IELTS Cambridge 11 - Test2 - Academic Writing - Task2

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

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As if a large scale recycling was not enough of a problem on its own, it turns out that now governments have to deal with it at household level. In this essay, implementing laws to augment recycling is advocated despite a tiny flaw.

Putting these laws to action would be a tough push. People just throw away all of their recyclable materials since it is easier for them to do so. Survey of 1000 households in England shows that a considerable number of people (about 60% of the participants) still vacillate or find it laborious to recycle despite environmental benefits.

However, mandatory recycling protects the environment in a fantastically balanced approach. As trees are relentlessly cut down and destroyed, the recycled paper produced from trees is being utilized continuously, minimizing deforestation and felling. With the recycled paper being a good example, other natural resources are also reusable in this very way.

Furthermore, more recyclable materials are produced as a result of these laws, thus workers are required to collect and process them. This means that job opportunities are created within a community or those having part-time jobs get expanded to full-time positions. In return, the entire economy benefits from this. For example, in Iran there are many scavengers who make a living by searching through refuse and garbage bins to find recyclable objects such as bottles and cans.

On the whole, I aver that laws are required to add to the extent at which waste from our houses is recycled. After all, encouraging and developing the act of recycling is just like protecting ourselves and our beloved planet.

شرکت‌کننده محترم،
تا ساعت 17 روز یکشنبه 1396/9/19 فرصت دارید، برای این موضوع رایتینگ‌های خود را نوشته و به صورت کامنت، در زیر پست، ارسال نمایید. تمامی رایتینگ‌ها توسط ممتحنین بیان برتر ارزیابی شده و به آنها نمره داده خواهد شد.

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thanks a lot dear ostad

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با سلام
به نظر من نمونه رایتینگی که گذاشتید،داره از خوبی های بازیافت زباله صحبت میکنه در صورتی که سوال گفته چقدر موافقید که برای وادار کردن مردم به بازیافت، اعمال قانون نیازه. شما به سوال پاسخ ندادید

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although esoteric to you, the second sentence of the first paragraph clearly answers the question.

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A group of people believes that learning a foreign language is necessary when someone wants to have a trip or work in boarders. Others believe that there are other reasons that make learning another language necessarily. While there are...

A group of people believes that learning a foreign language is necessary when someone wants to have a trip or work in boarders. Others believe that there are other reasons that make learning another language necessarily. While there are persuasive argument in favor of working or traveling to foreign countries are the only reasons for learning another language,I would agree that there are much more reasons for learning foreign language.
Nowadays by expanding the technology and internet, people can be in touch with each other easily and rapidly. In this regard different cultures connect to each other,so having a common language is inevitable. Chatting, discussing about different subjects needs to a certain language, this one is absolutely accounts a foreign for many of people in around the world.
Developing business and work as import, export or mentoring foreign employers is also another good reason to learn and use foreign language. According to the international laws,the companies should fill their checklist in specific languages and deliver it to customs in boarders. Plus,knowing a foreign language is so helpful in meetings and conferences to negotiate with others from another countries.
From scientific perspective, the reference books and international accepted lectures are written or translated in certain languages.
In conclusion,both working and traveling to foreign countries can be good reasons under some special circumstances, but I generally believe that developing business,communications and transferring culture among countries and being updated in learning new sciences are important reasons,too.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of...

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Undoubtedly, recycling home waste is highly economical whether through saving primary resources or helping family to manage their budgets as it eliminate higher expenditure in purchasing new material. Hence it is imperative to encourage family to pay more attention regarding to recycling used materials in different ways. However it seems insufficient home waste is recycled nowadays.
Certainly, there are various methods to stimulate people to separate their waste which are recyclable. Apart from, personal motivations trigger citizens to classify their garbage, the necessity of inclusive motivational program is highly imperious. When individuals underestimate the value of recycling, consequently they are bound to lose the healthy environment owing to the extraordinary need of resources. For instance there are myriad of degradable waste materials such as kitchen daily waste and residual food as well as numerous glassware or other type of rubbish which cannot be decomposed in nature. So it is expected to raise person’s awareness to recognize what kinds of their utilized materials can be recycled either through educational TV program or municipalities motivational advertisement. Through this inspirational plans people become far better motivated to conserve their environment through thinking wisely regarding to recycling. Needless to say that, how crucial it is to appreciate the concept of recycling in the currents decades we live.
There is another stricter perspective which emphasis legal enforcement in order to force people to consider recycling as their duty. Although in some cases enforcing legal option accelerates the trend of functioning, not necessarily means that for this specific category it will come true. On the contrary, it may induce individuals to circumvent the rule as they used to disobey driving rules in roads which they believe that those rules are highly vital to save their life. Instead of this kind of obligation, government can instill further motivations to enlighten people how necessary it is to pursue beneficial recycling program. Social media and TV training program can substantially trigger citizens to do their best towards collecting effectively their total waste and learn how waste can be recycled, particularly being aware of recycling worthwhile upsides make people enthusiastically involved in this beneficial trend . Moreover government can allocate additive incentive for individuals or organizations who are highly determined to follow this environmentally friendly program. So as to acquire these prize, people are vigilant enough to pay more attention about the way they can efficiently recycle the specific waste. Even they encourage their children to be involved more. So this trend has contributed to glorious achievement leading them safer environment as well as less consumption of natural resources.
All in all, due to the pivotal role recycling plays in decreasing our natural treasure and conserving environment it is greatly recommended that we appreciate more the reusing of the enormous materials and other derivatives utilized daily. To way of my thinking it is cynical that we devise/ponder legal obligation truly oblige people to recycle their waste, whereas motivational and stimulation schemes can further trigger general public to pursue recycling effectively. As a result not only do people enjoy from its considerable merits but also they rescue their world from excessive consumption they have afflicted.

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apart from minor slips, information and ideas are arranged skillfully. key points are covered. you should try to address the task using fewer words, on this occasion your essay deserves above 7 band score

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Nowadays,with fast growing new communication methods and also globalization,learning a second language is inevitable emergance for a huge number of individuals.Somones assert that linguistic knowledge specially about languages is...

Nowadays,with fast growing new communication methods and also globalization,learning a second language is inevitable emergance for a huge number of individuals.Somones assert that linguistic knowledge specially about languages is essential merely for traveling or employing in that destination.In fact,there are diverse reasons for acquiring a foreign language.
First and most of them,having experience of instruction a second language open different and bright horizons.It means,people who are familiar with another language,indeed they new culture,and can accept easily differentiations between nations.As a result,their relationships boost.On the other hand,these open _mind individuals are considered as a prospectpoint for transferring sensible thoughts and beliefs to their own society.That is to say,international linguistic skills can bridge gaps between nations throughout the world.

Another higher reason is that in enhancing business markets,international trade relations seem asa significant obstacle for many companies.Therefore,for handling this challenge businesses should choose those workforces who knows about an international language.It holds true in diplomatic relations and academic communities as well.Conclusively,learning a foreign language especially international one spawns to improve interaction in different features between unlike communities.

To sum up,understanding other languages would make huge changes in the people's life not only their career growths but also in their values.In addition,it could have impressive impact towards the economic future of countries.For instance,Malaysia where is known as a famous touristic destination,has implemented regulations regarding learning English at it's schools as a second language,and due to this successful policy country could increase its economics in various aspects. a

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رایتینگ از لحاظ چارچوب و سطح لغات بسیار خوب است. هرچند اشکالات گرامری و لغتی Minor وجود دارد. برای بالا بردن نمره، بهتر است روی رنج گرامری خود کار کنید. همچنین بهتر است در انتهای مقدمه، نکته جدیدی گفته نشود (آوردن مثال در نتیجه گیری مناسب نیست!)....

