IELTS Cambridge 11 - Test3 - General Writing - Task2

Essay topics: News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

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In modern society, with the advent of advanced telecommunication and photographic technologies, visual expression in media such as television, photography and films is increasingly becoming popular as a powerful means of expression when compared to the simple mundane printed medium. I agree with the view that the visual channel of receiving information is more effective.

One of the major missions to be accomplished by TV and the printed media is to leave a deep-rooted impression on people’s minds. For instance, commercial advertisements tend to use images rather than words .It is proved that twice as easy as text, photos are committed to the memory.

That is to say, pictures contain shapes and colors which can be easily memorized. Simply put, the more they are utilized, the longer the influence on viewers’ mind. Moreover, in the present evidence - seeking world, visual communication is a powerful tool as it provides recognizable facts. Meticulously crafted images, like political cartoons and television documentaries readily deliver the concerned messages to onlookers and are mostly beneficial in conveying thoughts to the busy and uneducated sections of society. The television is also being bombarded with numerous catchy advertisements, by which manufacturers try to communicate with the masses regarding their products.

In addition, to cover full details, words are liable to occupy more space, as opposed to images. These illustrations are more likely to fulfill the portrayal of a specific story when faced with spatial constraints. For example, the comic magazines and newspapers prefer to use more photos not only for consuming fewer papers and saving more of those  but also to encourage their readers to follow the whole narrative, mainly because just a few of the readers tend to read through an article. Yet, almost all the photos get noticed. In other words, photos carrying more data capture the reader’s attention in a glimpse. This in turn stimulates disinclined people to read the words as well so as to expand their knowledge on the subject matter.

To conclude, visual communication is definitely a popular, powerful and better tool for official and interpersonal purposes. In my view, because of the more technological advances, people are getting used to less wordy materials, thereby gravitating towards the photo-based media in the foreseeable future.

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News stories on TV and in the newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?

Photos have been an integral part of many news publications in...

News stories on TV and in the newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?

Photos have been an integral part of many news publications in both TV and newspapers. While we cannot deny the importance of actual content, it seems effectiveness of the photos is exceeding the plaintexts.

On the one hand, it is sometimes argued that photos are not a perfect way to broadcast the news. Whereas photography has undergone huge positive changes over last decades, it still has the number of shortcomings, as it is not considered so powerful a medium of communication upon text. Moreover, photos are not able to convey human feelings and interpretation, both of which are essential in modern journalism. What the public need and expect from the press is beyond a simply put reports, which is not only truthful transmission but an impartial and neutral explanation of the events.

On the other hand, there are several reasons why we should trust the effectiveness of photojournalism. Firstly, the rapid proliferation of social media, which are increasingly employing visual elements such as images and videos, should be considered as empirical evidence. Having experienced this type of communication, audience, nowadays, are more willing to consume stories come with visual illustration. Secondly, images can be probably regarded as an international language which would minimize any breakdown in communication. While language barrier has been a real issue for many years, broadcasting news with images might reach to more audience. Lastly, there has been proven that expressing news as plain text is not compelling for most people and are ultimately seen as a dry and uninspiring approach in communication, the purpose of which is engaging greater people.

Therefore, I completely agree with the concept of using more visual elements on mainstream media and I think the press should encourage editors and journalists to use photos more often.

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خانوم یا آقای مریم در طزهای بین المللی هم از بیست و پنج تا سی درصد مجازو قانونیست که از منابع معتبر استفاده یا بقول شما کپی کنند....پس این قانون یک نتیجه علمی خوب و مطلوب است ...

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به بنظرم کپی کردن کار جالبی نیست، بخصوص برای موسسه‌ای که ادعای بهترین بودن داره. بخش آخر از پاراگراف دوم متن نمونه دقیقا کپی همین بخش از پاراگراف دوم این نمونه در لینک زیر است:

http://www.ieltsonlinepractice.com/ielts-task-2-image-is-a-more...

به بنظرم کپی کردن کار جالبی نیست، بخصوص برای موسسه‌ای که ادعای بهترین بودن داره. بخش آخر از پاراگراف دوم متن نمونه دقیقا کپی همین بخش از پاراگراف دوم این نمونه در لینک زیر است:

http://www.ieltsonlinepractice.com/ielts-task-2-image-is-a-more-powerful-way-of-communicating/

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چرا نیستین.. من واقعن دلم تنگ شده بود بخداااا.. گفتم شاید کلا دیگه نمیخاین بیاین

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پس چرا همش نیستید ، دلمون خیلی تنگه ، یزره بیشتر باشید ,دستکم مجازی، اگرچه بی ربط هم باشه

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بیان برتر عالیه. تورو . خدا بیاید. فیلتر شده که شده شما باشید. ما به شما نیاز داریم

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در رابطه با نمونه رايتينگ : اين چرا پاراگراف بنديش اين شكليه؟؟?

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It is frequent to use images in news while broadcasting in the media. In my point of view, displaying photos has two major merits. Firstly, they can make the news stories much simpler to understand and reduce the number of words to describe....

It is frequent to use images in news while broadcasting in the media. In my point of view, displaying photos has two major merits. Firstly, they can make the news stories much simpler to understand and reduce the number of words to describe. Secondly, we have no way than using relevant photos in some cases like paintings. In this essay, I will describe both reasons with some related examples.
Simplicity of news to be understood is a must for all agencies. In fact, all news would be baffled without pictures and the number of words required to describe an event will be increased. According to some surveys, the number of pages in any newspaper with no pictures would be almost doubled, and many people should spend hours and hours to understand what the writer tries to say. Also, it would not be possible to compare the data with neither any chart nor timeline in news focusing on various statistics and comparing data to explain a trend.
In some news, it is vital to use pictures and the content of news is based on the pictures. One example is a case on TV news headline about a theft of a precious painting from a famous museum. Hardly do we understand that the story is about a painting when we can not watch it in news. Another sample would be about showing the face of an escaped prisoner both on TV and in newspaper to be identified by people. In this case, police only can find a clue through what witnesses report. Definitely, pictures can help greatly to find and arrest such dangerous individual.
To sum up, two major causes were described to show the necessity of using pictures in news. What I strongly believe is that pictures are greatly helpful in reducing the words and easier perceiving of the news message. In other cases, the news story revolves over the picture and it would not be meaningful to broadcast unless we show the picture.

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There are wildly differing views on the question of whether words should be accompanied by pictures in newspapers and tv or not .I certainly agree that such pictures have become powerful means...

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There are wildly differing views on the question of whether words should be accompanied by pictures in newspapers and tv or not .I certainly agree that such pictures have become powerful means of communications.
There are a number of reasons for saying that media is actually effective on people .Humans around the world desire to do business by attractive figures moreover students learn courses by colorful photos.Thus,it is undisputed which images are utilized in many sectors.Likewise,in modern media use of these visuals are often more powerful than words and beautiful images is pleasing to the viewer's eyes, in another word ,it show all feelings at that moment.A renowned writer said"one look is worth a thousand of words. It is absolutely right to say ,patterns keep audience intersted till the end of story and understand vague words.some people believe that films,stories and cereals shows real - life events by lasting impact on the audience.
However ,the importance of lexical patterns cannot be neglected since words can explain details by giving a huge range of informations and descriptions.Even,some images maybe decieve people with showing better quality if we just care about photos without any background and data besides it.
To sum it up, not only visuals do have a great impact on the audience ,but also they play a key role in viewers idea.Although it is easy to just rely news through written worfs,the visual representations is highly fruitful.

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In the recent years, by emerging stories in which pictures are utilized, the media has been changed significantly. It is said that by this change the stories have changed positively. I...

