believe that multitude of options might come in handy in some cases.
The numerous choices we are offered nowadays have adversely affected our everyday lives in many aspects. Firstly, having too many options to select from leaves us in an overwhelming position and makes it harder to choose the best choice. I believe that if we have only a few choices, it is definitely easier to choose. For example let’s assume we are taking a test in which we have to select the correct answer for the questions among two choices we are given and compare it with another quiz that we are offered four options to choose from for each question. It is certainly simpler to pass the first exam with flying colors. Secondly, lots of time have to be spent to choose the best choice. Time is the most valuable asset of every individual nowadays and losing it on every trivial thing is totally unacceptable. Finally, I believe choosing from a wide range of choices usually leads to dissatisfaction at the end. Personally, most of the times after purchasing a facility for my apartment, I regret that there might have been a better brand and I should have bought that rather than this.

On the other hand, I reckon that to be faced with many options could be helpful in some cases. This diversity of choices brings distinction and there are no two individuals or things exactly the same. For example you cannot find two houses in the world look exactly the same and that is a favorable aspect of multiple choices. Furthermore, people are getting more creative and curious because of these many choices. I mean they have to think more and search more to find the best choice.
In conclusion, although I believe that too many choices has had some adverse impacts on our everyday lives, I think this diversity could be appreciated in some cases.

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Nowadays a group of people believe, human have many choices and this essay agrees due to expanse of technology and existence of the Internet.

Many facilities in all fields are brought by technology for human to make their chores easier and solve...

Nowadays a group of people believe, human have many choices and this essay agrees due to expanse of technology and existence of the Internet.

Many facilities in all fields are brought by technology for human to make their chores easier and solve the problems in their works. For instance, mobile phones omit the distance; If you are far from your family or friends, can call them easily every time instead of sending a letter; So that they bring a high variety among the mobile phones and making relationships, as a result, make the choices more and harder. Also satellites bring a relieve for all age groups on the television. Moreover, people can consider the technology in all kitchen facilities which make the cooking and having food or desserts faster and enjoyable. Furthermore, the Internet make the technology more complex for having a selection.

On the other hand, the Internet help the technology for having improvement in make choices; For instance, online shops which are came by the Internet; They help the people to by goods that they want easily and perhaps from the other cities or countries. As mentioned above, technology brings many kinds of kitchen facilities but beside the Internet, there are a high range of choices in them; For instance, a refrigerator with WIFI is an extra choice for buying one of the kitchen facilities .

In conclusion, both technology and the Internet help people to have many selections for all their needs.

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These days, having many different choices in people life is an important issue. I think we can have many different choices in our lives provided that we do not live in an undeveloped or traditional country.
On the one hand, today, methods of...

These days, having many different choices in people life is an important issue. I think we can have many different choices in our lives provided that we do not live in an undeveloped or traditional country.
On the one hand, today, methods of people’s communications have significantly changed. While in the past they usually used face-to-face interactions, now they have wide range of communication methods they can choose. One reason is for substantial developments in some areas of technology such as internet and social networks. Using social network apps like facebook and twitter make individuals choices for communicating with each other much wider. Therefore, now, people can choose between traditional methods of interactions and technological ones. Furthermore, nowadays, people have a wide range of choices in the way of doing their daily tasks. Whereas in the past they usually do their routine works by their hands, today they have some new choices such as electronic devices and robots for doing them. For example, Internet of Things (IoT) is one of the new choices people can choose in order to do their routine tasks. Although in the past people irrigated their farms or turned on and off their lamps by their hands, today, they can do these works by means of IoT devices and apps.
On the other hand, some people have war in their countries or many of them live in third-world countries. Consequently, in comparison with other nations, they do not have too much access to some of the new technologies to choose them for doing their daily works. For instance, in my country, Iran, since it is an undeveloped nation, people usually do not have any access to robots or IoT devices. In addition, some taboos, traditions and religious beliefs in some nations and families do not let individuals to choose what they like. For example, in Iran, many girls can not choose their favourite job or field of study because of many taboos and religious beliefs. While many girls in Iran like to be a judge, they can not choose it due to the taboos. In consequence, what Iranian girls can choose are some limited jobs and fields of study.
In conclusion, I believe that these days, many people have too many choices in their life. It is due to the some technologies like social networks and IoT which give them various choices in the ways of their communications and doing their daily tasks. However, I think some undeveloped countries and also some traditional and religious nations do not have wide range of choices. Because third-world nations usually do not have a wide access to new technologies and also sometimes some taboos and religious beliefs restrict people choices.

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It has been a widely held perception that there is a variety of choices in our lives. Despite all possible opportunities that this abundance has brought with itself, it is also becoming quite difficult to make right decisions in different...

It has been a widely held perception that there is a variety of choices in our lives. Despite all possible opportunities that this abundance has brought with itself, it is also becoming quite difficult to make right decisions in different situations. While there
are certainly some valid arguments to the contrary, I completely agree with this statement. My two principle reasons are as follows.
Firstly, there used to be fewer options for people to choose in earlier times compare to the present time. Thus, people face less difficulties when they were about to make their own choices in different circumstances ranging from selecting electronic devices to buying clothes. Nowadays the market is filled up with variety of items in different price ranges and qualities. Therefore, it takes up too much time to find your desired item which hold high quality and reasonable price. For example, everyone has experienced how tiring and time consuming has been to opt for the best TV program among too many choices of channels that are offered by TV and satellite companies. As a result, people felt more satisfied in the case of selecting items in the past contrary to the contemporary world we are living now.
Secondly and even more importantly, though, is that this free flow of choices leads to lack of uniqueness; since one can be sure that there are always some suitable alternatives for specific items. Hence, some products might be found in different qualities which are absolutely not original ones. Admittedly, this diversity of products in any cases, certainly meet people’s different tastes and styles. One good example of this type can be various kinds of sunglasses in market now, you can rarely choose the original ones. As a matter of fact company manufactures are entitled to launch variety of products and choices for people which result in poor quality and standard.
By way of conclusion, facing too many choices in life brings us some difficulties, I once again reaffirm my position that encountering variety of options not only spoils people’s time and energy but it also reduces goods quality and uniqneness.

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To accomodate the needs of people, nowdayes there are lots of choices, but given the what field we should consider it would be limited to just afew choices.
However,some assert that these stricts would be led to creat various new selections....