رایتینگ از لحاظ چارچوب و سطح لغات بسیار خوب است. هرچند اشکالات گرامری و لغتی Minor وجود دارد. برای بالا بردن نمره، بهتر است روی رنج گرامری خود کار کنید. همچنین بهتر است در انتهای مقدمه، نکته جدیدی گفته نشود (آوردن مثال در نتیجه گیری مناسب نیست!). نمره شما در این تسک 6

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سلام اول از همه از زحماتتون تشکر میکنم..و یک پیشنهاد هم دارم ....اگر تمرین رایتینگ برای تسک یک هم انجام بشه عالی میشه

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سپاس بی کران از زحمات شما..دیشب تا ۱۲ منتظر شدم و رایتینگم جزو اخرین رایتینگ هایی بود که تصحیح شد.. تشویق شدم برای تلاش بیشتر و همراهی شما عزیزان

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با سپاس از زحمات شما ،
رایتینگ من جزء رایتینگ ها هست ولی تصحیح نشده.

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it's done

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سلام وقت بخیر ایا رایتینگهای ارسالی تصحیح نمیشن دیگه؟

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‏that is an awsome sample
‏Fluent and coherent

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یه بار من در آزمون آزمایشی موسسه شما نوشتم: In this essay... و جالبه که از من نمره کسر شد بخاطر اینکه باصطلاح کلیشه‌اییه.من نفهمیدم اینکار درسته یا نه.استاد خودشون اینطوری مینویسن بعد اونجوری تصحیح میکنن؟

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Statements marked as cliché did not reduce your mark, the experience you are talking about was an attempt to trigger your creativity

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با سلام و عرض ادب
ابتدا از زحمات شما و سرویس بینظیری که برای تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ راه اندازی کردید سپاسگزارم. متوجه هستم که وقتی یک سرویس رایگان دریافت میکنم چندان معمول نیست که بخوام از کیفیتش انتقاد کنم اما اجازه بدید نکاتی رو در مورد نمونه...

با سلام و عرض ادب
ابتدا از زحمات شما و سرویس بینظیری که برای تصحیح رایگان رایتینگ راه اندازی کردید سپاسگزارم. متوجه هستم که وقتی یک سرویس رایگان دریافت میکنم چندان معمول نیست که بخوام از کیفیتش انتقاد کنم اما اجازه بدید نکاتی رو در مورد نمونه تصحیح شده رایتینگ عرض کنم. اول اینکه شیوه پرداختن به این رایتینگ تا حد زیادی با آموزه‌هایی که از اساتید خود موسسه دریافت کردم متفاوته. کافیه این نمونه رو با توضیحات دقیق هفته قبل استاد حسینی مقایسه کنیم. یا این نوشته نمونه امروز نمره بسیار پایینتری نسبت به نمونه قبلی میگیره یا استاد حسینی در تشریح استراتژی نوشتن رایتینگ اشتباه میکنند که البته بنده بعید میدونم. درضمن برام عجیبه که در این رایتینگ عنوان میشه که قرار نیست نمره چندان بالایی بگیرید و از آموزش کامل و صحیح صرفنظر میشه! متاسفانه استدلالهای بکاررفته در متن هم بسیار ضعیف و در بسیاری موارد نامربوط به موضوع و پرسش مطرح شده هستند. با این وصف، بهتره که از اساتید باتجربه‌تر برای ارائه نمونه استفاده بشه یا حداقل اساتیدی بکارگرفته بشن که آموزشهاشون با هم در تناقض نباشه. متاسفم که مجبور به ذکر این موارد شدم اما هدفم فقط بهبود کیفیت هست. باز هم از کار خوبتون سپاسگزارم.

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Surely there are many ways to address a writing task, and this is just one of them.

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باسلام. استاد من ( ابراهيم تحصني) فرموده بودن امار ندين. تو سوال هم گفته از دانش و تجربيات خودتون بگين. از ايران ممكنه ما خبر داشته باشيم ولي قطعا از انگلستان و سوروي كه در موردش نوشته شده خبر نداريم. من گيج شدم، دقيقا نفهميدم نويسنده موافقه يا...

باسلام. استاد من ( ابراهيم تحصني) فرموده بودن امار ندين. تو سوال هم گفته از دانش و تجربيات خودتون بگين. از ايران ممكنه ما خبر داشته باشيم ولي قطعا از انگلستان و سوروي كه در موردش نوشته شده خبر نداريم. من گيج شدم، دقيقا نفهميدم نويسنده موافقه يا مخالف!!!!

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Regarding your first question, it is highly likely that a writer has a lot of information about other countries. There is no limitation as long as the writer is able to support his point and provide a fully developed answer. And for your second...

Regarding your first question, it is highly likely that a writer has a lot of information about other countries. There is no limitation as long as the writer is able to support his point and provide a fully developed answer. And for your second question, the writer agrees with using laws.

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سوال دیگه ای که برای من پیش اومده ارتباط با مثال اول و رفرنس اون هست. تاپیک پاراگراف ۱ میگه خیلی کارامد نیست این قوانین مثلا تحقیقی که در فلان جا به عمل اومده نشون داده که مردم هنوز مردد هستن این کار رو بکنن، با توجه به منافعی که برای محیط زیست...

سوال دیگه ای که برای من پیش اومده ارتباط با مثال اول و رفرنس اون هست. تاپیک پاراگراف ۱ میگه خیلی کارامد نیست این قوانین مثلا تحقیقی که در فلان جا به عمل اومده نشون داده که مردم هنوز مردد هستن این کار رو بکنن، با توجه به منافعی که برای محیط زیست داره! خب این مثال چه ارتباطی با قانون داره! آیا پیش فرض بر ان است که در اون کشور این عمل به صورت قانون در امده و با این وجود مردم هنوز مردد هستند!

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The topic sentence never states this is not efficient, “tough push” means something which is kind of difficult to do

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با عرض سلام و ارادت بیکران..... این نمونه رایتینگ ارایه شده من رو خیلی خیلی گیج کرده در ارتباط با نوع نگرشش به موضوع! ما همیشه دچار این وسواس هستیم که اصل مطلب را با محدود کننده هاش در قالب سوال مطرح شده بفهمیم و پاسخ بدیم، ولی متاسفانه علی رقم...

با عرض سلام و ارادت بیکران..... این نمونه رایتینگ ارایه شده من رو خیلی خیلی گیج کرده در ارتباط با نوع نگرشش به موضوع! ما همیشه دچار این وسواس هستیم که اصل مطلب را با محدود کننده هاش در قالب سوال مطرح شده بفهمیم و پاسخ بدیم، ولی متاسفانه علی رقم نگارش بسیار جذاب و قوی این نمونه انچه که من از این انشا میگیرم توضیح مزایای موضوع بازیافت هست! و کمتر ارتباطی بین احتمال موفقیت در جمع اوری زباله از طریق قانون گذاری دیده میشه! در صورت امکان لطف بفرمایید و چرایی این پاسخ به سوال رو بررسی کنید.
سوال مشخصا در مورد این بوده که قانون جمع اوری زباله باید برای منازل به اجرا در بیاد! و این تنها راه افزایش و گسترش صنعت بازیافته! اینکه چرا ما در پاسخ باید به مزایای محیط زیستی و یا شغل آفرینی این صنعت بپردازیم برای من اصلا قابل درک نیست! خواهش میکنم در این ضمینه بنده رو راهنمایی کنید. ممنون

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you are overanalyzing the body paragraphs and trying to get the answer from them, while the thesis statement in the introductory paragraph has already given you the answer. The body paragraphs are there to support the thesis and benefits ensuing...

you are overanalyzing the body paragraphs and trying to get the answer from them, while the thesis statement in the introductory paragraph has already given you the answer. The body paragraphs are there to support the thesis and benefits ensuing from the act of implementing laws.

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با سلام و تشکرفراوان -
ببخشید من ی چیزو متوجه نشدم - سوال اینه که مقدار کافی زباله خانه ها بازیافت نمیشه برا افزایش آن وضع قانون توسط دولت تنها راهه ؟ - موافقید یا مخالف -
پاراگراف 1و2و3 عالیست ولی من نمیفهمم پاراگراف 4 رو - چون مزیت بازیافت که...