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In the recent years, by emerging stories in which pictures are utilized, the media has been changed significantly. It is said that by this change the stories have changed positively. I strongly agree with this opinion.
First and most importantly, the necessary time for reading or watching pictorial stories are shorter than story including words. Had all stories been comprised of pictures, the content would have been conveyed efficiently. For example, there are some pictures in the pages of the newspaper associated with the criminal incident that without which most of the audience would not read them.
Apart from this, some members of the society fail to read. Not only do adult prefer to watch pictorial stories, but also some of the senior citizens and the children those who do not ability or capability to read enjoy the media including pictures. For instance, most mothers whose infant like to watch cartoons can at the same time do the house’ chores and take care their offspring.
Not only these, by emerging the state-of-the-art-technology and the cutting edge innovations in the media industry and by using the visual effects, a huge number of multimedia products have been produced including high quality and attractive pictures whose audience are fascinated by them. As an example, in many books written for children, a great number of positive morality features such as gallantry, humanism, and philanthropy are symbolized and manifested by pictures. In addition, usually, the grievous scenes are more effective than original stories which those produced based on.
In conclusion, I think if the writers or the directors place a premium on producing stories including pictures, their products will be more attractive and the content will be conveyed efficiently.

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the chief parts of the task are covered. but structures in some parts are imprecise and mechanical. a sufficient range of words
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The recent decades have seen a rise in the amount of mass media that have the potential to convey information,thus when the question arises whether or not attaching pictures make a great contribution to attract audience attention,people seem to...

The recent decades have seen a rise in the amount of mass media that have the potential to convey information,thus when the question arises whether or not attaching pictures make a great contribution to attract audience attention,people seem to have devided opinion,I believe that photos are more likely to provide easy access to news.
Firstly,that goes without saying a glimpse on media range from primitive one to advanced admitted that what take our fancy at first sight is images.take,for instance,a paper empty of pictures.it is less likely to impress any word on our mind but pictures does.colourful and splendid photos on tv or newspapers are of broad interest to people to pique their curiosity to keep up with the latest news.
The second reason is laziness .to clarify,watching magnificent and flashy photos takes less energy than reading news.individuals eager to know general information about whatever occurs around them .therefore,the opportunity that images provide for this has no replacement.popularity of some social media such as Twitter or instagram which sets them apart from other media is a case in point .
Moreover ,when it comes to comprehension we must face that reading is bound to lead misunderstanding it means that different people can have different interpretation from context but with pictures you can illustrate and display your root intention .a guideline notebook for assembling an electronic device can be a typical example which show you regulate it as same as what you see in instruction images.
On the whole,it is obvious that attached photos play an unneglectable role in making good impression on people.it is my firm conviction that there are several merits in using photos in news content.

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the level of error is to high and sentences lack coherence. work on your grammar
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In the recent years, by emerging stories in which picture are used, the media has been change significantly. It is said that, by this change the stories on the media have change positively. I strongly agree with this opinion.
First and most...

In the recent years, by emerging stories in which picture are used, the media has been change significantly. It is said that, by this change the stories on the media have change positively. I strongly agree with this opinion.
First and most importantly, the necessary time for reading or watching pictorial stories are shooter than story including words. Had all stories been comprised with pictures sooner, the content would have been conveyed efficiently. For example, the pages of the newspaper contain picture without which most of audience would not read them.
Apart from this, some members of the society fail to read. Not only do adult prefer to watch pictorial stories, but also some of the senior citizens and the children those who not ability or capability to read enjoy the media including pictures. For instance, most mothers whose infant like to watch cartoon can at the same time do their chores and take care their offspring.
Not only these, by emerging the state-of-the-art-technology and the cutting edge innovations in the media industry, by suing the visual effects a huge number of multimedia products have been produced including high quality and attractive pictures whose audience by them. As an example, in many books written for children, a great number of positive features such as gallantry, humanism and philanthropy are symbolized by pictures. In addition, usually the grievous scenes are more effective than original stories which they produced based on.
In conclusion, I think that if the writers or the directors place a premium on producing stories including pictures, their products will be more attractive and the content will be conveyed efficiently.

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Not surprisingly ,nowadays,there are variety of pictures and images, which are playing a crucial role in describing news stories on TV, and newspapers. To me this would help individuals to potentially understand their ideas .

There seems that...

Not surprisingly ,nowadays,there are variety of pictures and images, which are playing a crucial role in describing news stories on TV, and newspapers. To me this would help individuals to potentially understand their ideas .

There seems that pictures are understandable to all aspects of society, thus some researches clams that images are easier to save for brain, whereas words are not, because of their symbol shapes.Particularly, tutors encourage their pupils, to draw pictures to help their mindfulness.Although, many can remember subjects by listening to them, many people claim that pictures are impressively beneficial in this case, rather than listening.

Picturing would also make substantial contribution to bonding with foreign audiences. It can be a significant option that people from other countries ,or language learners are be able ,to take full advantage of news and information. Consider, for instance, a traveler or immigrant which have no linguistic background, can realize road situation by watching traffic news, instead of doing their best to translating the language.

Describing picture-based subjects can be another key factor, influencing utilizing images instead of words. Many majors are impossible to explain by words individually; consequently, media accept that representing them has a big advantage over telling them. Terrorist attacks, are an obvious example of various benefits, of depicting news instead of explaining them.
There are huge amount of destructions in terrorist attacks ,but without pictures no one would have idea about, how much are they realistically.

In conclusion, tending to see pictures rather than reading or listening is deep-rooted in our ancient habits. It can help global communication and world transferring information, by boosting speed of information sending. Showing images to audiences, would not only improve their creativity but also aid them to understand, a complete idea about both television, and paper-based news stories.

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there are some errors in word choice and word formation. sentences often lack coherence, ideas seem logical
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There are wildly drffering views on the question of whether words should be accompanied by pictures in newspapers and tv or not .I certainly, agree that such pictures have become powerful means of communications .
To start with ,It is important...

There are wildly drffering views on the question of whether words should be accompanied by pictures in newspapers and tv or not .I certainly, agree that such pictures have become powerful means of communications .
To start with ,It is important to say media is actually effictive on people.human around the world desire to buy goods with attractive figure.thus,it is undisputable images are so apprehensible in many sectors.In teaching use of these visuals are often more powerful than wors.From my point of view ,in modern media use of beautiful and locations is pleasing to the viewer's eyes,likewise it say all feelings at that moment .
It is absolutly right to say ,patterns keep audience intersted till the end of story and understand vague words .
However,the importance of lexical patterns cannot be neglected since words can explain details by torrent of informations about some vague pictures.Even,some images maybe decieve people by showing better quality ,if we care about photos too much without any data besides it .
To sum it up ,visuals do have a great impact on the audience.They not play a key role in viewers but also,help them relate better and keep their interst alive .

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People used to be informed of news stories through listening to the news on TV or reading newspapers in earlier times, whilst the recent decades have witnessed an increase in the number of pictures illustrated in the reports of events. Although...

People used to be informed of news stories through listening to the news on TV or reading newspapers in earlier times, whilst the recent decades have witnessed an increase in the number of pictures illustrated in the reports of events. Although these pictures can be seriously misleading, I believe they are liable to have some merits in temporary world.

Photos and videos shown in the media sometimes have misled ordinary people. If individuals suppose that sufficient information can be provided by them, a myriad of problems are bound to be created with perceiving facts. In other words, pictures do not have potential to explain the justifications of incidents; the masses demand to keep track of details so as to prevent them from running the risk of being misled.

Nonetheless, with the advent of technology, the public prefer to watch videos and images instead of listening and reading reports. Recently, while visual items have been expanded all around the world, the attitudes of people and their choices have undergone massive changes. Reporters and commentators usually lead dull discussions concerning the latest events on TV or in newspapers, whereas sensational pictures can attract various age groups, especially young people. Inasmuch as the young have been always surrounded by visual objects, news without any pictures is not of broad interest to them.