To accomodate the needs of people, nowdayes there are lots of choices, but given the what field we should consider it would be limited to just afew choices.
However,some assert that these stricts would be led to creat various new selections. Admittedly, i partially believe that in these days individuals in every issue, can take many choices or provide lots of selections for themselves.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that with the emergance of new technologies, once limited people are more freedom of choice now. A good illustration of this is cobsidering the Internet,which accomodate the variant demandes of seekers and lay the ground for a incredible advancement in any subject that you care to name.This is in turn will expose to provide new choices for people.
Yet another compelling argument against launching choices of this nature is that the more people access new informations , the more they could make decision in different fields.To put it differently, various choices stem from new informations.Take the media which is accessable for many people these days for example.Some people who have access to social media, could achieve rfresh information about modern problems as well as their solution, so on many occasions they are given the chance to easily take choices.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that, with the advent of new technologies, people seem to have more choices. This is mainly because there would be some people who can deal with new technologies definetly are porne to easily make various sekections.

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people are calling into question this argument that the number of choices possible to make by us are manifold. I quite agree with this point of view owing to various reasons elaborating in this essay.

To begin with, the most significant...

people are calling into question this argument that the number of choices possible to make by us are manifold. I quite agree with this point of view owing to various reasons elaborating in this essay.

To begin with, the most significant argument involved in our life is extremely wide access of us to any information we want; that is to say, tending to know something about our specific favorite field, we can easily google it or look up relative websites to receive precious data in that context. A good illustration of this is websites offering beneficial courses that many of them are presented by reliable universities or institutes.

Yet another compelling reason convincing us having really wide range of choices is this fact that Internet lead us to become familiar to different ones with various lifestyles and give us the opportunity of knowing other nationalities and even other attitudes to the life; simply put, everyone is likely to know a bunch of things new for itself and expand its horizon. Take changing the lifestyle as an example for having many chances to selection; someone is likely to change her/him way of life, seeing people reaping benefits of that distinct manner of living.

To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that we are able to make a large number of choices nowadays. This is mainly because we are faced with a phenomenon named Internet and also are prone to other Types of technology providing us a huge volume of data.

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A group of people think young generation have lots of situations to opt recently. I definitely agree with this group because, it is clear that in the past people had not a lot of options to choose, but now we can select many...

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A group of people think young generation have lots of situations to opt recently. I definitely agree with this group because, it is clear that in the past people had not a lot of options to choose, but now we can select many things. In fact we have not only a large amount of choices to buy the types of goods and food products, but also we can choose different places to trip.

Firstly, industry has had progress gradually since 1950. Therefore youngsters have too many options to elect compare to the past. For instance there are myriad of food products and detergents. Actually when we go the grocery stores it is confusing to choose one of them. It sometimes takes a huge of time to find our favourite products. On the other hand it is possible for us to shopping online because of reasonable price and variety of models. Hence there are plenty of choices in e-commerce too.

Secondly, we have a huge number of suitable positions to travelling for every taste around the world. Because there are too many travel agencies that give us relevant suggestions to journey. Furthermore, there are lots of informations in the Internet and social networks such as YouTube thus, we can use experiences of others who travel before us there and then choose the best one relevant to our taste and finance. In addition, we can watch so many movies and photos from our destination in the websites.

In conclusion, in my believe nowadays we have lots of choices in every thing. Moreover I think in the future our children will have more choices than us.

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It is argued that people live at the time where plenty of choices are provided to select. Although, there could be wider selection of choices in order to make some chores favourable for humans in every aspect of lifetime, I would probably oppose...

It is argued that people live at the time where plenty of choices are provided to select. Although, there could be wider selection of choices in order to make some chores favourable for humans in every aspect of lifetime, I would probably oppose to putting more selectivity into the life except in certain areas such as technology and medication in total.
There is the view that looks for more comfort in humanitarian life.This undoubtedly puts us in making the decisions in every period of our lives.For instance,the emerge of different marriage pattern apart from traditional form has got young people think more about it. This sort of variation results in more dedication of time and effort which I believe is the waste of them.
On the other hand, different approach refuses to accept more changes than the current form. They have the notion of living in peaceful situation.In other words, in their opinion, dealing with many choices which all have certain effects in our life brings about a burden of tensions that deters human beings from living in peace.For example, ole nowadays,women scour whole city to find their desire from shoes and tights to dress and jewellery.This is caused by creation of many variations.
In conclusion, there are two views towards multiplicity of choices in humans living being.I personally prefer more optional life just in specific areas which relates to health and comfort of people. Otherwise, it could have harmful impact on the standards of living.

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It’s obvious that people should make a decision between at least two choices. On my view nowadays many factors make it possible that people have too many choices for everything.

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It’s obvious that people should make a decision between at least two choices. On my view nowadays many factors make it possible that people have too many choices for everything.

Some people believe that some simple things are done just in one option. But in my opinion for doing not only complex works but also routines need to make a decision. For example, in order to go to work there are many ways every day that you can opt, such as bus, tram or walk. Moreover there are many factors to adopt one of them; if the weather is rainy it’s a good idea to go to work by bus, if you are late and you want to be on time it’s a better way to opt for a tram or if it’s a sunny day or if you want to be more financial the best choice is walking.
I think technology cause that people have too many choices in order to do their jobs. I mean as a result of technology and modern lifestyle we can elect from more many options for everything. For instance, if we want to have a dress we can choose from many options. We can go shopping and buy the new one, or we can make a dress on our own. Moreover we can use technology and order the new one online. Furthermore we can search in some sites that are belong to something which are used before and we can find a cheaper dress there.
In conclusion, people always have more than two option in order to doing their jobs which they can opt one of them according to the situations.

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It is thought that, in this day and age,we have been offered countless opportunities to opt for in differing aspects.I myself almost entirely agree with this notion,however,there are some abstacle to deal with, which are not...

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It is thought that, in this day and age,we have been offered countless opportunities to opt for in differing aspects.I myself almost entirely agree with this notion,however,there are some abstacle to deal with, which are not insurmountable.

First of all, there is no doubt that technological and scientific growth pose profound impact on supplying different sort of products. Needless to say, mass automation and computerization which give human beings a considerabl amount of free time concentrating on flourishing new ideas to widespread diversities of products rather than wasting time on doing manual work.For instance, in western countries thanks to this fact producers have a cut-throught competetion to be survived amongst their rivals through offering vary goods.

Secondly and more importantly, people’s demand have undergone swift changes over the past few decades,thus there is no way out for producers to employ some practical technics In order to bring satisfaction for their customers by presenting different kinds of varieties in even one product. For example, in the past, human being bought one kind of cheese from stores without any hesitation, however, todays, they would be confused as they have ample of choices to select.