با سلام و تشکرفراوان -
ببخشید من ی چیزو متوجه نشدم - سوال اینه که مقدار کافی زباله خانه ها بازیافت نمیشه برا افزایش آن وضع قانون توسط دولت تنها راهه ؟ - موافقید یا مخالف -
پاراگراف 1و2و3 عالیست ولی من نمیفهمم پاراگراف 4 رو - چون مزیت بازیافت که تولید مواد دیگه و درنتیجه اشتغال و تغییر پوزیشن کار موقت به دائمه به نظرم خارج موضوعه -
ممنون میشم راهنماییم فرمایید
سوال این بوده که مقدار زباله بازیافت شده خانه ها کافی نیست - مردم میگویند که برا افزایش بازیافت قوانین لازمه وضع بشه -

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If you take a look at the topic sentence of this paragraph, it says “more recyclable materials are produced as a result of these laws … “and then continues to focus on one of its many benefits, which is more jobs.

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استاد ارشادی شما با کلمات جادو کردید واقعا شما معرکه هستید . بدون شک شما بی نظیر هستید. تشکر ویژه میکنم بابت زحمات جنابعالی?

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The recent decades have seen a ten-fold increase in amount of waste produced most of which are not biodegradable. If things go on without control, it bound to be no place for us to live in the near future. Making recycling a legal requirement,...

The recent decades have seen a ten-fold increase in amount of waste produced most of which are not biodegradable. If things go on without control, it bound to be no place for us to live in the near future. Making recycling a legal requirement, however, seems not to be the only way to increase the home waste recycling and could be much more practical ways.

On the one hand, putting tough laws is a contributing factor in the recycling process. Deforestations, when more recyclable materials are produced as a result of these laws, decreased significantly. Statistics have shown that a various array of households (almost more than half) just throw away all of their recyclable items since it is easier for them to do so. Therefore, laws are necessary for some individuals careless about their environment.

On the other hand, people should be educated to increase their environmental awareness. Being perfectly informed, people would willingly take measures. Numerous information and methods should be taught in schools and through the media alike. The Sweden is a good example of a country that recycles all their domestic wastes by boosting its citizen’s awareness.

In addition, the problem is due to the poor efforts we made at recycling. Incentive should be given by the government to encourage people to reduce the use of disposable items and recycle as much as possible. These motivations could range from a discount in their electricity or water bills to a subsidy for their favorite things.

In conclusion, I believe that enforcing laws is not the only way to increase recycling for government. Boosting society awareness and giving financial motivation are contributing factors in the society to persuade people to collaborate more.

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chief parts of the task are covered. paragraphing is good . there are some minor errors in terms of grammar for the most part in the introductory paragraph without ruining comprehension
score :6.5

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واقعا چه جوري ميشه مثل رايتينگ نمونه نوشت
بي نظيره

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Waste recycling and people᾿s participation are of the essence to protect the environment for future generations. So, when the question arises whether a government should make it a legal obligation, people have a variety opinions. This essay...

Waste recycling and people᾿s participation are of the essence to protect the environment for future generations. So, when the question arises whether a government should make it a legal obligation, people have a variety opinions. This essay agrees whit the aforementioned perspective since it takes crucial points into account.
There are many evidence in favor of the idea that government should pose laws and hefty fines on waste recycling. To begin with, recycling is said to be way for preserving environment. That is to say, some household garbage contains detrimental ingredients which are able to cause irreparable damage to the environment. The report speak of cause irreparable damage to the environment. The report speak of extensive environmental degradation caused by pollution growth; thus, the adoption of environmentally-friendly equipment can potentially reduce waste and protect endangered species.
In addition, recycling household rubbishes lead to reuse valuable materials. If people divide the biodegradable and non- biodegradable wastages while dumping them in bins, it is bound that they would use for reproducing some materials such as paper. Unfortunately, environment degradation has been recognized as one of the main challenges that people have to overcome it. As a result, recycling not only is able to protect environment but also take a big leap to saving natural resources.
Finally, it is true that people have tendency to ignore some rules in their life. There are different things such cross the street when they should stop, or do not using belt when driving unless the law compel them to obey rules. Therefore, It is obvious if government make the recycling compulsory by imposing laws, people would participate more that past.
In conclusion, I completely agree government should impose severely laws in order to protecting environment and reproduce prices materials the leading to accelerate growth of the country its.

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a poor use of cohesive devices and many grammatical errors. an acceptable range of lexical compared with other criteria
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Increasing the number of citizens specially in large cities, have rised environmentalists' worried as the amount of waste and effluent has beed produced by people is likely to endanger the aquatic organizms and natural resources in recent years....

Increasing the number of citizens specially in large cities, have rised environmentalists' worried as the amount of waste and effluent has beed produced by people is likely to endanger the aquatic organizms and natural resources in recent years. Thus when the question arise whether some drastic actions should be taken by the government to find a solution on this issue, scientists seem to have devided opinion.

Issues, is said to be have an only solution and the key is belonging to government. authorities when a problem emerge, have usually potential abilities to prevent prevalence. Therby legislating some rules and laws on this issue and trating more harshly to wrongdoers in order to reduce the amount citizen-produce wastes, is bound to be effective.

It is possible that, this kind of action by governments could be in any way detrimental to society? This is an unusual question but there is some hidden pitfalls. There are many rational reasons prove that, government should allocate their energy on public educations rather than passing strict rules. It is likely that, the society when children are prepared for social-living and social norms alike as well, would have helthier and efficient future.

Experiences proved that people reactd better on encouraging than punishment. juvenile, in particular, are under the influence of authorities' action. most of them seems to react opposingly to some punishment-oriented rules legislation. So there should not to be any expectations by related scientists and scychologists to companionship of majority of people.

Therefore, it seems that passing laws is a must, but promote public education is more efficient; However conducting campaigns by environmentalists and allocate budget on encouraging the most environmentally-friendly family could be effective in any way.

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The issue of non-recycled domestic waste has become a serious challenge all around the world in recent decades. It, therefore, seems that just governments can address this problem if adopting some policies bringing about the rise in recycling.

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The issue of non-recycled domestic waste has become a serious challenge all around the world in recent decades. It, therefore, seems that just governments can address this problem if adopting some policies bringing about the rise in recycling.

First of all, states usually enjoy sufficient potential in order to teach waste sorting to citizens. Done struggles in developed countries have proved effectiveness of education on increasing the amount of recycled materials, for individuals assimilate to separate garbage into divided elements so as to facilitate recycling process. As a result, governments is not highly likely to have great trouble when collecting unwanted materials in cities.

Furthermore, states can allocate more budget to recycling because having direct access to wealth of country. Instead of huge unnecessary spending on various subjects, priority can be given to constructing factories and organizations related to recycling. Consequently, recycling can have substantial contribution to reducing environmental contamination created by landfill and dumping.

Finally, governments demand specialized workforce, who may be educated at universities in all the country to run recycling companies. If officials in authority apply top management strategies, not only will the issue of waste be eradicated but also the unemployment rate will decrease.

To conclude, it seems that governments play a significant role in the increase in recycling. Hence they can take positive steps to raise awareness of people and give particular attention to recycling, leading to the improvement in living standards and conserving the environment.

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With the advent of technology, recycling industry has turned into a profitable realm of economy. It is argued that the participation rate of people to develop it as an ultimate goal is inadequate and cannot be spontaneously increased. I agree...

With the advent of technology, recycling industry has turned into a profitable realm of economy. It is argued that the participation rate of people to develop it as an ultimate goal is inadequate and cannot be spontaneously increased. I agree that the most reliable form of people’s persuasiveness to get involved in this project is through legislation and I will explain why.

On the one hand, despite all informative measures, people have not been induced to do their share because in my opinion, the necessity and merits features of recycling is more complicated to be understood by ordinary people. When citizens do not have a comprehensive perception of this scheme, they underestimate their active roles to take even tiny steps such as using several rubbish bins to separate waste at their homes. Furthermore, domestic refuse segregation is a time-consuming task and for many families who are reluctant to be responsible society members is not a preferred job to do.