Moreover, news without pictures can be time-consuming. Jobholders fully occupied with their work do not have adequate time for all news. They, therefore, can easily be aware of all issues if looking at the first pages of newspapers or watching short videos in their resting time. A case of point is nurses and doctors spending plenty of time in hospitals and health-care centers; they should employ this way.

To conclude, despite dire consequences caused by paying attention to the pictures of news stories, they have been the best and foremost method for disseminating information to new generation.

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Thanks to technological advances, these days, high quality images have become an indispensable part of news and information in some sort of the media. It appears that these images are much more influential in transferring news’ messages than...

Thanks to technological advances, these days, high quality images have become an indispensable part of news and information in some sort of the media. It appears that these images are much more influential in transferring news’ messages than words alone.

Firstly, pictures might attract more attention than words duo to the exceptional capability of eyes which are easily glued to images. To illustrate, it is claimed that the popularity of picture publications as well as television, which rendered the radio obsolete, is highly likely due to the sight and motion represented and broadcast. In other words, it is image that has become appealing to people even from the early beginning of the silent cinema.

Furthermore, images would help the audience easily grasp the main point of the story, which may be difficult to understand; for example, there are many details in a war scene photograph which might be ignored by reporters, while could easily be seen by the audience. Using visual sense in fact make individuals to visualize all the scene in details and remember them far more effectively than by only hearing or reading.

Last but not least, aiming at a high audience rating, the news agencies try to use more images, meaning that nobody could avoid from being informed by news. Apart from the morality of this policy, those people who could not follow news owing to their time pressure, for instance, would at least be able to receive it, for the most part through pictures involved.

Due to the aforementioned reasons, I would aver that images, being easily accessible and understandable, have a huge role in conveying information via the media as the saying goes” a picture is worth a thousand words”.

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there are some errors in the third paragraph. you successfully have avoided wordy sentences but in some parts more clarification makes understanding easier. although the intro and conclusion deserve above 7, body paragraphs have lagged behind
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there are some errors in the third paragraph. you successfully have avoided wordy sentences but in some parts more clarification makes understanding easier. although the intro and conclusion deserve above 7, body paragraphs have lagged behind
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The media reports a host of news stories as well as documentaries to provide audiences with noteworthy information either graphically or verbally. Many people reckon images are easier to follow than texts while others think opposite. Generally...

The media reports a host of news stories as well as documentaries to provide audiences with noteworthy information either graphically or verbally. Many people reckon images are easier to follow than texts while others think opposite. Generally speaking, in my opinion, although graphical reports are more attractive, more clarification might be essential by words in some cases.
There is a lot to be said for the images depicted by the news stories in the media. In fact, they make the reports more attractive and worthwhile for a wide range of people, especially for ordinaries. Moreover, it needs less time to comprehend the message behind pictures in comparison with words. The reason is that reading a long text in newspapers or listening to a verbal report on TV is time-consuming and requires concentration to understand. Eventually, as recent investigations have proved, the images presented by news stories are more liable to imprint longer on the mind of those who have already watched them on TV compared to verbal messages.
From another viewpoint, sceptics claim that it is impractical to appreciate the whole story thanks to a few pictures. They argue that to clarify details, using words is inevitable. Otherwise, some parts might remain vague which make audiences confuse. Furthermore, a few aspects may be unfeasible to illustrate graphically. For instance, the main causes which exacerbate global warming.
In conclusion, although images contribute to follow some aspects in an efficient and a convenient way, the entire message behind the news stories might not be explained clearly with no words. However, a combination of images and text message can be the best choice.

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all parts of the task have been dealt with using logical ideas which some of them are not fully developed there are some errors
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The issue of whether pictures are more effective to convey main ideas of news than words or not, is not a contentious one .Despite some people prefer to be aware as conventional way, I believe that modern methods which have involved visual sense...

The issue of whether pictures are more effective to convey main ideas of news than words or not, is not a contentious one .Despite some people prefer to be aware as conventional way, I believe that modern methods which have involved visual sense by using pictures are more effective.
First of all, In the world which are rapidly boosting and different choices have been given people to select favorite programs between a vast more convenient methods of informing news , Individuals , therefore, elect illustrated fashions which require less concentration rather than old-fashioned ways .since modern people do not intended to spend their time ,for instance, reading a newspaper for a long hours like in the past and saving time has been their preference .Besides, it is considered as a comprehensible practice for majority of society from illiterates to persons who suffer from auditory deficiency.
Further, learning power would be improved by illustrated ways and they would have more vital impact upon human’s learning. As education system have been serving this fact particularly at the first grade of primary school for instance. Moreover lexical approach have less long-lasting effect on mind just as In recent studies have been proven that visual methods for information transforming have increased duration of memorized up to 40%. Thus to display an accident due to not to fasten seat-belt will be memorable impact instead of simply reporting through some rigid words.
In conclusion, using pictures to aware people are effective and it leads to last the effects of main message on people’s memory.

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poor coherence. the level of error is too high. some statements have not been sufficiently supported
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The recent decades haveseen a rise the ways and sources of news in the world,which has certainly caused attention by people and media owners. However, it seems increasing the number of visitors can be affected via choosing the best method.
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The recent decades haveseen a rise the ways and sources of news in the world,which has certainly caused attention by people and media owners. However, it seems increasing the number of visitors can be affected via choosing the best method.
Surprisingly, the number of audiences are often felt soaring to. As a result of growing,we can to point to many factors namely kind and atteractive of program as well as devices of published like picture,sharp color s,marketing and moreover notice to people of tastes.of course some directors due to increase visitor by apply ing aristic tricks.it s clear that fantastic painting with harsh and moving colors have encoruagwd each person to notice to.
Regarding,what is saide ,would be maintioned that nowdays the media industry have
been engaged in a lot of competition thus it used incentives to customer who willing select them.
Inreality these methodes have been successful since its exaggeration in absorbing and better understanding the programs.
Inaddition these days people mostly dont have enough time to read and entertainment therefore it would be preferred to give the most information and use the least time thus as was said lam convinced that more people will choose the same news stories without using these effective methods

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the response is under-length. the task is barely addressed.frequent errors
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Every news media requires to appeal to more audience as possible, in this regard, news industry employs a variety of fashions in order to have paramount influence in public opinion. I believe the efficacy of photographs and videos is much more...

Every news media requires to appeal to more audience as possible, in this regard, news industry employs a variety of fashions in order to have paramount influence in public opinion. I believe the efficacy of photographs and videos is much more than words.
First of all, people are different from each other in the term of receiving the concept of the message, in another word, someone might need to read to comprehend the news and others need to listen to capture the story.
However, I strongly believe that the most effective way is observing, because, television present news in a more interesting fashion; ergo, most news corporations spend a large proportion of the budgets on television. Because images and videos send the proper message and avoid misunderstandings; Tv broadcasts and newspapers portray images to send not just the story but emotions to the audiences as well.
Recently, Specialists carried out research for the effectiveness of pictures, and the results were quite surprising, because, it is indicated that brain can capture and recall events better when individuals see something instead of hearing or reading it. Thus, TV news channels are accepted as the most cogent presentation of all news by people and they trust and choose it instead of other news media.
To sum up, although I agree with the statement that images would send the message more clearly, people have a different preference, some people need to read the news to understand the story. However, most people prefer to see it

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connectives in some parts have not been used effectively. there are some mistakes in verb tenses and form. good paragraphing
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While news items used to be merely written in text format, the recent decades have witnessed a rise in the number of news stories, either on TV or in newspapers, accompanied by pictures. It is mainly because many consider this practice more...