By way of conclusion, It is my firm conviction that this trend would be growing in popularity more than now in the near future.

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It is believed that people encounter with too many selections in their routine life. I partially agree with this idea but I think it depends on what is the choice. The compelling reasons will be discussed in detail.

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It is believed that people encounter with too many selections in their routine life. I partially agree with this idea but I think it depends on what is the choice. The compelling reasons will be discussed in detail.

On the one hand, to agree with this idea, I think people have the plenty of choices in some situations. These selections lead people to the trouble. For instance, if people have too many choices of buying a new car, they will be confused and will get them in doubt that which car should we choose? In some cases, this argument causes some problem and conflict. After a while, they chose their selection, they are regretted what they have done. this trend goes for any other selection.

On the other hand, people do not have many options for some of their selections. For Instance, In some city choosing the municipality is too difficult because there are not enough decent candidate to be elected. people have to choose between a bad or worse candidate. Because of that, some problems occur. Some people prefer to not the participant in the election and other think that is not fair.

In my opinion, have many options to select can be good or bad depends on the situation. But I think It is better to have many choices than lack of selections.

In conclusion, there is a belief that there are too many options for people who want to select. I believe that it could be good or bad depends on what is the selection.

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It is often that most people think they are confronted by too many choices in their lives. In my opinion people do not have too many choices, however, unfortunately they only have too many changes in their lives.
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It is often that most people think they are confronted by too many choices in their lives. In my opinion people do not have too many choices, however, unfortunately they only have too many changes in their lives.
I believe the changes in life are not because we have too many choices, they are because we are highly influenced by the society. The society does not let us to choose even if we have choices and we are forced to choose whatever it is available. In my opinion if we had choices we could choose better and the changes in our life would be less. E.g. most of us have written an essay about our future job during our childhood. Are we the one we have chosen or society pushed us to another direction?
Another reason that I believe we do not have choices is, the range of the choices we have. These choices are not widely different and they may be multiple but they are in the same range. I would rather considering them one but with different prospects. E.g. studying and not studying in college are two different choices but studying as an Industrial Engineer or Computer Engineer are not. However the aforementioned range can be different from person to person.
In conclusion, I believe that, people do not have too many choices in their lives and society pushes them to the different directions.

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In my humble opinion, we deal with our crucial necessities during these era due to numerous variety of choices. In fact, these days, people want to choose a right choice in order to improvement in the quality of their lives in a perfect way.
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In my humble opinion, we deal with our crucial necessities during these era due to numerous variety of choices. In fact, these days, people want to choose a right choice in order to improvement in the quality of their lives in a perfect way.
Needless to say, we try to obtain products with high quality. According to countless diversity of information existing in websites and social media, people can communicate with online shopping to provide necessary necessities at home. Furthermore, people become stricter to select different things rather than past. For instance, they keep telling themselves what carrier is convenient and what place of residence suitable and comfortable. It’s often considered that people consider financial aspects, qualitative and so on for this matter in favor of endless technology progress in recent decades.
In fact, various facilities and equipment are caused that humans spend a lot of time to make a better decision so as to confront with better significant circumstances.
In conclusion, having new choices are somewhat difficult for most people result in growing in a wide range of cutting-edge products and the quality of way of life.

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It is said that in today’s world human being have a myriad of potions to choose from. While I agree that many might enjoy this accessibility, there is a substantial proportion of people, coming from a disadvantaged background, would not be able...

It is said that in today’s world human being have a myriad of potions to choose from. While I agree that many might enjoy this accessibility, there is a substantial proportion of people, coming from a disadvantaged background, would not be able to access these choices.

One the one hand, thanks to technological advances and enormous knowledge available everybody could these days live based on the list of their favorites. These would enable people to have more facilities, goods and services around for their choices. These are an immense amount, ranging from different means of transport to a variety of foods, and from different jobs to their favorite lifestyle. Moreover, many of these options could be easily obtained such as applying a job abroad via online networks, which means the young generation no longer would have to follow their ancestors’ traditional career; meanwhile, they are quite affordable due to the modernized industrialization of manufacturing methods.

However, there are too many people who are not that privileged to enjoy this optional world; meaning that these populations, most of whom living in underdeveloped or developing countries, are bound to live based on extremely limited choices. The lack of welfare programs in those societies alongside the families’ poor economy are likely to make their lives obliged to merely making a living to overcome their extreme poverty. At the same time, the shortages in the state-of-the-art technologies in those nations may prevent them from even being aware of or having access to all those potential facilities; therefore, they have to continue struggling with their challenging life, accepting that there are no more choices.

In conclusion, although there are a huge number of choices available to many in the world, many more have always being suffered from lack of those modernization and facilities that could provide them the same opportunities.

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Our present society is constantly changing and living conditions are rarely stable .there is no denying that, so does the need to become aware of challenges that surround us. I’m completely agree with this idea that life is full...

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Our present society is constantly changing and living conditions are rarely stable .there is no denying that, so does the need to become aware of challenges that surround us. I’m completely agree with this idea that life is full of choices we make and they determine directions of our future.
Everything in our life that we have or not is a result of our choices. We make decisions because we don’t have enough resources for all our requirements. We certainly fail to meet all our demands even if become the richest person in the world.Therefore we should set our priorities to allocate our sources to what is more valuable and important to us . Ultimately we try to choose between available ways In order to meet as many priorities as possible.
But nowadays this process is not easy as it sounds. Technological advancements and free flow of information has made decision making even more difficult. Internet not only make it easier for people to access information but also increases the number of choices they have. In comparison to the past we have more requests and more options to choose. At the moment we can meet our needs beyond geographic boundaries. For example a professional in past decades just have job opportunities with in his or her city or country but now he or she might have job offer from where ever the world . Or we have to spend a lot of time to choose a cellphone between brands from all over the world, whereas these tools never existed in the past thus no time was spent to choosing them
As expressed, the complexities of today's world has increased the number of ways that we have to choose. We try to consider more priorities by choosing the right path and have better quality of life.

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It is sometimes argued that nowadays individuals have numerous choices, which are larger numbers than they had in the past. While people often have a chance of deciding about what to do, I hold the opinion that there are not always too many...