On the other hand, throwaway society should be managed by stringent rules and could not be left on its own members’ desires. On the societal level, It was shown that people do not bother themselves due to environmental or economic grounds of where they inhabit, however, from a political perspective converting waste to reusable objects is what can preserve countries’ energy resources as well as raw materials; as a result what government should do is taking steps to force dwellers to follow some predetermined regulations which might lead to them participating within this plan more conscientiously. People have to appreciate that they will penalize at least by fining if they act negligently against their duty. Experience shows that people in many cases abide by a law due to the fear of punishment or fine. For example, after installing cameras at highways the rate of speeding has significantly decreased. In essence, video surveillance sends a message to lawbreakers that if they violate the traffic rules they run the risk of being punished. I believe that we all learn from conditioning. If we need, therefore, to see eagerly cooperation of citizens in this project, we should trigger the first steps by imposing stricter supervision and then we would be witness of flourishing recycling approach in the years ahead.

In conclusion, although household waste segregation might seem a personal choice which can be reinforced by advertising or other soft informative options, I personally feel that people do not spend their time and energy on it where governments are too lenient to foster the aforementioned approach in the absence of proper laws.

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While people used to be careful and conservative about waste from their homes, the recent decades have witnessed a growth in the amount of produced garbage with no attempt to recycle them. Imposing some governmental rules, however, seems not to...

While people used to be careful and conservative about waste from their homes, the recent decades have witnessed a growth in the amount of produced garbage with no attempt to recycle them. Imposing some governmental rules, however, seems not to be effective to rise the amount of recycled trashes.
Making governmental laws about recycling waste might increase the recycling among people, but it is not likely to be practical in long-terms. Instead, making recycling waste as a culture can be a sustainable solution to this ongoing issue, and it can be done in schools by dedicating a part of students’ timetable to this subject. For example, their schedule should be included lessons about conserving environment and negative consequences of producing waste and ignoring recycling practices.
Moreover, warning people about the detrimental outcomes of overlooking recycling can somehow address this problem. This can be done by holding some free of charge scientific seminars to inform people. Governments, in addition, can take the advantages of the mass media and famous people, being role-model for a vast majority of young generation, to spread the culture of not only producing less waste, but also recycling the produced waste.
Furthermore, encouraging people and offering good incentives for individuals would take an important role to deal with this concern. Governments can announce that if people produce less waste, states will present a vast range of social facilities for them with a remarkable amount of discount, for instance, paying one fifth of real price of tickets of public transportation could be one of the offers.
On balance, I would strongly say that legislating laws for forcing people to recycle their waste are not bound to be feasible, and there can be found other more effective solutions to address this problem.

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Recent years have seen a growing in the amount of recycling objects and tools used by households ranging from appliances to food packages. Although some people tend to take the recycling of their waste of the importance, I strongly believe that...

Recent years have seen a growing in the amount of recycling objects and tools used by households ranging from appliances to food packages. Although some people tend to take the recycling of their waste of the importance, I strongly believe that governments are liable for introducing strict laws on waste recycling.
There are some reasons regarding the necessity of law enforcement on this issue. To begin with, many families are reluctant about their natural environment and the detrimental effects of non-degradable materials on nature including plastics which are also recyclable. Many people in Tehran, for example, put their trash recyclable and non-recyclable alike in one garbage bag. Therefore, authorities should take action to not only teach but also encourage households to separate their waste for recycling. This could happen if it is turns to a strong law.
Additionally, a legal approach to this problem enforces people to obey and any transgression may lead to penalty. Citizens disobeying the law and do not recycle the garbage tend to get punished and pay fines. Thus, more people are likely to take action to increase the rate of recycling. Fasten seat belt in cars is one example that after becoming a compulsory rule in Iran, most of the citizens accepted and obeyed.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that the governments should set rules on recycling domestic waste to oblige nations to contribute to reusing non-degradable materials so as to conserve our environment.

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Rubbish is well known as black gold; Therefore it is of the essence to recycle waste by the aim of reuse the vast amount of waste .Although when it comes to legislating a law for recycling people have divided opinions ,it seems that law could be a...

Rubbish is well known as black gold; Therefore it is of the essence to recycle waste by the aim of reuse the vast amount of waste .Although when it comes to legislating a law for recycling people have divided opinions ,it seems that law could be a contributing factor to enhance the capacity of recycling.

It is indisputable fact that law means compulsory. In terms of psychology, when forced to do something, people rebel against it. The figures show people participate in voluntary deeds rather than compulsory ones. Optional activities, furthermore, enhance people commitment to fulfill the achievement. For instance, people are bound to create groups to boost individuals’ awareness leading to far more effort to recycle or even a shift away from discard waste toward recycling vast amount of waste.
Nonetheless, legislating rules will bring significant plus point for improve recycling. Some determents such as notification and fine ensure authorities that people observe the law. Despite continuing by force, this eco-friendly trend is likely to be an integral part of culture in years ahead; consequently the long lasting environmentally friendly tendency will entwine with our culture which worth any kind of enforcements. Unfasten seat belt, for example, was a major reason for driver’s death in Iran, after enforcing a rule, a dramatic diminish was reported due to obey the rules of fasten seat belt and after a while it embedded in Iranian driving culture.
Equally importantly, though, imposing a law accelerate inform people from all kind of walks. People, media, when government enforce a rule about recycling, would talk about the ways of recycling and find a state of the art method to facilitate it and enhance its productivity as well. Therefore it is likely to become citizen’s obligation that all people even isolated one have to accomplish that. A cursory examination of the amount of recycling, when it was introduced in Iranian media reinforces this belief that law could be a dependable supporter for enhance recycling.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that any legislation associated with recycling play pivotal role to improve the capacity of recycling.

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statements are almost well organized and to the point. unfortunately there occasional grammatical errors. main aspects of the task are covered.
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Accounts significantly differ when it comes to the role of laws to make people recycle more of their waste. Some people turn it down by arguing that recycling should be a voluntary act rather a force by law, whereas some others fanatically...

Accounts significantly differ when it comes to the role of laws to make people recycle more of their waste. Some people turn it down by arguing that recycling should be a voluntary act rather a force by law, whereas some others fanatically advocate it as they assume that law can make a regular and assured process in recycling. However, as far as my idea in concerned, I agree with the latter group.
Experiences have shown that ordinary majority of people are not interested to make themselves do works in a specific method or rule, that is why laws are legislated to train and force people to do them and any disobedience of them has legal consequences. Recycling home waste due to its extra tasks such as separating dry rubbishes and gathering them as paper, glass and plastic, takes time and needs additional space to stack, so generally is not done by people except those who are interested in environmental protection. Here is the situation that undoubtedly a confirmed law about recycling can have a public obligation and assignment.
Besides, in my opinion, dropping indissoluble waste in nature due to its miserable consequences is imperative to be managed by government as a law. Remarkably, they pollute the natural soil and underground waters, damage environment and natural organism. Therefore, governments have the responsibility to plan and determine the principles and limits to achieve the goal of leading people to cooperate in recycling. To exemplify, if a driver do not fasten his belt will be penalized because he possibly threatens several lives. Accordingly, releasing waste in nature which is threatens the earth and its habitat s life, must be considered seriously by lawmakers.
In conclusion, recycling as a law can guaranty our earth and next generation to be preserved from destructive pollution. Human, as a solitary existent which produces this hazardous waste, is responsible to control and prevent its harmful outcomes. Therefore, governments as a legislator sector should take effective steps to accompany their people in recycling.

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chief points of the task are addressed. there are few grammatical errors.
be careful about uncountable nouns like "rubbish" .
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Home recycling would be improved by government’s laws and obey the rules by people. Not only making laws for recycling in the society would be needed but also how performing them and probing them are the other factors. There is a proverb of...