While news items used to be merely written in text format, the recent decades have witnessed a rise in the number of news stories, either on TV or in newspapers, accompanied by pictures. It is mainly because many consider this practice more effective than the traditional methods. Even though text news could be helpful to some extent, I am inclined to believe that the effectiveness of pictures used in reports is far more.
First and foremost, showing the nature of story through utilizing pictures in news could have a profound impression on the audience. It can be exemplified by bleak pictures of wars which have been published with news stories, having made people all the emotion of soldiers as well as their families, they have convinced politicians to avoid war. It is, therefore, clear how pictures can potentially change people ‘s mentality, creating a picture in their mind which is quiet vivid.
Although it is argued that text news can be more detailed, containing statistics, list of information or precise facts, I am of the opinion that many people are reluctant to read all these details, finding it tedious and futile. They can, however, catch up the general idea of the subject through a glance to pictures. Thus, placing more pictures in news stories could make it more appealing and informative.
To conclude, due to above-mentioned reasons, utilizing pictures in news can be extremely impressive, causing people to feel the story vividly and make words more obvious and clear.

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In recent decades, picture is cited as an integral to news in the media. This item is of great importance. Yet words have a vital role to play in conveying information.
Firstly, the pictures contribute to the audiences’ curiosity and enthusiasm....

In recent decades, picture is cited as an integral to news in the media. This item is of great importance. Yet words have a vital role to play in conveying information.
Firstly, the pictures contribute to the audiences’ curiosity and enthusiasm. News distributed on television or print media are highly likely to be tedious to follow without videos or pictures. Secondly, a quick overlooking (glimp) on visuals lead followers to recognize the news oultline and if they tend to persue the full story or not. Finally, followers potentially communicate better with imaged news in the way that they would apprehend more elaborations of the news. For instance photos of the goals of a certain football team thrills its fans while the simply text is not capable to do so. Thus, pictures have a high state in today’s media news.
However, other factors comprising words are not of lower importance. The pictures may be appealing at the first glimpse but that is the word keep either reader’s or viewer’s interest alive. This is to say, words make the news crystal clear leading to a perfect comprehend for the audience. As pictures viewers may have various conception of the same picture it is vital to clarify it with elaborated explanations. Take an political unrest for instance, it is the word can convey a wide range of political analysis concerning to such event than simply pictures of the unrest. The great status of word in media news, therefore, is clear.
In conclusion, whereas pictures have a key role to play in modern world of media and particularly in news it wouldn’t affect the status of the word an d its main importance .

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It is true that headlines and stories almost come with photos. However, people have different views about whether this approach is effective or not. I personally think putting photos alongside words is really beneficial because audiences often...

It is true that headlines and stories almost come with photos. However, people have different views about whether this approach is effective or not. I personally think putting photos alongside words is really beneficial because audiences often find it a convenient and healthy way to read.

We cannot ignore the fact that people are lazy to read. They just want to obtain the most up-to-date information as fast as possible. If they come across a long list of descriptions and interpretations on News channels, the chances are they will change the channel or have a tendency towards other programs. In this case, that channel will lose the majority of its followers. For example, back in the day in my country, there were some interpreters appearing on TV, who used to talk unstoppable about the front page of a tabloid. Most of conversations were presented on a video projection which was filled with specialized expressions. As a result, the majority of people found that program boring and monotonous.

Beyond a shadow of a doubt, putting mixing words and photos in a news story is not only a professional and effective way, but also a healthy way to inform members of society. This approach makes audiences be able to memorize things in an appropriate way. According to studies, the majority of language learning software is now equipped with the technique of mixing words and images together to encourage beginners to learn second language. By looking at images, words accompanied with photos will remain in learners’ long-term memories. Application software like Rosetta Stone is believed to be the founder of this technique. What is more, people are not keen on straining their eyes reading too many contents on the media. They know that it may hurt their vision in the long run and therefore they will need eye-glasses to be able to read newspapers or watch TV again.

In conclusion, I agree that photos are suitable complements for words in news stories and the approach of putting photos near words benefits the memory and makes the body healthier.

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There is a little room for doubt that News possessing pictures in media have become more pervasive.This essay will completely agree that this trend is beneficial. This essay will discuss that News including photos are much more exciting for the...

There is a little room for doubt that News possessing pictures in media have become more pervasive.This essay will completely agree that this trend is beneficial. This essay will discuss that News including photos are much more exciting for the populace and also claims that they can be more clear to be understood as a whole.

Apparently,as comprising myriad images,reports receive a wide currency among addresses due to the attention they arrest.to be more specific,providing that contexts of the News lack some photographs, not only will it be tedious,but also boredom is bound to ensue.for example,A person’s attention can be significantly grabbed by an appealing image right in the second of confronting it.

Furthermore,News containing dazzling photos in media such as television, printed or online newspapers are not only interesting
,but also illustrative and expressive for the audiences.this means that by a glance of the eye,one can perceive its implication rather than reading a rich variety of text lines.for instance,a picture of an air-polluted region can have thousands of words to say for whom it may concern.

By way of conclusion,I personally ponder that graphical News and reports alike are more appealing compared to plain texts due to the attraction and clearance they create.

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It is evident that last decades have seen argumentative issues concerning the use of visual depictions in the mass media. When this question arises that whether images are more efficient than texts or not, it seems people have divided opinions. I...

It is evident that last decades have seen argumentative issues concerning the use of visual depictions in the mass media. When this question arises that whether images are more efficient than texts or not, it seems people have divided opinions. I strongly agree that the visualization has to be considered in a higher priority.
Although written materials are potential means of communication, pictures and videos are more understandable and memorizable for human’s mind. According to conducted research by Tony Buzan, a winner of Nobel Prize in 2014, human’s brain memorizes the matters in imaged-form. Thus, should the text is accompanied by photos, it becomes far more understandable and memorizable. Therefore, using photos, diagrams, and charts is more efficient than using only words.
Attractiveness and transmitting a wealth of information in a short period of time could be mentioned as other merits of visual materials. One of the good examples is Keyhan newspaper, published with no photos in black and white colours. This newspaper is rarely chosen by the populace due to being tedious for reading. In addition, pictures not only need small spaces to convey messages but also they can transfer information in a short time span. As a case in point, Infographies contain enormous amount of knowledge and explain issues for readers just only in one page by using pictures, coloured lines in tandem with texts. As a result, for today’s people, who are more interested in pictures than texts and have few time to read word, using images could be an invaluable ways of transferring information.
On the whole, the more visualized materials are used, the more effective the media are to convey information. I personally believe that pictures should be considered as the best means of communication because of being the most understandable and the most attractive.

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Mass media are the most important source of information and journalists usually use some photos attached to news in order to build huge following. Some society members allege that images make news more efficient and apprehensible than words. In...

Mass media are the most important source of information and journalists usually use some photos attached to news in order to build huge following. Some society members allege that images make news more efficient and apprehensible than words. In this assay, this view will be discussed in detail, followed by my own perspective on the matter.
It is undeniable that photos play an important role in conveying news, which make them more interesting, perceptible and imaginable, thereby motivating society members to follow news. Photos, moreover, cause that information sticks in people’s mind. According to a research in Tehran university, people remember contents with pictures 2 times higher than when they heard or read them without any photos. In fact, visual sense helps brain to remind subjects better. Furthermore, pictures in news act as documents which make it more trustworthy.
Nonetheless, the high priority of words should not be neglected too. Firstly, people’s interpretations are very various and maybe an image is misconcepted or even considered meaningless. In addition, in some reports it is necessary to give some data and statics to society members. For instance, words are the main parts of economic news since it is too difficult that people understand them by only pictures.
In conclusion, although photos have a major impact in perceiving reports, the importance of words can not be ignored. Admittedly, I am in opinion that combination of words and pictures are required in expressing news.