It is sometimes argued that nowadays individuals have numerous choices, which are larger numbers than they had in the past. While people often have a chance of deciding about what to do, I hold the opinion that there are not always too many options to choose.
There are several evidences that show why people can usually choose their favorites between various options that they have. Firstly, an individual has freedom to choose the way of communication based on his or her preference. For example, he can be in touch with his friends via a written letter or new communication technologies such as Skype and IMO. Secondly, people can make decisions about their place of living that they prefer. It means that they may select to inhabit in another country or city as developed transportation systems have made it possible for them. Finally, most young women recently have a right of selection between gaining academic qualifications and getting married while in the past, they were not allowed to go to university, and they were forced to marry.
However, there are some fields in which individuals have no choice. As a case in point, learning English language these days is mandatory. Students in all over the world have been taught this language because they need it in different aspects of their lives such as reading scientific books, learning software packages, and socializing with individuals who live abroad. Furthermore, if young adults did not develop their social skills, they would experience tough situations in order to secure a job or have effective interpersonal relationships with their colleagues. Therefore, they must be educated in these skills, and there is no choice for them.
In conclusion, people sometimes have limited alternatives to choose although in many situations, they have a wider range of choices.

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Some people, under the influence of the glamor of the modern society, think that nowadays they have the right to choose more from the past. While, in today's world, pre-written frameworks and rules put you more and more in a Specified and...

Some people, under the influence of the glamor of the modern society, think that nowadays they have the right to choose more from the past. While, in today's world, pre-written frameworks and rules put you more and more in a Specified and predetermined ways, which you may not have any fundamental role in it. I think the real choice is not what the majority of populace supposes.
There are many things that make people believe that they have a lot of choices Compared to the past. Technological advancement, advertising, consumerism, and Politics are among these. You are free to choose from a wide variety of car brands and colors. Mobile phones with advanced features are available to you. You can live in any different gloomy cities that you want. Participate in a variety of elections from city council to presidential, party chair or syndicate and vote for them. These and the like may make you mistaken and think that you are plunging in a variety of options. But is it really?
Contrary to this dominant theory among public, I think this is not the true meaning of the choice. Or at least, it is not important and valuable part of it. When we look at this choices right from away, they can be likened to childish toys. People should be free where to live, what to wear, what to read, how to think, and what to do. But the limitations of modern urbanization lead you to a certain path. And makes you more and more like others. Bulk advertisement, chain restaurants, multinational companies, voting for a few pre-selected candidates, mandatory education from an early age, and most importantly, habitation in cities beyond the nature - Where you really belong to it -, Everything indicates that now your selection range is very limited.
To conclude, although in the present era, we have many opportunities to select any kind of childish entertainment, but we have to keep in mind that we have not much luck in choosing the method and philosophy of life. I strongly believe that in the modern world the right to choose has fallen dramatically.

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Over the past 20 years, society members confront to a big revolution in technology, shopping, and education. They adhere that gairls and boys recive new ways of teaching; this methods can help them to select their future fields better than...

Over the past 20 years, society members confront to a big revolution in technology, shopping, and education. They adhere that gairls and boys recive new ways of teaching; this methods can help them to select their future fields better than before. To some extent I believe that people in 21th century have various choices in everything like purchase and training.

There are some underlying reasons why citizens have many choices. One clear explanation would be changing lifestyle. Since alot of women and men use new media technology -laptop, mobile, and tablet- they can select and experience every new high-tech media instrument. Advertisement, moreover, can change their mobile phone because of, the newest do not have different in price. For example, youngers tent to challenge the last version of laptops. They can select and use a variaty of computer brands dependent on their taste.


Additionally, one of the major reasons of having several choices would be selecting many learning fields at university. While in the past students did not have any topics to continue their properties at collage, nowadays they can go to university and study many fields. To clarify, a person liked to study music or art, but this field did not present as high-education train; he or she must continue in unpleasure filed like medicine or engineering. But recently, universities present alot of fields, and pupils can choice based on their properties.

To conclude, currently , lifestyle is change by the advent of new technology and high-level education. For two social reasons -media technology shopping and education- I strongly believe that we have alot of ways to select and try new things and study various scinces.

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It is a common belief among people that in today’s world, we are surrounded by abundant choices that are not always to our
benefit. While I mostly agree with the idea, I would argue that there are various tools and techniques to overcome the...

It is a common belief among people that in today’s world, we are surrounded by abundant choices that are not always to our
benefit. While I mostly agree with the idea, I would argue that there are various tools and techniques to overcome the confusion resulting from too many choices.
The fast-paced advancement of technology has led to various new challenge, among which, the difficulty of choice is of great importance. Barry Schwartz, the behavioral economist, refers to this complication as “The Paradox of Choice”. As the options grow in number and variety, we have to spend greater time and mental effort on decision making. For example, take a simple routine shopping into account. In the past, the process at most took half hour. Nowadays, it can take half of your entire day. For people like me who have a hard time deciding, the simple act of buying a pack of biscuits turns into a torture.
However, I think that as smart creatures, we can devise mental filters, so as to narrow our choices and ease the process of decision making. For example, in a department store, we can screen prices to find the most reasonable range and ignore the other products that exceed our desired limit. In other words, we can engineer our choices in a productive manner; otherwise, the opportunistic market players take the best of us.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that although ample choices have made our life more troublesome, we are still able to utilize some simple techniques to turn this seemingly challenge into an opportunity.
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Over the past few years, there has been stimulating disputations among the public about the people’s numerous alternatives in the modern society. While some cynics claim that these excessive options have been extremely valuable, I sanguinely...

Over the past few years, there has been stimulating disputations among the public about the people’s numerous alternatives in the modern society. While some cynics claim that these excessive options have been extremely valuable, I sanguinely believe that it jeopardies our life from different aspects.
Conspicuously, nowadays, thanks to the advent of cutting-edge technologies people from four corners of the globe can share their interests to a certain number of people in a timely manner. It is general knowledge that encountering with such amount of data would cause a great deal of confusions and uncertainty among the people to make a sound decision. A valid illustration of this topic is social networks like Facebook and Instagram, which turns to the platform for sharing the last fashions and life styles. Extensive research suggesting that this trend causes antisocial behaviour and family complications by many people and particularly young generation, who are profoundly affected by their counterparts.
Despite these beliefs, there are some sceptics who conjecture that having various options is a positive development because it paves the way for the individuals to make the best deal out of the different alternatives. Although it seems ostensibly veridical, it is not the case because While monopoly results in diverse challenges such as customer exploitation and inequality in wealth distribution, having multitude choices also leads to consuming lots of time and energy to find the best option. For instance, there are too many energy company retailers competing each other to lure citizens for making the contract. In spite of the fact that it enables individuals to compare these companies for getting their best advantage, it is really a time-consuming process and a herculean task if you want to compare all of them. Therefore, it would be better if the government itself provided these services.
To recapitulate, the most persuasive arguments are the ones that support the reasonable amount of choices, which prevents any confusion and challenges for decision making. However, looking at the current trend of the globalization and intense competition between the businesses, we realize that the situation will be exacerbated in the near future

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Some are on this belief that these days we are faced with many choices. it is believe that we can pick up between a variety of choices.
The technology is extended more and more every day and it bring about different job opportunities. For this...