Home recycling would be improved by government’s laws and obey the rules by people. Not only making laws for recycling in the society would be needed but also how performing them and probing them are the other factors. There is a proverb of Germany which tells that you can identify the society by their habit to collect their garbage and being in a clean waste. In this essay we try to indicate that recycling could be extended for people even if they live in society, or they manage it.
We can find more things to be in a list of waste which can be recycled, and most of them are found in homes and factories. Firstly, if people have enough information to change the way of consuming, they might change their keen mind to reorganize their type of waste and prevent themselves to produce unrecyclable garbage. The lack of data can be covered by the government. For instance, definition of wet waste and dry waste may cause people to pay more attention to their habit to make garbage. At second part, harmful garbage must not collect beside the wet waste or the dry waste, and they have to collect by governments recycling service. One of the important parts of harmful litters are batteries. Because it is built by dangerous heavy metal that is very harmful, and also it has long time life cycle to reform to. Though it seems that government have an important role to inform people and also it has especial equipped to recycle harmful waste.
After preparing of people to know which one of garbage is recyclable, the administrators should make rules to analysis the waste at starting point even if homes or industry sites. For example, giving some red and blue packets to collect wet garbage in a red and dry garbage in a blue and also yellow package for harmful garbage like electronic litter. Breaking the habit of collecting the garbage which produced in home or businesses environment might take more time. So, if the government want to change this habit quickly, they might establish many rules to pay a fine to whom did not obey the rule and also did not abandon their habit. If someone did not unaccustomed to new method of collecting garbage, they should be pay fine. When citizen know the peril of living in the middle of recyclable garbage and also know the benefits of their actions to the waste, they may encourage each other to help themselves to progress their lives feature.
In summary, having developed society may cause by many rules which can manage by government. The rules are obeyed by citizen and if people have enough information, help themselves to increase their lives quality.

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A large amount of different sort of wastes are being produced every day in our house without being noticed by many people. However, it is said that some must-have enactment can be a good solution. I wholeheartedly agree with this conception, as...

A large amount of different sort of wastes are being produced every day in our house without being noticed by many people. However, it is said that some must-have enactment can be a good solution. I wholeheartedly agree with this conception, as this is a significant issue to be considered by governments.

Firstly, pilling and collecting garbage and as behalf of them giving some subsidies to whom deliver their waste to authorities can be a useful law. Governments might well require individuals to stack their rubbish in bags and take some advantages by regarding the weight of those given packs. Variety of benefits can be dedicated like money, free amusing tickets for families, interest-free loan, and so on. These kind of activities can be publicized on the different media.

Most importantly, though, it will be a productive rule if separating dry and wet extravagances become obliged. When discarded materials are unmixed, they can be well reclaimed; as a result recycling would be amplified efficiently. Some definite containers would be given and people need to separate their wastages and put them to their corresponding place. Papers, metals, plastics, and food waste can be divided, for instance.

In conclusion, I believe that people in power should constitute some compulsory new rules on improving current recycling system, since many people just discard various substances that a considerable amount of them can be recycled in a good way. It will contribute to preserve the nature as well.

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Needless to say, recycling is highly needed in order to help reduce the environmental problems all around the world. The question here is, "whether has the government up to the job?; as such, they are bound to pass some rules, in this regard." In...

Needless to say, recycling is highly needed in order to help reduce the environmental problems all around the world. The question here is, "whether has the government up to the job?; as such, they are bound to pass some rules, in this regard." In the following essay, this question is brought up and discussed as well.

At first sight, most people have always long believed that we humans, certanily, would much rather need the system of punishments and rewards to do our daily duties such as recycling due to our intrinsic merit. That is, when having the feeling of frightening, people from all walks of life pay undivided attension to their roles in the community like numerous districts in my setting, Tehran. Like, if they just place the dry rubbish in the receptacle provided for each building, that apartment would, doubtless, exempt from punitive tax that they pay annually to municipality for collectin their garbage. But if they do not so, we do not have any related laws, nonetheless.

Personally I do believe that members of our society, partially, have not been blamed for this matter since our objects based on which we use day in day out are, unfortunately, unreusable, including- glasses, tissues, as well as plastics. To put it more simply, state officials must put pressure on the shoulder of both small and large budet industries so as to manufacture these types of materials receclable, for example, by imposing stiff fine.

Although legislating rules and getting citizens to do certain actions, the result can not be satisfactory. In other words, it should be noted that that statesmen and women should have forced media to run programs with regard to informing people about the essence of recycling precisely because discarded items are, somehow, black gold.

To put it in a nutshell, to me the greatest responsibility goes for the governmnet officials largely because of the fact that the possess adequate budget as well as power to make people as to recycling.

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the lexical resource is adequate and cohesion seems natural. there are few errors, removing these ridiculous errors particularly in the last paragraph will grant this essay band score 7

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Waste management is one of the most pressing issues in this modern epoch, which societies are struggling. Among various methods to deal with this challenge, recycling is regarded as an environment-friendly and economical solution. It seems,...

Waste management is one of the most pressing issues in this modern epoch, which societies are struggling. Among various methods to deal with this challenge, recycling is regarded as an environment-friendly and economical solution. It seems, however, reasonable to assume that so as to recycle most possible amount of household waste, governments should pass stringent laws to oblige people to cooperate more effectively.
The way householders treat their own rubbish, spans far beyond personal matters requiring legal actions to raise public awareness about this issue. Not only eco-friendly waste treatment and disposal services are crucial in terms of environmental concerns, but also they are contributing factors to the health of the human race; therefore, individuals are legally responsible. The legal way brings forth such attention and awareness among public mass that are probably infeasible through other alternative ways; naturally everyone is more prudent and informative about legal and illegal activities towards the waste separating, disposal and recycling activities.
There are, nevertheless, other solutions such as training session and advertisements to inspire people to participate in recycling project, which are not as much efficient and pragmatic as legal requirements. Many surveys conducted by research organizations show that as long as people look at recycling as a personal or optional choice, they are more likely to procrastinate or ignore it inasmuch as hectic lifestyle, laziness and even lack of knowledge about its essence. Thus, a strict law as the deterrent factor, enforcing families to separate household rubbish into different types, brings unprecedented full commitments and obligation which are key factors, guaranteeing the applicability of the recycling scheme.
In conclusion, enforcing law pertaining recycling is a reliable strategy that takes advantages of public members’ respect for the law to establish recycling trend among householders.

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a sufficient range of lexical with a moderate flexibility.some structures have been forced. key point are covered.
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The amount of recycled waste is a crucial matter for having a cleaner environment. Indeed, the higher the people and governments focus on recycling, the waste of reusable stuff would be decreased. But, the theory that governments should be in...

The amount of recycled waste is a crucial matter for having a cleaner environment. Indeed, the higher the people and governments focus on recycling, the waste of reusable stuff would be decreased. But, the theory that governments should be in charge of imposing people to recycle more of their wastes is a controversy which has not been settled yet. Nevertheless, all the citizens are supposed to be responsible about maintaining cleanliness and hygiene of their environment, it is strongly believed that legislating in order to enhance the amount of recycling will not result in any explicit progress towards this purpose.

First of all, people potentially tend to escape the situation where they are forced to do something. In many countries, not only do people consider the new laws as a new burden on their shoulders, but they also might not take the issue as serious as they did when it was not forced by the law. Lots of fruitless driving laws are vivid examples of the regulations to which people do not pay attention much.

Secondly, for any sort of law to be enacted, a clearly defined range of criteria is required and people should follow them precisely. As far as the measurement of the amount of wastes and recycled materials for each individual sounds to be an impractical procedure, there would be a little chance for the authorities to exactly find out whether someone has violated the recycling rules. Furthermore, people could never make sure that their recycling is in compliance with the laws or not, if they do not have a bright understanding of how the regulations have expected it to be.

All in all, having obligatory rules regarding the recycling issue, would not directly contribute in decreasing the amount of wastes, inasmuch as putting people under pressure along with the lack of transparent laws is not likely to provide societies with a more efficient recycling process.

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frequent error free sentences can be seen. be careful about prepositions , for example "responsible for" not about.
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These days the amount of household garbage has become a major problem in many countries. The amount of waste is swelling to dangerous levels as a result of the adoption of market-driven economic models. It is said that there should be legislation...

These days the amount of household garbage has become a major problem in many countries. The amount of waste is swelling to dangerous levels as a result of the adoption of market-driven economic models. It is said that there should be legislation to enforce people recycle their home waste.in my opinion, every citizen and the government should share the responsibility to improve this problem.
For one, everyone should be aware of theimportance of their role. For example,we as householders use too much stuff and throw everything away. Lots of the things we waste are useful.most of them can be used again , recycled. The government should educate individuals that recycling is necessary for the environment since the fewer natural resources is used. They should make people conscious of the significance of limited amounts of renewable resources.
Therefore the government should motivai people to sourt out their garbage into what can be recycled and what can't, by putting plenty of recycle bin in neighborhoods, also it is useful to allocate special charity recycle bin, as well . For example, people can recycle their clothes, toys, books, games and etc, bu putting them in charity bin.
In addition , the government should establish strict penalties for companies involed in home products which do not use biodegradable or recycled materials.
In conclusion, if individuals and the government take their responsibility toward organizing home waste this problem can be solved easily.