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It is common that news reports are released with relevant pictures whether in broadcast or newspapers. I completely agree with some viewers and readers that are of the opinion that these pictures are set to have more influence on people in...

It is common that news reports are released with relevant pictures whether in broadcast or newspapers. I completely agree with some viewers and readers that are of the opinion that these pictures are set to have more influence on people in contrast with words alone.

When news is accompanied by relevant scenes, there seems to be understood and felt better rather than hearing and reading words alone. In simple terms, ones do not need to motivate their imaginations in order to rebuild the reality of scenes and places in their minds since those images are bound to help people to get the real feel of circumstances. Moreover, pictures are more likely to draw people's attention to all the details. By way of illustration, consider the news reports that are talking about war, bomb explosion and people's death. While people are watching real images of news, their attention tend to be grabbed by all the destroyed area, corpses and so on.

At the same time, using picture in news is a kind of proofing the truth of that. Although there can be found many news agencies in all over the world that publicize the exact news, it is probable that some agencies exagerate specific news for their own sake, especially those that are rooted in political aspect of each society. As news is being heard or read, pictures can be used as a root evidence of that. Take the marching that is in support of current government as an example. It is usual that governments exagerate about the support that they recieve from the public, so people can be aware of the approximate number of citizens that marched in favour of government by seeing their pictures. Pictures can be accounted for the honesty of reporters.

In conclusion,I am absolutely convinced that pictures have big impact on audiences and readers of news.

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as much as i appreciate your attempt to reflect the recent occurrences, your examples need more clarification and focus. paragraphing has been put into a good use.
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In the fast-paced world, news play a crucial part in the common good. Most of the news, nowadays, consist some meaningful pictures, in both broadcasts and newspapers. Some people would argue that pictures as the contributing factor are more...

In the fast-paced world, news play a crucial part in the common good. Most of the news, nowadays, consist some meaningful pictures, in both broadcasts and newspapers. Some people would argue that pictures as the contributing factor are more effective than texts. Firstly, this essay will discuss this perspective, and then will explain that both words and pictures together with one another can bring about more influences.
On the one hand, from my point of view, words are absolutely pivotal factor to convey important information. News without texts can lead to misguided results, and creates an array of difficulties as well as countless problems. For particularly salient example, in 1995, one renowned newspaper in Iran published a picture of a building without any words that collapsed. Reader thought that the building is located in Iran, while that was located in another place. Thus, news without texts may pose some challenges to people.
On the other hand, it is an unquestionable fact that, pictures can illustrate matters in a better way than everything else. Most of the time, individuals can perceive events in more details by images. For instance, in 2015, an American newspaper covered a news concerning a huge fire over some parts of California’s forest. The news did not include any pictures and people did not comprehend the scale of disaster. Therefore, the news companies should place a premium on revealing effective news along with some illustrations.
By way of conclusion, this essay once again reaffirm this position that not only texts but also pictures have vitally important roles to transfer news. Hence, broadcasting associations should take this issue into consideration so as to transmit more impressive information.

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Information and points are generally arranged coherently. examples seem logical, but they could be improved with better diction and structures
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These days, news stories on TV and in newspapers are presented by pictures and some people think that reading the news that is supported by photographs is more effective. I think, when, a news column is accompanied by pictures, it is more...

These days, news stories on TV and in newspapers are presented by pictures and some people think that reading the news that is supported by photographs is more effective. I think, when, a news column is accompanied by pictures, it is more attractive to follow and it could be more understandable.

Compared with old fashion newspapers that were published in previous decades, nowadays, the newspapers publishers and TV program directors are aware enough about the effectiveness of using images and photographs in newspapers and also on TV. There are some reasons for this case. At first, I think some particular columns in newspapers should be including pictures to show more information and facts. For example, in the events column, when there is news about a terrible accident between two vehicles, all the news readers like to see an image about that to obtain more relevant details. The second point is, the news that are accompanying by photographs are more attractive than only words. Finally, I believe that pictures are able to express more details about an event and sometimes people feel better when see a picture.

On the other hand, photographs are able to make a particular relationship with news readers because readers could receive real feeling such as affections, emotions, etc while they are seeing a real picture. For example, when people are watching a report on a TV about two countries’ war, videos and photographs influence people’s feeling effectively. In addition I think, these days many people do not have enough time to read newspapers and magazines completely so that they prefer to review just pictures quickly. For this reason, nowadays, an excited branch of journalism has existed in which, the journalist make news using photographs mainly instead of words. This field of journalism is called `Photojournalism’ and I am sure in close future, people will encounter more with photojournalism than now.

In conclusion, I believe that the role of photographs in news is increasing because pictures are able to show many details such as feeling and others facts more effective than only words.

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be careful about articles. main points are covered. occasional grammatical errors without interfering with comprehension
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One of thought provoking concerns of journalists has always been how to present the News. Having said that schematic views both in newspapers and on television would have more influence than written patterns. I strongly agree with this idea. This...

One of thought provoking concerns of journalists has always been how to present the News. Having said that schematic views both in newspapers and on television would have more influence than written patterns. I strongly agree with this idea. This essay will exhaust the overt advantages of snapshots over words in News.
Pictures have frequently been used in different media in order to transfer the information more conveniently. The cogent reason, because of which people prefer to confront more pictures in News, could be the durability of photos in one’s mind. In other words, if one even takes a quick look into a News, in which some photos are included, the potential information will last in his mind for appropriate specific period. For instance, it would be much easier to remember a picture or a scene related to a News, rather than reminding the words of that report.
Moreover, pictures are not only able to transfer the intact details of an event more suitable but also in less time. For example, the details of a car accident could have been illustrated more appropriately, if the writer of an article had used a photo instead of writing a paragraph about it. Furthermore, illustrating the results, trends and particular conditions is an effective means of taking full advantage of pictures. For example, instead of explaining about the potential risks of investing in a specific market, it would be much beneficial to represent a picture, in which either the graph or the chart of the fluctuation of the indexes regarding to that particular investment, is depicted.
To conclude, the above-mentioned facts give one a glimpse of the required justification of how pictures are more influential than words. In my opinion, in spite of the fact that events have usually been discussed through words, pictures are able to illustrate the concepts along with the details and conditions, in a prompter and lasting way.

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a sufficient range of words. some structures have been used mechanically. be careful about uncountable nouns
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The news has always been a contentious topic. Not only words but also images have been using to tell stories for decades. When the question arises by which ones society members are set to be highly influenced; I strongly allege that illustrated...

The news has always been a contentious topic. Not only words but also images have been using to tell stories for decades. When the question arises by which ones society members are set to be highly influenced; I strongly allege that illustrated parts are the cornerstone of news media.
Press may not be value for less illiterate regions. One convincing explanation in favor of this opinion is that when not being able to read, people would tend to watch news programs or just take a look at photos in newspapers. Another compelling reason is that we are heavily loaded by a plenty of daily works which do not allow us to spend time on reading news; so as to being informed about events everyone potentially tempt to choose pictures.
Accordingly, the power of photo could not be denied internationally. To begin with, smart phones have received wide currency among nations which is provided you to take unique and exotic photos alike just with one click. Many demonstrations and crisis have being shot in around a world then uploaded on social media consequently you are bound to be a news reporter without saying or writing any words. Foreigner attention is likely to be grabbed without acquiring their mother’s tongue. The last justification is that most of medical news would not entirely be practical unless it was accompanied by either picture or video. Who knows that how a blood pressure measuring device works while there cannot be found any illustrations to give structure. This is literally integral to have a visual direction.
Admittedly, although news casts or press deals with letters in nature, photos are the lifeblood of any item. In many cases they are the best replacement when words are speechless. I eagerly opine that depicted news outperform written ones.