Some are on this belief that these days we are faced with many choices. it is believe that we can pick up between a variety of choices.
The technology is extended more and more every day and it bring about different job opportunities. For this we observe diverse occupation has arisen and people with different taste and goals chose their occupation with considering interest. Meanwhile, technology cause job – hopping because of new choices engender every day.
After that, it is undeniable that variety of foods in comparison with past have had a lot of changes. For instance , currently fast food has many fans in world, while in the past there is not it. Moreover, we can find lot of cuisine in books, on the TV program and training class that these trigger the choice of food sometimes be difficult and we are facing more many chose of foods.
Another area that there is an array of selection is recreation. If one day you make decision for recreation go out, probably you will confuse that where place is proper destination and it is a good state. On the ground that various amusement bring significant changes in our life and escape us from monotonous. In addition, we should take watching TV into consideration that is really important because it not only provide many various programme for people with different taste not only is a effortless hobbies.
In conclusion, I agree with this issue that now days there are plenty of choice for people in diverse context and day by day these choices are increased.

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The past fifty years have seen tremendous changes in global industry. Despite the earlier times which people had social and economic deprivation, I would argue that economic and general prosperity have offered wide range choices for people. Two...

The past fifty years have seen tremendous changes in global industry. Despite the earlier times which people had social and economic deprivation, I would argue that economic and general prosperity have offered wide range choices for people. Two of determining factors associated with this trend are as follows.

One of the most crucial those is that the advancement of technology which has revolutionized the way we communicate. Most of individuals have benefited from e-mail and internet chat programs, namely, telegram messenger. This furnishes the opportunity to use incredibly powerful tools of communication which facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade. The vast amount of information can be assessed at click of bottom. One particularly Salient example of this is distance education which gives multiple choices rather than physically present at university. One more instance is house hold chores which can be done conveniently in the course of time. Admittedly, with advent of technology, robots can be guided by external control device in order to carry out house chores.

Further and even more importantly, though, educated people have exercised their choice compared to ones who have not gotten through the academic studies. It is interesting to note that the influx of most talented young work forces have been aroused enthusiasm by the related authorities in highly developed nations so as to employ them not only in their well-paid and steady job vacancies but they also have multiple choices for deciding on whether they take a favorite job or not. Consequently, educated individuals have far significant opportunities to fulfil their goals.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position. In these day and age thanks to the vastly prevalent of technology and greater incentive of individuals who peruse their further education; everybody can make up their mind up and has a comfortable lifestyle which they deserve.

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It is sometimes argued that people nowadays have too many choices. While I agree with this idea and believe that too many choices could make modern humans confuse, I argue there is a variety of ways of helping people to make the right choice.
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It is sometimes argued that people nowadays have too many choices. While I agree with this idea and believe that too many choices could make modern humans confuse, I argue there is a variety of ways of helping people to make the right choice.
Due to frequent exposure to a lot of different information, people face a wide range of choices; social media, TV, books. etc., are promoting their own significant idea or goods, but human brain is not made for this. About two decades ago, people had fewer choices to make, but our lifestyle has been morphing to a more complex one day by day. Having fewer choices was associated with satisfaction, but now the modern lifestyle, revolutionized by technology, lead people to confusion. As humans, over brains cannot be adapted to the new world.
Nevertheless, there are several ways to control this issue and make the right choices without getting confused. On the one hand, we should avoid being affected by advertisement tricks. Advertisers tend to confuse us then take the control of the unconscious part of our brain. it might seem ironic, but millions of people are choosing a good from store shelves that leads them to death, cancer, and a lot of different diseases; it is cigarette, and if these people were asked “why do you smoke?”, they would answer ”we have no choice”. On the other hand, when we face a lot of options, we should search for reliable references or consult some knowledgeable advisers to find the best possible alternative. Finally, when we choose something we should accept its consequences too. We should never regret; the point is we would choose that again if we were the same person with the same information and in the same circumstances.
In conclusion, I believe modern humans are facing choices more than their brain capacity, but there are ways for them to make the best choices and avoid getting confused.

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In recent years, it is widely being argued that our life surrounded with numerous alternatives. Although this matter might be
considered positive, I opine that it has adverse effects on our lives.

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In recent years, it is widely being argued that our life surrounded with numerous alternatives. Although this matter might be
considered positive, I opine that it has adverse effects on our lives.

A large number of choices means an ample amount of opportunity for companies to take full advantage of it. In the modern world, where fierce competition has been taken place among companies, it is plausible for them to escalating their profits by extending products range. Thus, this action enhances the costumer selection process by letting them compare and purchase appropriately. Also, this phenomenon allows the consumer to possess distinct material parallelly which ease their life. For example, a driver could have two types of car for different purposes.

However, from my perspective, this practice is deleterious and has negative impacts on peoples lives. Firstly, too many choices can be seen as too many difficulties to select. For instance, a youngester in senior years of college might be faced with a dilemma between working or pursuing tertiary education. These form of hesitations stem from so many options phenomenon that triggers perplexity. Secondly, companies with the help of this practice could invade people the freedom to select things. the perpetually induce customers thoughts about their products that is apt for them. All of the above reveal pieces of evidence that extreme range of choices could leave a negative impact on our lives.

The issues that are outlined above reveal that although some people feel too many choices situation is beneficial, I am of the opinion that it adversely affect our lives.

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We have many choices about different matter Nowdays, due to technological advancement and new inventions and the like, I strongly believe that these matters have brought convenience and...