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the fourth paragraph is too short. try to develop your ideas. for example, in the second paragraph you could have stayed on one aspect instead of using wordy sentences to convey "the importance of people's awareness" .some minor errors can be...

the fourth paragraph is too short. try to develop your ideas. for example, in the second paragraph you could have stayed on one aspect instead of using wordy sentences to convey "the importance of people's awareness" .some minor errors can be seen.
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In the current world that the technology is progressing every day and consumption is increasing in families more and more, one of the most important issues in the last 20 years is recycling the wastes that are produced from homes. If the waste...

In the current world that the technology is progressing every day and consumption is increasing in families more and more, one of the most important issues in the last 20 years is recycling the wastes that are produced from homes. If the waste have not been separated in home before collecting by the government, the recycling process will be very hard and impossible in some cases. If these wastes aren’t recycled, they will have very terrible effects on nature in future, for example it will increase the disease and have many bad effects on the healthy condition of other creatures.
Many cultural activities have been done in these recent years to train the people to separate their waste in their home, for example put dry and wet garbage in different packets or improve the consumption culture to produce less waste at homes. Recycling the wastes by the government will be caused to have a healthier environment in the future, but unfortunately it is not done by all families correctly and carefully all times and it will have very bad effects on nature.
It seems that the best method to increase popular culture in the fastest way is making some laws by government to force people to separate the waste at home. For example, families should put different garbage types in different dedicated pockets that have been distributed by the government, and if a person doesn’t keep the law, some penalty should be paid by them to the government. At the first time, maybe these lows seems to be unacceptable by large number of peoples but finally it will be in favor of all of them.

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complex forms can be seen with some inaccuracies. do not generalize and use a wider range of cohesive devices.
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There is always doubt between people who claim that the government play more important role in compare with citizens in recycling issue. Some people believe that there aren’t enough wastages is recycled from homes and this problem will be solved...

There is always doubt between people who claim that the government play more important role in compare with citizens in recycling issue. Some people believe that there aren’t enough wastages is recycled from homes and this problem will be solved just by the governments and I completely agree with them.
First of all, if some strict legislation are set especially in developing countries, which are produce more than a milliard tones of wastage yearly, and aware citizens about detriment of this amount of garbage also the authorities consider sever fine for negligence, most of them will be abide the rules. For instance Singapore set some lows for their citizens and they can overcome with this problem in less than one year and now it is well-known as the cleanest country in the Asia.
In addition, I strongly believe that if there are some departments and organs like municipalities and they start to cooperate with people in this issue and consider some separate bines for different kinds of wastages after a while it is become ordinary among people and all of them start to separating the wastages. In deed social media has become more popular among all ages by a year so, it a good idea to make some clips to announce citizens about the benefices of recycling and intensive them to recycling the garbage spontaneously.
Finally, waste recycling and people’s participation in it is a moot issue among people but I strictly claim that the government should impose some laws and set penalties for offenders as well as traits culture by spreading some impressive announcement in social media.

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Probably the most worrying threat to our environment at the present time is the plenty of waste which produces by people. As we move into twenty-first century, an increasing concern for many governments around the world is the rapid deterioration...

Probably the most worrying threat to our environment at the present time is the plenty of waste which produces by people. As we move into twenty-first century, an increasing concern for many governments around the world is the rapid deterioration of the environment and numerous adverse effects on habitat.
In these days, a vast number of people are oblivious to the consequences of dumping waste in rivers and drpping litter in the street. So, it might be hard on the environment. Also, leftover paper, glass and plastic can be reused and people can make sure to dispose of anything they dicard, which might not be one of those factors desertification and deforetaion because researches have shown the latter can cause floods and drought. In spite of these, producing countless waste bring about negative effect on the environment which governments will face considerable problems in not too far future. Moreover, the wildlife habitats are on th3 edge of destruction and many endangered species now face extinction. Nevertheless, eco-worrior and governments are attempting for conserving many incompatible materials with the natural environment have remained. As a result of low recycle, there are excessive soil erosion and pollution in both industrial and non-industrial which emits greenhouse gas.
To sum up, people should be encouraged to more recycling so as protect the environment. Due to the fact that people do not tend recycling, governments can make it compulsory for each citizen by enforcing the strict laws. Consequently, it can either open the door to healthy place or can be highly beneficial to those generations who will come to.

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some sentences are difficult to understand due to lack of precision, there are also minor errors. use the cohesive devices more naturally. some sentences have a tendency to go off topic
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The population of the world recently reached 7 billion. Tons of trash is produced and collected every day and an efficient system needed to depose it in a safe way. Garbage that are made of plastic or glass take a long time to decompose in...

The population of the world recently reached 7 billion. Tons of trash is produced and collected every day and an efficient system needed to depose it in a safe way. Garbage that are made of plastic or glass take a long time to decompose in nature. Therefore, the best method for preventing the nature pollution is to recycle produced trash. This method help to solve the problem of deposing some garbage which are derived from plastic and glass.
Many years ago, Iranian government managed to persuade people to separate home rubbish according to their material such as paper, glass, plastic or even food waste. This system of collecting trash helped to recycle them conveniently and efficiently. Special containers for each type of garbage were delivered to all families and city garbage men asked people to separate and get home trash in this new method. There were lots of advertisements and news in television, radio and city billboards to encourage Iranians for performing this new method of collecting rubbish. Unfortunately, people do not pay attention at all to this system of gathering rubbish nowadays. Maybe it takes their time to separate rubbish based on type.
For this reason, it is essential to create new law for recycling home rubbish. Iranians obey human rights, so legal laws requires for organizing and performing this useful system in community. More spending money for this system, more benefits for the whole nation. We must remember we can conserve life when we keep the earth clean.
In brief, I believe that it is necessary to teach people the recycling system of home garbage by legal laws.

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as much as your examples support your point, you should try to present them in a brief manner, some of them are either too long or focus too much on details.
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Waste recycling has become a very substantial issue among people and government alike. The fact that whether government should imposed citizen by strict laws or allowing them to perform deliberately has brought contentious challenge. I personally...

Waste recycling has become a very substantial issue among people and government alike. The fact that whether government should imposed citizen by strict laws or allowing them to perform deliberately has brought contentious challenge. I personally side with the grope supporting legislation by government authorities.
First and foremost, recycling waste materials directly related to environmental crisis mentioned as an irreparable damage. This problem does not wait to enhance public awareness to carry out gradual measures. It needs immediate attention to obstacle the growth of upcoming disaster. Hence, obligation should be the best and quickest way playing as a deterrence to this calamity.
Moreover, no one can deny the effectiveness of a harsh punishment to insert a new habit into a society. Laws can be regarded chiefly in play with shaping a new norm or behave. After compelling wearing a seatbelt, people tend more to wear their seatbelts despite they know about their effect on their survival. They accustomed themselves even if they do not really satisfied with.
Lately, admitting the point that normally people forget to divide their trash into recycled or non-recycled due to lack of time or their negligence. Thereby, we should no expect they perform this essential measure on a regular basis. In this occasion government should use their authorities to enforced mandatory action.
To recap, I am personally of the opinion that government potentially be responsible to control this perilous situation by enacting some environmental laws to manage people laxity and eliminating their disobedience and impeding the growth of this possible problem

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Waste recycling has become a very substantial issue among people and government alike. The fact that whether government should imposed citizen by strict laws or allowing them to perform deliberately has brought contentious challenge. I personally...