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a good range of vocabulary. there are
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It is argued that news stories broadcast by TV and newspapers are incorporated with pictures. It says that the efficacy of these pictures is more than words. Similarly, I completely agree with this idea that pictures are much more influential...

It is argued that news stories broadcast by TV and newspapers are incorporated with pictures. It says that the efficacy of these pictures is more than words. Similarly, I completely agree with this idea that pictures are much more influential than words.

Firstly, with the advent of technology, we are no longer able to escape from image world. In point of fact, everything has turned into an exhibition which is potentially represented and words will not be an exception as well. The more words in TV and newspapers, for example, are combined with visual components, the greater sentences would strikingly be drastic. Thus, the human mind, nonetheless, is woven tightly into word structure, it is more likely to perceive more easily pictures. It is meant that individuals are deeply impressed with the observation of photos. This fact has been elegantly apprehended by the media and journalists.

To clarify, adept journalists tend to mix up their sensational headlines with breathtaking pictures, for they are set to attract lots of readers. Along with this, not only a plenty of readers will be effectively caught by photos, but also they may be abused. In fact, a large percentage of journalists are bound to distort the truth with the co-existence of words and pictures. It should be noticed that the majority of readers are exhausted enough to reading all text and are reluctant to pay attention to the entire of sentences. So they are satisfied with the glimpse of the whole text.

In conclusion, my viewpoint would be that words presented by pictures play a pivotal role in soaring the readers. Ergo. I aver that the effectiveness of pictures and photos would be more than words.

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I guess you must have made a mistake in paragraphing. the topic sentence of the third paragraph does not make sense. some grammatical errors. an adequate range of words
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News due to its prevalence potentially affects, changes peoples’ thoughts and behaviors. The recent decades have seen significant changes in the news’s broadcast; For example, images are enclosed the news. It raises a question as to whether these...

News due to its prevalence potentially affects, changes peoples’ thoughts and behaviors. The recent decades have seen significant changes in the news’s broadcast; For example, images are enclosed the news. It raises a question as to whether these enclosed pictures are effective or not. Although people have divided opinions, pictures seem to have deep influence on people.
It is true that pictures potentially convey the concept of words. The pictures, when the news is associated whit war, poverty, and human’s disaster, completely demonstrate the depth of catastrophe.
Human feeling including pain, happiness, and hope are not able to be explained by words, but a simple picture of one’s face clearly indicates these emotions.

Images enclosed the news, furthermore, encourage people to follow the news. Striking and outstanding pictures are main elements which one looks into when evaluating whether a piece of news is desirable or not. A picture determines the reading’s rate of the news due to human’s curiosity, irrespective of its concept.

Most importantly, though, pictures are dramatically powerful. Some violent images on television and in newspaper can be potentially disturbing for children and some of them might be severely traumatized by seeing such things. It is an obvious evidence that how vigorous they could be.

In conclusion, pictures are highly effective and broadcast the news as well. While images are able to transfer all kind of emotions even a combination, they might have negative effect on children because of their power.

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there are minor grammatical mistakes. ideas are logical, but not fully developed.
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Nowadays, news on mass media such as TVs and newspapers are being represented by videos and images containing helpful concepts. Some people argue that these pictures are more effective than words. I partly agree with this opinion and I personally...

Nowadays, news on mass media such as TVs and newspapers are being represented by videos and images containing helpful concepts. Some people argue that these pictures are more effective than words. I partly agree with this opinion and I personally believe that applications of relevant photographs in news depends on the headline of news story.
On one hand, in support of my point of view, there are several reasons why pictures are essential to present news stories. First of all, words are not capable of explaining an event and readers need to watch several scenes of news story. In other words, using suitable pictures make them more efficient and realistic. For instance, if a report of famine or drought in south of africa contains adequate and appropriate photos, viewers and readers could acquire deeper understanding about how sever it is. Another evident example can be the recent catastrophic earthquake in iran, people who live in devastated city received wide variety of supports. In fact, different countries supply funds to reconstruct houses only by watching the photos and videos on mass media. As a result, it is obvious that the majority of people prefer to watch TV news which are accompanying by effective report images rather than listen to radio. Actually, they find TV news more entertaining.
On the other hand, there are some sorts of reports which do not need any photos. For example, a crime report with several terrifying images can create the atmosphere of fear and danger in society. Moreover, another group are those which are about current recession over the world, there are no suitable images to describe this sort of topics and only appropriate structures of words and sentences can convey the original meaning.
To sum up, it is true that using pictures in news story could be helpful in clarifying the concepts, but I believe that it depends on the topic of current news.

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all the ideas are not sufficiently supported. cohesive devices have been used rather mechanically. treat all aspects of the question equally
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The Last couple of decades indeed belong to media and its diverse branches worldwide. various approaches have been conducted and tech enhancements most definitely have facilitated its growth. Amid all of the improvements, illustrations and the...

The Last couple of decades indeed belong to media and its diverse branches worldwide. various approaches have been conducted and tech enhancements most definitely have facilitated its growth. Amid all of the improvements, illustrations and the way that they have been utilized in media and in this specific essay in newspapers has grabbed comprehensive and thorough attention of different tastes with various perspectives. I can confidently exert that use of illustrations in newspapers columns contributed the media world and its impact has been enormous in overall aspects of the news which have been covered in them. I will try to expand upon my conception within the next couple of paragraphs.
Firstly, I would like to reveal how enormously influential the impact of pictures and charts and different media-related drawings can be in terms of conveying the message to its reader. In order to do so citing an example would ease the process of demonstration. Take an economical column prepared to publish in worldwide famous magazine as an example, assume all those numbers and calculations with highly sophisticated economic terms. provided that the authors do not come up with comprehensive illustrations and charts, as a result the grasp of these articles will be impossible for people who are not economy graduates. Furthermore, I do not see any sense in devoting too much time in poring over a column in newspaper when casting a glance of a chart or two can do the trick for us.
Secondly, illustrations in general can beautify and decorate the front pages and allure the reader to purchase the newspaper. Undoubtedly presentation plays pivoted role in encouraging people to read and devote some time to that specific paper. Given that preparing some magnificent photographs associated with charts and diagrams are constituents of an exquisite presentation, ignoring them might not sound lucrative to the publisher’s ears.
To conclude, I certainly reaffirm my interpretation about the role that providing pictures and photos and in media parlance “illustrations”, will indeed be of the higher significance in comparison with words that are presented in written style of the newspaper articles.

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Nowadays, as a result of competitive world, televisions and newspapers make the best effort to impress people more. For reaching this purpose, pictures are attached to news. I believe that using of pictures is as an intelligent work, resulting...

Nowadays, as a result of competitive world, televisions and newspapers make the best effort to impress people more. For reaching this purpose, pictures are attached to news. I believe that using of pictures is as an intelligent work, resulting more people are affected by subject, whereas it dose not mean that words are less effective than pictures.
Medias use pictures because they found out how much pictures can have influence on people’s minds. In other words, they visualize their news and other program by photos, due to the fact that they realize the power of visual sense. In addition, when news is occupied by pictures, people are likely to deduce the concepts better. As researches show, when a fact is mixed by the main human’s sense such as eyesight or hearing sense, it not only can be understood better by people, but also sticks in their minds. For instance, when someone explains the effect of specific drug on human’s lungs, it can have districted influence on people, while it can be more effective only if he proves his descriptions by photos which depict the effect before and after drug consumption.
However, the significance of words should not be overlooked. For instance, in political or economic news, words play the key role. If they are omitted from news, it is unlikely that people understand subject. In this case, without words, people suffer from lack of adequate description.
In conclusion, from my point of view, media can have the best results, when it benefits from both of words and pictures. Also based on situation, either of them can be more effective for conveying the subject.