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We have many choices about different matter Nowdays, due to technological advancement and new inventions and the like, I strongly believe that these matters have brought convenience and relief to elect the best way that is convenient for us, and we face with different ways to reach to our target.
First of all I should mention that these days we confront with many issue in our life, it causes technological advancement, unlike we can use that for solving this issue simply. For example trip and journey for people was very hard in the past compare with in this era, the people had to long distance travel by foot or animals and it tookes to many hours and even many days, but you can take a trip by plane or train as soon as possible and simply at now, as well as the people went to the office by foot but people go with car or train or bicycle it causes save time and energy.
Also the children had to follow their parents job in the past and they had not many statement to choose, but children choose their interests simply at now.
As more as many countries had not educational facilities for different people with different income and many children could not continue their educations in the past, but has been opened many schools for that matter at now.
In addition social security system is the other option has been created for people to be healthy an safety more, because the death and disease were more compare with now, with free healthcare services the government help to solve this problem.
Globalization is the other topic that help to people for familiar with other countries and languages and regions to improve their community and import the new invention from developed countries to undeveloped countries for making progress which was not in the past due to limit of transportation.
From what has been discussed above there are many choices for people in this time compare with the past, it causes people live convenient and healthy and safe, with long time life and saving the time and energy even money due to technological advancement.

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We have many choices about different matter Nowdays, due to technological advancement and new inventions and the like, I strongly believe that these matters have brought convenience and relief to elect the best way that is convenient for us, and...

We have many choices about different matter Nowdays, due to technological advancement and new inventions and the like, I strongly believe that these matters have brought convenience and relief to elect the best way that is convenient for us, and we face with different ways to reach to our target.
First of all I should mention that these days we confront with many issue in our life, it causes technological advancement, unlike we can use that for solving this issue simply. For example trip and journey for people was very hard in the past compare with in this era, the people have to long distance travel by foot or animals and it takes to many hours and even many days, but you can take a trip by plane or train as soon as possible and simply at now, as well as the people went to the office by foot but people go with car or train or bicycle it causes save time and energy.
Also the children have to follow their parents job in the past and they have not many statement to choose, but children choose their interests simply at now.
As more as many countries had not educational facilities for different people with different income and many children could not continue their educations in the past, but nowdays has been opened many schools for that matter.
In addition social security system is the other option has been created for people to be healthy, because the death and disease were more compare with now, with free healthcare services the government help to solve this problem.
Globalization is the other topic that help to people for familiar with other countries and languages and regions to improve their community and import the new invention from developed countries to undeveloped countries for making progress which was not in the past due to limit of transportation.
From what has been discussed above there are many choices for people in this time compare with the past, it causes people live convenient and healthier with long time life and saving the time and energy even money due to technological advancement.

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Living in the fast-growing era provides plenty of choices which surrounds all aspect of an individual's life such as technical, personal and social topics. I think, in comparison with the past we have the variety of alternation which could result...

Living in the fast-growing era provides plenty of choices which surrounds all aspect of an individual's life such as technical, personal and social topics. I think, in comparison with the past we have the variety of alternation which could result in having a more easy life and bringing enormous joy to our life although some drawbacks can be driven.
Choosing from the wide range of possibilities of technological tools would put a tremendous influence on the increasing quality of life because thanks to ubiquitous modern technology a great deal of time could be saved and then attributed to the imperative tasks. For example, using the household appliances such as a cooker and washing machine, purchasing online and conducting an online financial transaction are the samples which could save time effectively.
Another point to consider is that facing with the number of choices would develop the personal life since it presents us with a great opportunity to move up the ladder. For instance, a different educational method such as an online program (e-learning) paves the way for everyone to get higher education and consequently it is more likely to find a decent job and achieve success. It can be said that leisure activities could not except from this revolution. In other words, the variety of the form of entertainments especially indoor activities contributed to the psychological well-being.
On the other hand, exposing ourselves to more changes could result in some major implications for both adolescents and children. Therefore, getting involved with technological tools results in losing the opportunities for being to gather and not having a close relationship among members of the family. Also if the children spend more than usual time on playing the wide range of games such as online game they might be at risk of not only physical disease like obesity but also mental disorder like depression.
In conclusion, compared to the past overwhelming choices open up an ideal opportunity which has a desirable impact on life and leads to betterment and convenience of lifestyle although the excessive use of them might cause some problems.

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It has usually been believed that we have been surrounded by a wide diversity of opportunities during recent decades. I am of the opinion that this notion is utterly true, due to several possible arguments such as, significant...

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It has usually been believed that we have been surrounded by a wide diversity of opportunities during recent decades. I am of the opinion that this notion is utterly true, due to several possible arguments such as, significant progress in communication ,as well as rapid expansion of technology.

To commence with, there has been an epic direct relation between the number of our choices and our situations in terms of communicating with other individuals all over the world, meaning that, vast numbers of opportunities could be suggested to us by other people living in other countries, which are possibly able to play a crucial role in enhancing the quality of our lives. Take great numbers of immigrants, for instance,they may be encouraged by others to immigrate to foreign countries in order to pursue their carriers or educations, therefore, they are able to select their destinations from a wide variety of choices resulting from a substantial communication among people living in different countries.

In addition to this, with the advent of advanced technologies or radical changes in searching tools, such as new websites on the Internet , social media, and all types of the Internet browsers, which have considerable influences on the number and power of our choices, we are able to choose wide range of products with high quality. Online shopping can be a good epitome of this matter, since it can provide us with large numbers of products that we are looking for them, moreover we can compare them on the Internet or social media, choose the best one in terms of quality and price , and purchase it even from remote companies. Nonetheless, providing such large volume of opportunities in the market can lead us into being confused, this unpleasant situation can be ameliorated by reading all reviews written by other consumers about the quality of products.

To conclude, obviously, I admittedly believe that the number of our choices has substantially been increased by using all types of searching tools on the Internet or social media, besides communicating with foreign people.

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Today, some believe that, there are many options for individuals to choose in different aspects of life.I agree that variety of choices result in more difficulties for a person who want to make a better decision.There are two principal reasons...

Today, some believe that, there are many options for individuals to choose in different aspects of life.I agree that variety of choices result in more difficulties for a person who want to make a better decision.There are two principal reasons for this in this essay.

Firstly, By the improvement in life facilities such as computering life systems bring more and more convenient to our routine life.Although it could be helpful to increase our personal expectations in different things but lead to people become more strict than they used to be in the past. There are many
choices to decide ,for instance, what career or education is more suitable, where are we going to live in the future?which ways are better to increase our incomes?it would be better to be single or not?and many other issues should be taken account to conduct us for making better decision. So,By the variety of choices it is incredibly difficult for people to choose the better way.

Admittedly, if choices for example would be two fold,normally, individuals become confused about that which one is more suitable and accessible in order to their talents and lifestyles. Even more, if they are not afford to choose the proper way because of this confusion ,by passing the time,maybe lead to acute mental disorders such as, depression and anxiety in some persons. Actually they are not capable to distinguish which ways are efficiently. So when we encounter to limmitted options,there would be better to select rightly. A simple example that could be mentioned here is decision about marriage.