Waste recycling has become a very substantial issue among people and government alike. The fact that whether government should imposed citizen by strict laws or allowing them to perform deliberately has brought contentious challenge. I personally side with the grope supporting legislation by government authorities.
First and foremost, recycling waste materials directly related to environmental crisis mentioned as an irreparable damage. This problem does not wait to enhance public awareness to carry out gradual measures. It needs immediate attention to obstacle the growth of upcoming disaster. Hence, obligation should be the best and quickest way playing as a deterrence to this calamity.
Moreover, no one can deny the effectiveness of a harsh punishment to insert a new habit into a society. Laws can be regarded chiefly in play with shaping a new norm or behave. After compelling wearing a seatbelt, people tend more to wear their seatbelts despite they know about their effect on their survival. They accustomed themselves even if they do not really satisfied with.
Lately, admitting the point that normally people forget to divide their trash into recycled or non-recycled due to lack of time or their negligence. Thereby, we should no expect they perform this essential measure on a regular basis. In this occasion government should use their authorities to enforced mandatory action.
To recap, I am personally of the opinion that government potentially be responsible to control this perilous situation by enacting some environmental laws to manage people laxity and eliminating their disobedience and impeding the growth of this possible problem

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attempts have been made to use complex forms. some sentences are difficult to understand. minor grammatical slips exist. major aspects of the prompt are covered.
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While city hall used to dispose waste on landfill, the last decades have seen a rise of attempts to recycle more values of waste people produce. It seems recycling process could be started from our houses and requires government's guidelines.

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While city hall used to dispose waste on landfill, the last decades have seen a rise of attempts to recycle more values of waste people produce. It seems recycling process could be started from our houses and requires government's guidelines.

Waste recycling, as a crucial environmentally friendly job, should be accomplished by government. It means that in order to have a clean earth, government should standardise and employ up-to-date equipment which can be helpful to recycle disposals. To illustrate, if garbage collectors be equipped to separated sections, to collect liquid disposals exactly separated from solid objects, it would be beneficial to manage wastes for recycling purposes. So, this idea shows that recycling in one of the most significant responsibilities of government that should be taken.

However, to claim the recycling aims, people should be participated in this process because the establishment fail to succeed lonely. To do this, government should encourage people to separate their waste periodically. Although forcing people by legislating strict laws to recycle some of their wastes could be potentially beneficial, encouraging them by advertising and presenting practical solutions to absorb them may be more effective. For example, TV advertisements concerning recycling methods and distributing facilities such as advanced waste bins can learn people essential things about how recycling should be done.

To conclude, recycling is a complicated process which cannot be legalised as a law but should be managed by both government and people. Also, I completely disagree with legalising it and I believe that it is a vital task for each government.

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most sentences are coherent with a good usage of connectives. however, you should be mindful of your grammar as there are some obvious errors
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In the developed world,increasing population caused to excessive waste production.It brings about the environment has been threatened with demolition and reveals the importance of recycling more than ever.Some individual believe that authorities...

In the developed world,increasing population caused to excessive waste production.It brings about the environment has been threatened with demolition and reveals the importance of recycling more than ever.Some individual believe that authorities should lay down legal necessities that people reprocess more of their waste.In my view,this is one of the ways but not the only way.
On one hand,it is clear that any government attempt to make a distinctive society for the welfare of citizens.This requires strict rules in some items like environment.Decision makers try to minimize environmetal damage.One of the methods is the people are obligated to recycle their waste, for example they should come apart dry garbags and wet garbags.Also,dry wastes like plastic,glass,bottle or paper should be separated.It seems to be time consuming and unpleasant for them.
On the other hand,it goes without saying that recycling is the most ot the challening issues between governments and nations in today's world.There are several reasons that the governes diminish the impact of this challenge.At the beginning,the most significant approach that has most effect is educatin.The adminstrations can produce educational programs and broadcast them through communication medium like tv,radio or social networks.This helps people to become aware and participated in the recovery cycle.Another procedure is teaching to children in school.Recycling can be taught as one of the school curriculumn.Students need to learn recycling to help the government in development their society.it will cause to decline the government's costs in the future.In fact,the cure for the incident must be done.
In conclusion,environmental maintenance is a two-way relationship between the states and the nations.The authorities are obliged to present required training in this context and people should help the governers reduce their worth.

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it is a good idea to write in a way that each paragraph has a focused central topic. key aspects of the task have been discussed . work on your accuracy to avoid minor errors
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It is considered by many that there are not enough recycled waste from home. They believe that should regulate for this order. This essay, agree that this is a government responsibility and should take essential steps for addressing this issue by...

It is considered by many that there are not enough recycled waste from home. They believe that should regulate for this order. This essay, agree that this is a government responsibility and should take essential steps for addressing this issue by enhancing people’s awareness and setting some rules for this program.
Some people have less information about recycling. They not only do not know which of wastes are recyclable, but they also do not how to do this in suitable way. They throw out all of wastes together without separating them. According Urmia University study, more than 75 percent of people have not enough knowledge about recycling programs and leave their home wastes away without recycling. So, this I a government duty that provide training programs for recycling by Media such as TV programs or social places like mosque and theatre centers. In this way, people have access grate information about this program and the amount of recycling products will increase.
Governments also should set some legal rules for recycling. They can put rewards for families whom separate their home wastes in order to recycling. For instance, in my city Mayer have regulated 200,000 Rials rewards for families whom participate in this program. In the developed countries, there are beneficial rules for recycling like Denmark, United Kingdom and so on. Therefore, these rules either will have significant role in the cleaning of environment or, will promote government’s economics.
In conclusion, although families are important in producing of recycled products, but in my opinion the role of governments are remarkable than families by regulating suitable rules and rising people’s awareness.

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chief points are addressed, but try to write the supporting sentences in a focused manner so that your paragraph possesses one central idea
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Humans have been damaging the environment and neutral habitant since they developed urbanization. One of the most brilliant devastating effects in urban environments is producing too much trash in homes which most of them abandoned not recycled....

Humans have been damaging the environment and neutral habitant since they developed urbanization. One of the most brilliant devastating effects in urban environments is producing too much trash in homes which most of them abandoned not recycled. Some people feel that the only way to increase amount of recycled material is to make it a legal necessity. It remains to scrutinize different aspect of this issue in general detail.
First and foremost according to recent researches have been done by environmental friendly organizations the amount of trash produced by individuals who are living in big cities has a dramatic increase in past century. Moreover a great deal of a company use catchy packs and materials for their products, most of which are not well worth to recycle and lived in environment as a waste option. About 2000 kg plastic bags are gathered every month in Hamadan one little City located in Iran.
In order to reverse the case government authorities laid some rules down to compel people lowering the amount of waste objects by recycling them. This issue can play a key role in heightening the People's participation in decreasing the wastes. Results in increasing of recycled objects can finally lead to saving energy consumption. In one of the most important survey conducted by GDY Institute at least 85% of participant admitted that they would take part in waste recycling activities if the government make them to do this.
Having summarize all the reasons about waste recycling and the rules which are laid down, I believe that compelling people to recycle their waste is not an appropriate way and beside that governments can do more incentives along with raising cultural awareness and holding educational workshops to encourage people become more alert about this problem.

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frequent grammatical errors . the writer takes a position with relevant supporting statements. focus on accuracy
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Nowadays, recycling plays a significant role in the society. The government should finance recycling making individuals to observe laws with their wastes. I strongly agree that governments should take the law into their own hands in order to...

Nowadays, recycling plays a significant role in the society. The government should finance recycling making individuals to observe laws with their wastes. I strongly agree that governments should take the law into their own hands in order to enhance efficiency of recycling process.
On the one hand, the government should definitely devote attention to people’s wastes. In other words, people tend to become more waste-conscious because of various laws and different penalties. Therefore, this action clearly saves natural resources which are vital for the next generation. According to research done in the united state universities, children learn from their parents how to do their daily works. So obviously their parents are the best role-model imitating. Not only do they learn but also help not to restrict and extinct range of natural resources.
On the other hand, the cost of recycling is determined by economic sector which can be spent on other integral parts for example, public services that increases quality of life. In contrast, these processes create new job opportunities for specific companies to advertise and award prizes for the best division of dry from wet wastes which have direct effect on encouraging people to treat more cautiously about wastes. Furthermore the amount of waste from homes will decreases as a result, instead of spending a great deal of money for recycling , government can save budgets for other facilities. Overall, without legislation, utilizing wastes are impossible.
In conclusion, I believe that the government should allocate a large part of its budget on such urgent subject of the society related to people’s attitudes. There are lots of debates about this matter which should have been considered and applied practically.