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there are some inaccuracies in word formation and grammar. some ideas need more clarification.
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These days,as can be seen on TV and in newspapers,it is rare to watch or read a piece of news without a picture attached to . It seems that the report is incomplete or vague with no photos or films.Some people claim that pictures can transmit the...

These days,as can be seen on TV and in newspapers,it is rare to watch or read a piece of news without a picture attached to . It seems that the report is incomplete or vague with no photos or films.Some people claim that pictures can transmit the concept
more efficiently than words do. Even, they believe that words can be eliminated from news in some occasions. However I would argue that words play a vital role to convey the news to people watching TV or reading papers comprehensively.
On the one hand, a group of people say that photos and pictures are dispensable parts of news and can not be omitted.They believe that the news would not be clear without them. For instance, in terms of sports news, video clips and photos seem to be more important than words. I personally agree that in such kinds of news some subtitled words or a commentary may be enough to supplement the pictures. As another example,in national festivals or film festivals picture news would be much more appealing than the written or narrated ones.
However, on the other hand, the importance of words should not be overlooked . There are lots of news in which words are much more important than pictures. For example, in political or economic news, words play the principle role to transfer the information to people. To be more precise,in some events lack of complete explanation could misinform people rather than inform them .
To sum up, I would suggest that words and pictures are equally important to convey the correct and complete news. Depending on situation either of them may be the priority. Having said that in most occasions these parts of news can complement each other to present the news as much as accurate.

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main parts of the prompt are addressed. variety of sentence forms have been used. some ideas are better supported than others. cohesion seems mechanical in some parts
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News in the media contains both pictures and words to report news in the best way. While the media and the press are imbued with words to reporting news, some society members assume that pictures are more effective than words. There are cogent...

News in the media contains both pictures and words to report news in the best way. While the media and the press are imbued with words to reporting news, some society members assume that pictures are more effective than words. There are cogent arguments on both sides which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own perspective on the matter.
On the one side, pictures would bring conflict whenever they are not describing more by words. That is to say, there would be lot of different individual perspective by visiting a same picture and it can be justified by vary attitudes. The Mona Liza, for example, there are two different ideas about this glorious painting, some people argue that she is crying, whereas, others allege that she is laughing. It seems that, reporting news story with just pictures caused people to bring conflict in their understanding.
On the other hand, pictures have many advantages over the words. One overt Advantage of pictures is that, you can realize whole of the theme of story by one glimpse and this is the fastest way of understanding the news. Also pictures are more provable and sensible. It is easy to proof a story by showing a picture rather than telling a story by long essay. There are lots of reporters which devote their life by taking pictures from situation to reporting the story by pictures. Over 100 news reporters have been killed in the war while they were trying to explain the situation by taking photos. It shows that pictures are more valuable than the words. Finally, pictures are more important because news latter are trying shows the most important news on the first page by large size picture.
In conclusion, I believe that pictures are more effective than word. However, there is the same ratio of misunderstanding between word and picture, there are many advantage on using picture for understanding a story in news.

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Most of stories and news have usually been accompanied by influencing images in the past few years. Despite the important role of words in transferring information, I would have to confess that these pictures can have the profound...

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Most of stories and news have usually been accompanied by influencing images in the past few years. Despite the important role of words in transferring information, I would have to confess that these pictures can have the profound impact on individuals. This essay discusses two main reasons for this.
Nowadays papered illustrated stories and news in the newspaper and electronic ones on online media play an influential role in attracting peoples’ attention. In other words, journalism and media have become highly competitive markets in the contemporary society; most of the successful journalists know the importance of establishing a good relationship with their readers. In order to achieve the goal, they have usually tried to keep the balance between words and pictures in factual stories and news, for most of feelings and emotions are impossible to be conveyed by words; applying related video or pictures to stories help individuals to fire their imagination and reshape their mind.
Furthermore, in the ever-changing world of technology there is an ever-increasing demand for new stories; journalism and media, however, should be satisfied story-lovers with influencing stories bursting with effective pictures or short videos in the intention of grabbing their attention and keep them motivated to follow the certain news. The reports speak of increasing tendency of individuals to follow real news and stories caused by the applying attractive images and video in the press and social media.
In conclusion, I would have to contend that combination of attractive images and videos in stories and news lead to rising number of people who are likely to follow attractive stories.

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Most of stories and news have usually been accompanied by influencing images in the past few years. Despite the important role of words in transferring information, I would have to confess that these pictures can have profound impact on...

Most of stories and news have usually been accompanied by influencing images in the past few years. Despite the important role of words in transferring information, I would have to confess that these pictures can have profound impact on individuals. This essay discusses two main reasons for this.
Nowadays papered illustrated stories and news in newspaper and electronic ones on online media play an influential role in attracting peoples’ attention. In other words, journalism and media have become highly competitive markets in the contemporary society; most of successful journalists know the importance of establishing good relationship with their readers. In order to achieve the goal, they have usually tried to keep the balance between words and pictures in factual stories and news, for most of feelings and emotions are impossible to be conveyed by words; applying related video or pictures to stories help individuals to fire their imagination and reshape their mind.
Furthermore, in the ever-changing world of technology there is an ever-increasing demand for new stories; journalism and media, however, should be satisfied story-lovers with influencing stories bursting with effective pictures or short videos in the intention of grabbing their attention and keep them motivated to follow certain news. The reports speak of increasing tendency of individuals to follow real news and stories caused by the applying attractive images and video in press and social media.
In conclusion, I would have to contend that combination of attractive images and videos in stories and news lead to raising number of people who are likely to follow attractive stories.

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It is an indisputable fact that the media and the press have always played an integral role in every society. While some individuals tend to tune in to TV or read newspapers or magazines without any pictures, I would contend that employing...

It is an indisputable fact that the media and the press have always played an integral role in every society. While some individuals tend to tune in to TV or read newspapers or magazines without any pictures, I would contend that employing appropriate photos are likely to convey a message to the audience and presumably can have some beneficial to every member of society.

First of all, these pictures are highly beneficial to illiterate people, motivating them to follow the news. Unfortunately some people, especially those in deprived social classes, have to suffer illiteracy, while cannot read or write appropriately , or sometimes because of the potential inabilities, including visual challenging or deafing problems, they fail to listen to TV news or read newspapers. In this sense, photos play a very crucial and vibrant role when emerge in such mediums, managing them to enjoy the news and grasp or even guess the content of the news by looking at these photos. That is why thesr photos can be highly practical and existence of them are essential.

Another contributing factor of existence of photos relies on the time saving and economic growth aspects . In the fast pace of life people have no longer time to read the newspapers in detail, when newspapers or magazines accustomed with a related picture at first glance , people even in harsh grasp the content. While this immediate fast glance occurs in front of a supermarket, which sells numerous newspapers and magazines, the rushed man would be even motivated to buy that magazine. In this case, this trend evolve into economic prosperity and saving time consuming as well.

In conclusion, although few people are inclined to only read or watch TV without any distracting picture, I would reaffirm that these pictures have brought the sheer number of advantages that is bound to reap applause by most people.

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grammatical errors reduce comprehension, and coherence is weak. work on your accuracy
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It is a fact that broadcasting news article has entwined with illustrations which leads to transfer data quickly. Pictures have turned into the main part of news in recent years. Some people argue that the best way to transfer conceptions can be...