In conclusion, I reafirm my belief that, a lot of choices just make more drawbacks for us and do not let to tackle the problems as well. Focusing in one way, help to reach to the ultimate goals as soon as possible

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Making your own choices is one of the most important things throughout world and also it is the cause that we had a lot of successful people during history and in our own nation, so maybe nowadays making your own choices become too important...

Making your own choices is one of the most important things throughout world and also it is the cause that we had a lot of successful people during history and in our own nation, so maybe nowadays making your own choices become too important since people want to improve and imitate the behavior and success that former generation have made. But to what extant people can make their own choices, it depends on a lot of things such as population, politicians, culture, etc.
For example when it comes to culture we have to notice to this issue that in some cultures people are forces to continue their parent’s job and learn their capabilities. So in this situation they will not improve and so thanks to this people could never make their own choices, but if we think we are in a society with positive attitude and people could go and grow there, here is another subject. Can government define opportunities to people and provide them?
To introduce the choices depending on lacks
That a society has and leads people to catch it. Here will come another issue that how is the government? Are politicians compassionate enough?
What about your population? How much of people are educated?
There are a lot of questions that you might fiend when you think about choices that exist in a society.
But when people are after their wants and their dreams and they can reach it, we have to talk about a healthy government and society.
Whether or not everything goes good and society would improve and people are happy, they could capture whatever they wanted and children in this situation would have been nurtured nicely because there are no moral deviation in their society. But otherwise everything would be worse due to the fact that people are sad and depressed. They have not received what they wanted from their government. They are not what they always wanted to be so they have problem and difficulty and absolutely this situation has impacts on their children and certainly it could make problems in the next generation, so it destroy a society and it is too late to ask from each other what gives?
So one of the important factors to select a good society which it has people who they have positive attitude is how much a society cares about choices that people wanted to have and how much people have been satisfied with their path that they follow as well as other critical necessities like water and food.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choice.towhat extend do you agree or disagree?

Today, individuals suppose that there are further more options in comparison to past years. I completely agree with this vantage point .
Developing...

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choice.towhat extend do you agree or disagree?

Today, individuals suppose that there are further more options in comparison to past years. I completely agree with this vantage point .
Developing sciences and technologies, in the right circumstances, open up more opportunities influence on the various aspects of every day human’s life. Given these wide ranging of the new alternatives, the more facilities are created that everyone could, although these ones have the direction of positive and of negative, benefit the conditions in positive sides. Having had both opportunities and facilities, those make the highly qualified society along with the people who have the mental health in the standard level. In the Uk, where statistics show that the most people live in the qualified social and individual situations, to possess the developing technologies and sciences , the community could enable to make the more options in the different dimensions of the personal and social life.
To lack various kinds of opportunities have profound the negative effects on throughout the life dimensions. By means of these kinds of negative impacts, the individuals who are the cornerstone of a community not only fail to have happiness and incentive enough, but lose the essential energy making a developed and qualified society. If, although this seems to be a dilemma, the governments and the authorities tried to encourage the people in the creative thinking, they could identify the individual talents to utilise these developing their country. For example, developed countries where the people are confronted with more options in their personal or social lives not only make the highly qualified and standard society but also prompt individuals to use their talents to develop choices more and more.In conclusion, undoubtedly, I believe that to be available plenty of alternatives, above all in the state-of -the-art, is occasions.
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Each person has lots of choice in their life. Now They have various ways for choose whatever they want. I completely agree with this statement in the following.
Some choices depends on situation. For example some people are diseased and they got...

Each person has lots of choice in their life. Now They have various ways for choose whatever they want. I completely agree with this statement in the following.
Some choices depends on situation. For example some people are diseased and they got obesity. They can not everything and some foods are harmful for them. They decided that they do not eat unhealthy foods. They tend to vegetable and healthy food. To be beyond doubt their lifestyle will be changed.
In addition, nowadays technology considerably rise and ii have lots of fans. Often teenagers choose every majors that related to technology or computer because they these will be useful in future. Where I come from majority of yang have studied new majors such as programming, site designer, network.
In the other hand, sometimes there are many option for our choices and cause of we get confuse.
For instance, you wand buy a new appliance for your house, you surf on the internet and you will see lots of brands from famous company which are utilitarian. You can not choose one of them, though. If a friend gives suggestion a useful brand you would buy your device. To put it differently you can decide with other’s help and without it you can not purchase because so many brand expand throughout word.
In conclusion, although you will have so many cases for choice in special conditions and some ways, you have this ability that change it easily whit your awareness as long as you achieve your aim or purpose.

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It is argued that the modern style of life in recent decade has offered a great number of choices in many field .while some may lose their concentration to choose which item is convinient , I believe it can be considered...

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It is argued that the modern style of life in recent decade has offered a great number of choices in many field .while some may lose their concentration to choose which item is convinient , I believe it can be considered as a progress
There are several possible choices you may encounter nowadays.the first one is the place of livining. You can live in a country where a specific religious is practiced like Japan, Saudi a Arabia or a place with complete secular system . Even there are some places in where an special material is worshiped..second choice category is the type of studied method. On line course, distance learning and regular type is some option you will have these days. Finally if we go through some details there are a lot of choices to select a car in compariso with earlier time that we had a limit number options
I believe a great number of oppurtuneties can be achieved by variety of choices we have. It is good to start with the choice of living place. This opportunity will definitely brings you out backed.like you are not obliged to obey some strict and nonsense rules anyway . Further more you will have the power to control how you children are trained and grown up. Also based on the limitation imposed by life circumstances you can select the way you and your family are going to study in case you want to attend in a best university class you can take the distance learning courses or any other one which is convinient for you. At the same time you can enjoy your life by selection a very brand new car with a lot of facilities available for any taste .
In conclusion I understand why it is a little frightening for some people to face a great number of choices
As the may not so confident to select one , but it seems to me
Nice that the more chances you encounter the better opportunities you predict.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Freedom of choice has affected by various factors. Some believe that recently every individual has more choices to...

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Freedom of choice has affected by various factors. Some believe that recently every individual has more choices to be taken. This essay will discuss the reasons which, nowadays entirely lead many of people to go for different options.
Decision making likely effects by a person's desire or aims irrespective of what period of time or decade one's live. however the development of Technology will lead people to endless choices, but the majority of people do have seldom access to these facilities.for an example, in developing countries many people are still requiring for their basic needs and having different options is ludicrous for them
It is apparent that with the introduction of new and modern Technology, smart gadgets and the Internet in the recent decade the majority of choices has brought to our life. In the other words, people can find how many choices they have just click on websites.for instance, every device is accessible in possible different shapes, prices and other criteria. While some have deprived of selectin abilities, here the most option has been provided by local or online companies.