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all parts of the question are dealt with. some parts could have been developed more. acceptable cohesion. minor errors exist
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It is true that, home waste recycling is not satisfactorily sufficient. While I agree that governmental legislation related to recycling program is a functional way, I believe that there are other effective form to encourage people to recycle...

It is true that, home waste recycling is not satisfactorily sufficient. While I agree that governmental legislation related to recycling program is a functional way, I believe that there are other effective form to encourage people to recycle more.

On one hand, we have been seen that when government set roles on something people take it more serious. For example from when the authorities demand the producer to label their packaging whit amount of recycled material in the products, consumers choose more environmentally conscious options. As well as we can see increasing number of recycling rates in container deposit legislation program, which include a refund for return of certain containers. In this program buying product in containers such as glasses, plastics and metals involve a small surcharge that can just be reclaimed by returning such containers to collection points.

On the other hand, some people argue that impose strict law upon this context is unviable in the long run. These ones believe that it is better to invest in raise awareness about the detrimental effects of dumping such amount of non-biodegradable waste and the involved costs; even from school ages. We can also encourage community involvement in recycling program for instance, By giving them several rubbish bins to separate wastes and collecting them in a regular basis Or, take full advantage of eco-worrier participation to give households an insight on economical concern and environmental importance of recycling plan.

In conclusion, although strict legislations is really beneficial in amount of people’s participation in recycling program, it seems that social pressure and incentive program are of long-term survival goals.

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be careful and try to check each sentence before attempting the next one as grammatical slips occasionally can be found
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Rubbish is well known as black gold; Therefore it is of the essence to recycle waste by the aim of reuse the vast amount of waste .Although when it comes to legislating a law for recycling people have divided opinions ,it seems that law could be a...

Rubbish is well known as black gold; Therefore it is of the essence to recycle waste by the aim of reuse the vast amount of waste .Although when it comes to legislating a law for recycling people have divided opinions ,it seems that law could be a contributing factor to enhance the capacity of recycling.

It is indisputable fact that law means compulsory. In terms of psychology, when forced to do something, people rebel against it. The figures show people participate in voluntary deeds rather than compulsory ones. Optional activities, furthermore, enhance people commitment to fulfill the achievement. For instance, people are bound to create groups to boost individuals’ awareness leading to far more effort to recycle or even a shift away from discard waste toward recycling vast amount of waste.
Nonetheless, legislating rules will bring significant plus point for improve recycling. Some determents such as notification and fine ensure authorities that people observe the law. Despite continuing by force, this eco-friendly trend is likely to be an integral part of culture in years ahead; consequently the long lasting environmentally friendly tendency will entwine with our culture which worth any kind of enforcements. Unfasten seat belt, for example, was a major reason for driver’s death in Iran, after enforcing a rule, a dramatic diminish was reported due to obey the rules of fasten seat belt and after a while it embedded in Iranian driving culture.
Equally importantly, though, imposing a law accelerate inform people from all kind of walks. People, media, when government enforce a rule about recycling, would talk about the ways of recycling and find a state of the art method to facilitate it and enhance its productivity as well. Therefore it is likely to become citizen’s obligation that all people even isolated one have to accomplish that. A cursory examination of the amount of recycling, when it was introduced in Iranian media reinforces this belief that law could be a dependable supporter for enhance recycling.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that any legislation associated with recycling play pivotal role to improve the capacity of recycling.

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Ideas are to the point and there is a clear progression. however, minor slips can be found in terms of grammar
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Waste recycling is most widely discussed issue around the globe especially the environmentalist.
Many of arguments could observed among people and as well as media whether people take part in recycling process or the government should enact a...

Waste recycling is most widely discussed issue around the globe especially the environmentalist.
Many of arguments could observed among people and as well as media whether people take part in recycling process or the government should enact a law for it. I intend my opinion that government should impose laws and severely fine the violation of it to ensure proper waste recycling
Waste recycling is a great way for preserve environment and reuse many of valuable things. Some domestic garbage have detrimental substance that harm to surroundings and can pollute the environment. If every citizen take responsibility to participate in the waste recycling , the waste management as well as preserving a green environment would become easier.
however, people have tendency to ignore many important tasks be it for themselves or for the society as a whole. For instance, they always complain which how garbage separate carefully and category them. Thereby, they ignore waste recycling . As a result, The government not only should be leader to aware people for importance recycling but also legislate . Unfortunately, Most of people have lifestyle who harm to our environment like deforestation or ignore waste recycling cause our society suffer from lack of many of laws for protection of our environment. As a result, people are careless about important protection of the environment and this has created a throwaway society in our country . this is why proper laws are required
To conclude, most of the citizens in our country don’t know or ignore about the importance of saving the environment and how individual efforts of recycling can improve environmental conditions

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obvious grammatical errors without reducing communication.ideas are logical .
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Waste recycling and people’s participation in it is a moot issue and a lot of arguments could be observed among people as well as in the media regarding whether people should spontaneously take part in recycling process or the government should...

Waste recycling and people’s participation in it is a moot issue and a lot of arguments could be observed among people as well as in the media regarding whether people should spontaneously take part in recycling process or the government should make it a legal obligation. I personally believe that government should impose laws and severely fine the violation of it to ensure proper waste recycling.

First, waste recycling is done by the state and citizens are expected to properly divide the recyclable and non-recyclable wastages and pack them accordingly while dumping them in recycle bins. They are expected to cooperate greatly in the recycling process. However, it is a strange fact that many people do not participate in it spontaneously either from their negligence or from their lack of time to do so.

Second, it is a harsh truth that people in many cases abide by a rule only from the concern of punishment or fine, not from their conscience. For instance, when the penalty for traffic rule violation went up, people started following them in my city. Similarly, if laws are introduced and the authority starts penalising, more people would recycle more of their wastages.

Third, waste recycling is a very handy process to save our environment and we already have many rules to protect our environment. While deforesting is a severe crime in my country, there is no visible law for not recycling the waste. This is why people are very careless about their waste production and this has created a throwaway society in our country. This is why proper laws are required.

In conclusion, most of the citizens in our country already know about the importance of saving the environment and how individual efforts of recycling can improve environmental conditions. Since many of them still do not participate in waste recycling, there is no alternative than to impose laws to have this done.

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throughout the response all parts of the question are addressed. very good flexibility and cohesion
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Waste recycling is the process of converting used materials into new ones. Despite its importance, it inherits from people 's negligence. Recycling the waste and people's participation in it is a controversial issue. Still, there is a lot of...

Waste recycling is the process of converting used materials into new ones. Despite its importance, it inherits from people 's negligence. Recycling the waste and people's participation in it is a controversial issue. Still, there is a lot of arguments about whether people should spontaneously take part in it or laws should be determined by the government. I personally believe that making a rule by the government persuade people to obey it. Because normally people do not have time to recycle their wastages.
First, effective recycling starts with households. In many countries, the authorities provide for households bin bags with labels on them. Households, afterward sort out the waste themselves and place them in the right bags for collection. This makes the work less difficult and the authorities can give the people some prizes. For instance, the more bin bags they collect, the more prizes they would receive from them.
Second, by increasing population, a lot of throwaway items would have produced. The government should determine fine or punishment for people who do not participate in recycling. So, rule violation causes they get into trouble. For example, when the penalty for traffic rule violation went up, people started following them in my city. Similarly, if the government starts penalising, more people will recycle more of their wastages.
Third, we have many rules to protect our environment, whereas there is no visible law for not recycling the waste. This leads to people being careless about recycling the wastages. There is a wide range of services and facilities to recycle domestic waste if people concerned about it. This is why proper laws are required.
In conclusion, everybody is conscience waste recycling has a key impact on our environment, but as people are busy all day long this issue has missed its importance in every individual's life. So considering rules by authorities leads to people have more tendency dumping their wastages in bin bags.

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regardless of small grammatical errors, your essay addresses main points with an acceptable range of cohesive devices. try not to get affected by your native language, for example in paragraph 3
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