It is a fact that broadcasting news article has entwined with illustrations which leads to transfer data quickly. Pictures have turned into the main part of news in recent years. Some people argue that the best way to transfer conceptions can be images. I contend that transferring data occurs through using attractive images in newspaper articles.
The ways in which news companies spread news has been altered by appearing new methods. Pictures can transfer huge amount of information to readers in a short time. In addition, TV programs and public journals use images when they distribute news. Therefore it is suitable for readers who are children or elderly people.
In china ,for example, the proportion of newspaper which use images in order to transfer data has proliferated at a starting pace. Not only do pictures carry data rapidly, but they can also understand by illiterates completely. The more images use in news, the easier people can realize. It is obvious that transferring massive amount of data in short time can be taken by photo magic.

Reading pages and newspaper by which humans will encounter with some worlds has changed to the everyday work amongst people. Authorities usually use simple words in order to transfer data and they prefer writing their contexts with short and understandable words instead of complex structures or confusing images. In industrialized nations, for instance, illustrations only use in billboards installed on the roads. If news companies are going to extend their pivotal news speedily, they should apply simple words for everyone. It is clear that simple and short contexts for spreading news to anywhere without images have colossal merits for people such as rapid understanding.
To conclude, I firmly uphold the idea that transferring data by photos is a suitable and logical way to spread information. Quick transferring can be of the merits of using images and words used in news can transfer data easily for everyone. It is predicted that the use of images in news will have been bombed by new decades.

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key points are covered. grammatical errors can be found specially regarding passive form. cohesion seems ok
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No one casts doubt on influential role of broadcasting multi-media new. I aver that having such competitive advantage over mere written reports have propelled many news agencies to exploit photos and films so as to maximize the efficacy of their...

No one casts doubt on influential role of broadcasting multi-media new. I aver that having such competitive advantage over mere written reports have propelled many news agencies to exploit photos and films so as to maximize the efficacy of their TV productions, even though words are still playing their complementary role.

Once radio and newspapers were the only sources to be kept abreast of the latest information, today it is in everyone’s interest to pursue the news through multimedia means. That is to say, as though words are not enough per se to make a report reliable, people tend to follow the news that is accompanied with some photos or films. It signals the effectiveness of such media in the press industry, which is believed to be on account of their higher level of trustworthiness. Having seen the relative photos of armed fighters or documentary movies of the battle field, all captured by a witness, for instance, would make even the most pessimistic audience convinced to put their trust on the report provided the press. The awareness of such utility has gone so far that the press agencies are putting the efficiency of visual media into practice by “No Comment” reports. And it is expected that without orienting the audience by the words, they take their own perception of the provided pictures.

Another contributing factor in favor of written reports accompanied by pictures is involvement of more biological senses of our five ones. To clarify, it is proved that brain functionality needs to factor in many inextricably interwoven measures in order to come to a conclusion that a sensed thing is trustworthy. To put the issue into perspective, confirming the perception of hearing faculty by visual faculty, for example, widens the odds of believing on the heard piece of information. Perhaps, that is why the growing number of newspapers are availing themselves with virtual reality technologies, by which turn their written reports into visual moving ones, as if the reader is currently on the scene, thereby making it more trustworthy by adding a sense of reality to the words.

To wrap it up briefly, although the old-fashioned news media have not been rendered completely obsolete as yet, I believe that informative pictures are far superior to the mere printed news, as it is simply demonstrable through growing public tendency toward the press that are broadcasted with some pertinent photos or movies.

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Ideas are arranged adeptly with ease. the writer's diction is accurate along with sufficient flexibility. the response is strong. Bravo
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In modern society, print media as well as television usually includes pictured news informing people. Some people believe that these visuals are often more powerful than blind news. There are cognet argument on both sides, which will be discussed...

In modern society, print media as well as television usually includes pictured news informing people. Some people believe that these visuals are often more powerful than blind news. There are cognet argument on both sides, which will be discussed in detail, folliwed by my own perspective on the matter.
To begin with, the news that accompained by pictures help readers as a popular media to imagin the occasion of event or stories more better, in order to understand it. Thus pictures are very important to express the context. Accordingly, visuals fix the news in brain, in other words, they have a long_lasting impact on news readers. They can be easily memorize as pictures contain shapes and colors. A case in point is that commercial advertisement tend to images rather than words. Furthermore, this is a beneficial way to catch the eyes of people, especially the young generation. For inctance, photos of sports event thrills the audeince, especially people who play that sport in real-life.
Looking from another perpective, the importance of words is undeniable. Since it is the actually story that keeps the readers intrested till the end. Besides, it is more likely that reader draw false conclusion and be misinfomed without words. Consequently, news should not include photos only. Even words have a significant role in beetween and cannot be apart from the news.
In conclusion, words and pictures have the same importance when publishing news. Admittedly, I believe that pictures can explain such things where words cannot be convincing.

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The recent years have witnessed ever-increasing number of pictures which has been accompanied by news stories on the media. While words play a crucial role in transferring information, I would contend that these pictures can have more profound...

The recent years have witnessed ever-increasing number of pictures which has been accompanied by news stories on the media. While words play a crucial role in transferring information, I would contend that these pictures can have more profound impact on individuals. Three principal justifications are intended to be discussed in this essay.
First of all, the most compelling factor which has made pictures more effective than words is the influential role of them in transferring individuals’ feelings and moral ethics. In other words, as most of feelings and emotions are impossible to be conveyed by words, journalists are willing to apply images to depict people’s emotions. Consider 200,000 dollars as a donation which was collected in 2015 when a picture with a hundred corps of wales was showed in a beach in the United States.
In addition, pictures can significantly contribute to grabbing people’s attention and keep them motivated to follow certain news. It has become norm among journalists to entail relevant images to their suburban or boring news stories in order to persuade people to read or follow their news. A cursory examination to a great deal of pictures in newspapers has reinforced this claim.
Finally, if conveying news without any personal take on a specific fact is required, journalists will be willing to involve relevant pictures to their articles. That is to say, everyone is able to interpret a picture relative to his own level of information.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that despite importance of words in news stories, I personally believe that pictures have more profound impact due to its ability to convey emotions and facts as well as its effect on encouraging people to follow news.

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avoid repetition and attempt a wider range of lexical. main parts of the task have been covered, though some ideas require more development. for example, the fourth paragraph
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Since every second the world observes array of new socio - economic or political occasions, no one can eliminate the need of mass media for covering the mentioned happenings. Daily Circulated papers generally are being shown by taking help of...

Since every second the world observes array of new socio - economic or political occasions, no one can eliminate the need of mass media for covering the mentioned happenings. Daily Circulated papers generally are being shown by taking help of photos or drawings which some believe can create a huge impact on the followers’ recognition. Whether this subject has a beneficiary role or helps the readers to understand clearly is the current focus of public debate. I think a blank page -without any image would be make the story dull or uninteresting.
Thanks to the digital technology, taking photos and making use of them is various aspects has become an essential part of twenty –first century citizens. Carried surveys reveal the positive role of pictures in different areas such as schoolbooks, brochures, pamphlets or catalogues on the quality of individual`s acquisition of given information. News also is not an exception relating this concept. According to some data people are more enthusiastic to learn about the incidents which are clarified by using taken photos. The influence of visualization escalates by looking at pictures more and more.
As the second reason, it is better to talk about some sorts of news which cannot be expressed just by simple words. In other words, some health articles, for instance, how to use an oxygen mask or to measure a fever in a sick person undoubtedly needs more elaboration that without snaps managing to grasp the instruction would be futile. The high rate of misusing these devices amount the walks of life who do not know how to use the gadgets is a crystal clear need for the presence of photos.
While attaching photos to the news has a distinct advantage or not is one of the hot topics of the contemporary ear. By weighing all the justifications, the great effects of this action proves the concept to some extent that finding a page without using images is somehow impossible. The low rate of eagerness for reading these pages are a valid proof to use the pictures.

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a good range of vocabulary. there are
problems with coherence and accuracy in some parts. some rationales need more support
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