This essay argued that Technology revolutionized the way those select among different options. In my opinion, nowadays people easily have opportunities to know about different brands and companies as well as their materials. It is totally convinced that the society attains lots of benefits from the capability to go for desirable items

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Needless to say, as human being, we live in world per se is getting changed dramatically whether we want or not. According to way of life that shows distinct circumstances, forces people to have many choices and come to major decisions – some of...

Needless to say, as human being, we live in world per se is getting changed dramatically whether we want or not. According to way of life that shows distinct circumstances, forces people to have many choices and come to major decisions – some of them smooths our life away or some makes the situation worth down the road.
One of the pros first and foremost that causes me to agree is that having too many choices opens up plenty of opportunities, paves the way to come along, broadens the mind, and lets people acquire ideal positions. At first glance it would burn in on our making choices may remain significant misfortunes, but if we haven’t any choices, we won’t become hugely successful. To give an illustration, an inspirational manager is someone who makes right choices so as to lead the team efficiently.
Turning to the other side of the argument, having too many choices in some cases, deflects people’s focus away from life events. With regard to what mentioned, encountering with much choices particularly produce negative result and leads to tricky situations.
Nonetheless, most people desire to live routine, having too many choices would be a key factor to become a prosperous person indeed, but some people believe that more often than not it remains severe side-effects and directs their lifestyle notably to rotten situations. On the other hand, it’s better that by boiling down some negligible decisions and diminishing our mental concern, have right choices not too many.

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an acceptable range of vocabulary, but with poor diction. you should talk about whether we have choices or not. some errors in accuracy

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It is argued that people have more opportunity to select whatever they want. While there are several important factors in human life to make a decision, I believe people have chance to choose in some aspects.
Although...

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It is argued that people have more opportunity to select whatever they want. While there are several important factors in human life to make a decision, I believe people have chance to choose in some aspects.
Although inventions and discoveries have provided many facilities for human, that it seems people can achieve all wishes, there are more limitations in some aspects. In fact, they should have enough money to choose from many options. For instance, someone who is interested to travel a lot can go everywhere by any vehicle or any public transportation. But choosing the destination for having good time needs money. In addition, entering to another country needs the permission of that government, which some of them have strict rules and do not issue the visa for foreign people, so they cannot choose the special country as they would like.
However, there is more freedom to choose one choice through many options in some situations. Even though this condition may not be able to satisfy all groups of people, It can be promising for some who would like to achieve their goals. For example, studying in favorite majors is one of the achievable dreams which in past years we do not have many fields of study. By this I mean, people can find their abilities and interests, then choose one subject to learn.
To sum up, my view is that having too chance to choose all subjects is not practical and can happen in the set of reasons.

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Some people reckon that these days we have plenty of choices, but others are opposed to this notion. Numerous choices could be a definition of opportunities and options that we can decide on. In my opinion I agree that nowadays the options we...

Some people reckon that these days we have plenty of choices, but others are opposed to this notion. Numerous choices could be a definition of opportunities and options that we can decide on. In my opinion I agree that nowadays the options we could elect is various due to the improvement of technology and communication.
With the advancement of technology, ways of interaction and communication have been developed and as a result extensive and varied elections are available for individuals im many aspects, for instance in comparison with the past decades which were not plenty varied fields in education, a personal who desires to continue studying in the modern world can choose from among different disciplines according to his/her interests, besides in all fields of study there are sub-branches namely medical discipline is one of the sub-branches of health, therefore the person has the considerable range of suggestions.
Considering the progress and improvement the quality of society , individuals have the right to appoint their directions, however unfortunately in some cases the limitation in choices is able to cease people to nominate the right path and places them into dilemmas, for example restrictions in immigration systems, which limit some countries, so people are not capable to immigrate effortlessly. Obviously this is not a choice that people want, also this a small restriction. Undoubtedly, in most cases people are free to make choices, such as lifestyle and the use of equipment and technology.
Consequently nowadays despite the limitations in some features, humans have the great deal of options than before.

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It is often considered that humans have got lots of alternatives in their lives these days. I completely disagree with the statement and think that our options are so limited in any aspect of our life. Reasons are given in following paragraphs.

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It is often considered that humans have got lots of alternatives in their lives these days. I completely disagree with the statement and think that our options are so limited in any aspect of our life. Reasons are given in following paragraphs.

First of all, we are living in an unstable situation that many things are changing. This issue has a serious impact on humans’ life and makes it so complicated. Thus, people cannot have many choices in this way of life. For example, an individual who wants to make a living, has just two alternatives; investing, or get some skills in a specific field in order to find a job in a company. So, it is obvious that stressful conditions in life or workplace lead people to an undesirable state that they have not get many ways.

Furthermore, having more challenges has made people’s character more complicated in comparison with previous generation and as selecting people around, plays a crucial role in every persons’ life, this matter has clearly affected by. In other words, there are lots of restrictions related to choosing friends, spouse and so on. According to recent research, although there are lots of ways of modern communications these days such as social media, more and more people feel lonely and upset. Therefore, it is getting more difficult to make friendships and other relationships.

To conclude, people are restricted by their choices in their life due to the changes present and their characters.

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It is often considered that humans have got lots of alternatives in their lives these days. I completely disagree with the statement and think that our options are so limited in any aspect of our life. Reasons are given in following paragraphs.

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It is often considered that humans have got lots of alternatives in their lives these days. I completely disagree with the statement and think that our options are so limited in any aspect of our life. Reasons are given in following paragraphs.

First of all, we are living in an unstable situation that many things are changing. This issue has a serious impact on humans’ life and makes it so complicated. Thus, people cannot have many choices in this way of life. For example, an individual who wants to make a living, has just two alternatives; investing, or get some skills in a specific field in order to find a job in a company. So, it is obvious that stressful conditions in life or workplace lead people to an undesirable state that they have not get many ways.

Furthermore, having more challenges has made people’s character more complicated in comparison with previous generation and as selecting people around, plays a crucial role in every persons’ life, this matter has clearly affected by. In other words, there are lots of restrictions related to choosing friends, spouse and so on. According to recent research, although there are lots of ways of modern communications these days such as social media, more and more people feel lonely and upset. Therefore, it is getting more difficult to make friendships and other relationships.

To conclude, people are restricted by their choices in their life due to the changes present and their characters.

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